kriebel17

The music builds up great at the beginning and the guitars add so much. Overall it rocks! The one thing I would work on is getting the vox out front a little more. Towards the end you sing louder and it is much better but it sounded to me that you could boost the earlier vocals a bit, they were a bit lost in the guitars and drums. Cool track though, I liked it!

Wayne

Nice !

Very GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd

Instantly sounds radio friendly, a dog-eared blueprint.

I hear what you're going for with the vocals, but I think they need a more aggressive voice.

Auto-tune. Damn.

I think your writing of the lyrics and phrasing is good, you just need someone else doing them. Again, what you wrote was very fitting and well done. The music was pretty good too.

Evan

i look foreword to seeing what else you can do :)

In my honest opinion, im half and half on this. The music aspect sounds good, with decent lyrics, and i was getting into it, but then this overwhelming autotune comes in right near the end and makes me wonder why? it was fine without it in the beginning.

always can be better man, so dont quit!

I simply like this song...no matter of autotune and machinery tones...hope you give better state to your friend with this number...

Best, Danke

very nice track

Good tune - needs arrangement and modulation of the vocals as well as a bridge. The song holds up just needs some tunesmithing. I concur with JJWeeks.
-clindsay

Its Really Tore mt heart

Really pleasing guitar work!

All the best___Orlando

Good tune man, reminds me a lot of something I would write. Good job!!

Kyle

marvelous guitar arpeggio , considered usage of strings & frets of guitars ,and that Pad which comes and go & makes this package warm an warmer ..very welldone kriebel17 .respects.___Behnam

cool song i try to wride song to butt they never get so good. good job

who;s track is this?

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Brilliant. I would love to use the track for one of my professional artists- willing to work out a negotiation. would you be able to send over the track?

best.

This is one of your better ones! Autotune works really well for your voice!

Could I get a copy of this to play around with light backing vocals to add another layer to it? write4heaven@hotmail.com

oops, just read the description. You create on the spot- that's really good!!!

In some parts, this one sounds a bit offtune vocally Kriebel17- but I like the emotion you put into your voice in the chorus and the quiet calm verses at the beginning are nice too! I vote for a second take on this song, because I think you can get more on tune if you rehearsed. NIcely done, however! You wrote and arranged the lyrics/vocals?

The musicians did an excellent job, do they have a page we can comment on as well?

hey man

That's brilliant music, but don't sing, please... :-(

I hope I didn't hurt you...

Danke

You did a wonderful job!

Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?

This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!

There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!

Great job, Kriebel17!!

Has promise...I think this track would benefit greatly with the addition of a drum track of some kind. Would help fill it in some. jmo

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Sadly, sentiments most of us are familiar with. Wonderful track Great vocals.

John