Made 3 attempts to listen to your track before I write stg...first of all, I never heard such an interesting and unique track in here til my 4 years registration...very creative and cool track with great thoughts at the background...technically hope you don't want me to advice or critique stg cause it's better than any of my tracks...
Musically my only criticism is the 3.30-4.40 part which is too long (for me)...
This is 9.5/10 :-)
What is stg ? a comment ? only the first sentence and my brain blow XD.
"first of all, I never heard such an interesting and unique track in here til my 4 years registration" just o_O
Those words are pretty meaningful for me. That means I will for sure keep this track on LM :)
"technically hope you don't want me to advice or critique stg cause it's better than any of my tracks..."
if there are something you can't put with me is technically I have maybe 1 or 5 knowledges about music and most are from my Physic class ( how waves are produce with the freq,Db, etc...) Im sure you are way better than me for that point !
"Musically my only criticism is the 3.30-4.40 part which is too long (for me)..."
Thats true the final part is pretty long the main goal his to tells you about the need of a future update since this is pretty buggy and slow a bit like outdated softwares.
Also the note I got 9.5/10 is way more than I thought
Since I could say you love that one I will tell you a secret and exclusive thing who nobody will know except you and me... The description ends with a opening as for this tune its ends with "Updating" I may actually make that update as a sequel. Hope the new one will be good has the prequel (this one).
Finally I can't thank you enough for that comment ! this is just awesome.
Peace and Handshakes
p.s dam 3 times? 15 min? this is good ! well thats not a exploit. I had to listen this about 12 hours and more non stop to make it XD. But its still good.
This song make me feel like the old me again!!!! (felt kinda good). The mix is really nice especially the ring ring part, it almost got me. The description is kinda freaky and dam funny.
Thanks dear SexyBeast, thanks that kind of comment. The mix is probably the force of this song like ER said this is pretty wide (frequency)and I had to put every single sounds in the right place so the mastering step was pretty long compared to the composition step.
I love that kind of description im kinda annoyed of standard description who just tell us mainly the genre and why the artist created it. To be honest I think my description is too freaky so I lose plays because ppl are afraid to got the Mobius 2.01b virus (totally FAKE)
This is great. It's got a late 80's/early 90's industrial feel to it. Which was exactly the time I was into it, so I tend to like this one quite a bit.
It's definitely a pretty dark tune. The beat is solid and drives along nicely.
I agree with Cru. The phone samples are a nice touch.
As far as the mix itself, it's very clean, and everything is spaced perfectly. I don't hear anything crowding anything else.
I made a bunch of cinematic tunes so its was time for a "electronic" one. What i love with that one it its keep the cinematic aspect of telling a story or setting a environment.
so its what happened.
Well if we base on my description I think its normal for being dark :) and like you I love dark thing. Im agree with you the beat is awesome its like glitch (bugs).
Since Mobius 2.01b infect phones around the word I think its a good idea to put phone tones from UK, US and Canada :)
Like ER said this track is extremely wide so ... the space I had a lot XD
Seriously, I think im better for mixing than before and all that from all the feedbacks I got so far.
Again thanks for you to send me this feedback
I was a bit inspired by you from your dark electro industrial tune like "Cyclamen Laid In Stone - Say Goodbye"
I feel infected. ;-) The mix is very nice, I like the distortion, it adds to the ambiance. The phone ring samples are a nice touch. You have described this and executed this perfectly. Nice Job Monsieur
Cru
Thanks god someone did write a comment here !I was kinda losing hope.
"I feel infected" :)
Thanks for that feedback I really like it.
Im also happy about your distortion opinion.
At least now im not alone !
Also, im happy to see than my description didn't freak you out from playing this im kinda sure some ppl thinks what the description says is true.
The phone samples are too realistic since I got prank myself when I play that music with my phone if I start when the ring ring is here I think I got a call XD.
I laughed more than I should have at this comment.
The song sounds like it's clipping at some parts (unless thats the synth sound??) This mix is so WIDE. I love it. What DAW do you use? This is quite unique in the best way possible.
"I laughed more than I should have at this comment." you are not alone....
There are 2 sources who are clipping (to reproduce we are inside the net nor phones) the first is the bass drum who I use massive distortion (start at 25 sec) the second one is a weird pad I found called Pomona in Harmor.( in the intro and the last part)
The DAW I use is Fl studio 12. I found the way to make envelope pretty easy and since im visual I love seeing everything on tracks.The master is neat too
Thanks for that "This is quite unique in the best way possible." this like a objective for me I hate music without layering of story inside...
"Good thing in still use smoke signals. Haha." just lol :)
For a electronic track I think its the weirdest one but idk where to put that track. I really love than each sounds here tell the Mobius story.
Tanks dear Tre24, you are like a mentor for me I means since you are pro to the domain of genre ( trap, electro...) if you are liking this this is should because im in the good way for that domain.
Anyway being on smoke signals still the perfect way to don't get attacked by mobius XD
Very cool stuff this.
It has great depth and mystery and adventure dripping from it.
Like the crunchy ending too.
Yeah great little piece ... could have hung in there a little while longer.
"I was being abducted by aliens" I think you start to be crazy due to your resents Works (traps). A bit like me after that work or my favorite The Hellquake.
Good built with the mixed drum kits, like the timing of different patterns goes nice to the story view.
Interesting use of orchestral instruments, what you have them playing gives a good ambient for a sequel. Sounds like an intro to a game, where can i play? ha. Thanks for sharing, cool sounds. Peace.
Thanks dear Designed, I glad you was the timing of different patterns since its part of the concept (time).
Also I somewhat found this track trolling us ! I will explain at 1:36 min if you think the melody is made with strings you are wrong. the first note is Strings with Brass, the second one is only Strings, the 2 next is Brass only, after its both again to finish with brass only. If you do not pay attention to this detail your brain may think its just a normal straight melody. In that track I made the Brass look more like Strings.
All that to explain, I hate flat tune with no story or hidden thing who you may need to re listen multiple times to just heard all the details.
That thing is kind my signature for each of my track.
About that track I was thinking about its was the Prequel of the Prequel of the Sequel of Razing Chronos. The Prequel is mainly the time machine working but in this one you can may see the inventor who build it.
Thanks for that feedback.
I will Also profit to say i may upgrade it making him longer fixing the intro choirs (maybe too lourd) and changing the outro for something better.
Somebody had a little too much time today ehh? It gets breathtakingly scary in the second half in a brilliant way. Those synth stabs and orchestra hits mon dieu! This is what nations need to play too each others militaries at the front line to discourage them from fighting.
great creativity, I think you have found the trouble you have been looking for!
Cru
Thanks dear Cruce, hope you know why I put this on weird XD
the Stabs sounds is from Mortal kombat and the stab melody is from a deep place in my brain I have to admit this is pretty confusing having those persistent stabs and the Nyan cat melody in background.
I think this will be the most overpowered weapon to force them to listen this days and nights could make them crazy.
And I was a bit raging about Razing Time concept so I made that one to relax XD.
Just banged this in my Favourites box Bro.Love the bass sounds and the syncopation at 1:00 is great.Nice production coming out of my monitors from this
Very clean sounding I like that reminds me of a " Ben Hur " kinda
groove...Nice...
I could see a King, pick one...Stomping around the Castal wanting
someones head...Hahahaha... :)
It has plenty of bottom end, most systems in Movie Houses will add
house EQ anyway, Freq graphics are always bumped in the bottom end...So it's best you don't add it...
Never saw Ben Hur but its seems to be a roman action movie like Gladiator.
And the "I could see a King, pick one...Stomping around the Castal wanting
someones head...Hahahaha... :)" part its not a bit sadistic anyay kinda funny to see those images XD
I can totally imagine this in a movie, certainly a scene during a war or fight of some kind. Your description was a bit confusing, but I'm glad I hit PLAY anyway. :-)
i liked this , especially mid part with mysterious sounds..
it can be weird but i imagined researchers who try to find the mystery of mummies and pyramids. :D
Hello dear Prince, the mid part is also my favorite one I did a pretty well done progression also this change about the main melody who you hear multiple times
Also its not weird as there are a dinosaur growl in this music the researchers may try to find the only Archeopterix alive today and for sure there are enigma to solve in pyramids and one of them include a mummies :)
Hello dear Tomzovic Thank you for this kind and simple but always good to have comment.
Like I may wrote like 100 times I pretty love new persons who write me comment.
Since I saw your profile your bio seems to be similar to mine when i started to produce and composing musics.
So I wish you the best of the success ever ! Do not give up more you experiment more you will have your own clue to make a monster like my The Hellquake.
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
Made 3 attempts to listen to your track before I write stg...first of all, I never heard such an interesting and unique track in here til my 4 years registration...very creative and cool track with great thoughts at the background...technically hope you don't want me to advice or critique stg cause it's better than any of my tracks...
Musically my only criticism is the 3.30-4.40 part which is too long (for me)...
This is 9.5/10 :-)
Handshake, Danke
"first of all, I never heard such an interesting and unique track in here til my 4 years registration" just o_O
Those words are pretty meaningful for me. That means I will for sure keep this track on LM :)
"technically hope you don't want me to advice or critique stg cause it's better than any of my tracks..."
if there are something you can't put with me is technically I have maybe 1 or 5 knowledges about music and most are from my Physic class ( how waves are produce with the freq,Db, etc...) Im sure you are way better than me for that point !
"Musically my only criticism is the 3.30-4.40 part which is too long (for me)..."
Thats true the final part is pretty long the main goal his to tells you about the need of a future update since this is pretty buggy and slow a bit like outdated softwares.
Also the note I got 9.5/10 is way more than I thought
Since I could say you love that one I will tell you a secret and exclusive thing who nobody will know except you and me... The description ends with a opening as for this tune its ends with "Updating" I may actually make that update as a sequel. Hope the new one will be good has the prequel (this one).
Finally I can't thank you enough for that comment ! this is just awesome.
Peace and Handshakes
p.s dam 3 times? 15 min? this is good ! well thats not a exploit. I had to listen this about 12 hours and more non stop to make it XD. But its still good.
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
Great job, man!!
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I love that kind of description im kinda annoyed of standard description who just tell us mainly the genre and why the artist created it. To be honest I think my description is too freaky so I lose plays because ppl are afraid to got the Mobius 2.01b virus (totally FAKE)
Also Thanks for your support.
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Peace XD
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
This is great. It's got a late 80's/early 90's industrial feel to it. Which was exactly the time I was into it, so I tend to like this one quite a bit.
It's definitely a pretty dark tune. The beat is solid and drives along nicely.
I agree with Cru. The phone samples are a nice touch.
As far as the mix itself, it's very clean, and everything is spaced perfectly. I don't hear anything crowding anything else.
Good job, man!
Take care.
V.
I made a bunch of cinematic tunes so its was time for a "electronic" one. What i love with that one it its keep the cinematic aspect of telling a story or setting a environment.
so its what happened.
Well if we base on my description I think its normal for being dark :) and like you I love dark thing. Im agree with you the beat is awesome its like glitch (bugs).
Since Mobius 2.01b infect phones around the word I think its a good idea to put phone tones from UK, US and Canada :)
Like ER said this track is extremely wide so ... the space I had a lot XD
Seriously, I think im better for mixing than before and all that from all the feedbacks I got so far.
Again thanks for you to send me this feedback
I was a bit inspired by you from your dark electro industrial tune like "Cyclamen Laid In Stone - Say Goodbye"
See ya and peace
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
Cru
"I feel infected" :)
Thanks for that feedback I really like it.
Im also happy about your distortion opinion.
At least now im not alone !
Also, im happy to see than my description didn't freak you out from playing this im kinda sure some ppl thinks what the description says is true.
The phone samples are too realistic since I got prank myself when I play that music with my phone if I start when the ring ring is here I think I got a call XD.
Peace and thanks for this support dear cruce.
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
I laughed more than I should have at this comment.
The song sounds like it's clipping at some parts (unless thats the synth sound??) This mix is so WIDE. I love it. What DAW do you use? This is quite unique in the best way possible.
ER
There are 2 sources who are clipping (to reproduce we are inside the net nor phones) the first is the bass drum who I use massive distortion (start at 25 sec) the second one is a weird pad I found called Pomona in Harmor.( in the intro and the last part)
The DAW I use is Fl studio 12. I found the way to make envelope pretty easy and since im visual I love seeing everything on tracks.The master is neat too
Thanks for that "This is quite unique in the best way possible." this like a objective for me I hate music without layering of story inside...
Thanks for that epic comment dear EpicRecord !
on Mobius 2 01b by Byleth
Nice mix.
TRE24-
For a electronic track I think its the weirdest one but idk where to put that track. I really love than each sounds here tell the Mobius story.
Tanks dear Tre24, you are like a mentor for me I means since you are pro to the domain of genre ( trap, electro...) if you are liking this this is should because im in the good way for that domain.
Anyway being on smoke signals still the perfect way to don't get attacked by mobius XD
on Razing Time by Byleth
It has great depth and mystery and adventure dripping from it.
Like the crunchy ending too.
Yeah great little piece ... could have hung in there a little while longer.
I may extended that tune a bit like I said on my previous rely but not too much or this will turn, in my opinion, a bit too repetitive.
Anyway thanks to enjoy this track and send me this feedback.
Peace
on The Violent Factor by Byleth
nice one dude.
Thanks for this friendly feedback.
on Razing Time by Byleth
LOL. Very cool track man
TRE24-
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168938
Seriously thanks for taking your precious time to listen and write me a funny feedback.
And just to show how I could be crazy while I work on my track:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/169398
That one was just made to help me to be sane :)
And how know maybe you will like those !
Peace
on Razing Time by Byleth
Interesting use of orchestral instruments, what you have them playing gives a good ambient for a sequel. Sounds like an intro to a game, where can i play? ha. Thanks for sharing, cool sounds. Peace.
Also I somewhat found this track trolling us ! I will explain at 1:36 min if you think the melody is made with strings you are wrong. the first note is Strings with Brass, the second one is only Strings, the 2 next is Brass only, after its both again to finish with brass only. If you do not pay attention to this detail your brain may think its just a normal straight melody. In that track I made the Brass look more like Strings.
All that to explain, I hate flat tune with no story or hidden thing who you may need to re listen multiple times to just heard all the details.
That thing is kind my signature for each of my track.
About that track I was thinking about its was the Prequel of the Prequel of the Sequel of Razing Chronos. The Prequel is mainly the time machine working but in this one you can may see the inventor who build it.
Thanks for that feedback.
I will Also profit to say i may upgrade it making him longer fixing the intro choirs (maybe too lourd) and changing the outro for something better.
Peace
on The Grim Reaper Extended by Byleth
I take that as a compliment
Peace
on The Future Cat by Byleth
and you are right the variation on that track is like we change the game but with the Nyan Cat melody in background :)
Peace
on The Violent Factor by Byleth
I could try to make a another upgrade but honestly I found that one pretty scary.
Peace
on The Future Cat by Byleth
Good job and keep up your great work. (GO HoTS!!!!!!)
And thanks to be honest that track was my pause for Razing Time so that was a quick one but I did like the dark ambiance I created
Peace
on Razing Time by Byleth
Hello mate,
This is another good one from a pro like!!
Brilliant.
Well done.
Jamid
I glad you enjoyed the effort I putted to compose this tricky one.
I Also hope you like this one as my Razing Chronos
Peace
on The Future Cat by Byleth
Congrats______Orlando
I glad you enjoyed it even its a bit weird.
on The Future Cat by Byleth
great creativity, I think you have found the trouble you have been looking for!
Cru
the Stabs sounds is from Mortal kombat and the stab melody is from a deep place in my brain I have to admit this is pretty confusing having those persistent stabs and the Nyan cat melody in background.
I think this will be the most overpowered weapon to force them to listen this days and nights could make them crazy.
And I was a bit raging about Razing Time concept so I made that one to relax XD.
Hope you somewhat enjoy that remix of nyan cat !
Peace
on Razing Chronos by Byleth
Just for that I will make one track similar to Razing chronos
to honor you.
And you are right its very catchy I love the timpani and orchestra drum worked in tandem.
Finaly feel free to discover other work from other artist.
on The Hellquake by Byleth
Compliments_____Orlando
I think this one is the most professional music I did so far. Im pretty happy to see im not the only one who like that one
Peace dear Orlando
on Monstranum by Byleth
on The Hellquake by Byleth
groove...Nice...
I could see a King, pick one...Stomping around the Castal wanting
someones head...Hahahaha... :)
It has plenty of bottom end, most systems in Movie Houses will add
house EQ anyway, Freq graphics are always bumped in the bottom end...So it's best you don't add it...
I....LIKE IT...
Peace...TG.
And the "I could see a King, pick one...Stomping around the Castal wanting
someones head...Hahahaha... :)" part its not a bit sadistic anyay kinda funny to see those images XD
on The Hellquake by Byleth
My description is like a joke or a prank some description in looperman is the same thing so I wanted to make an original one.
Peace
on The Hellquake by Byleth
it can be weird but i imagined researchers who try to find the mystery of mummies and pyramids. :D
keep it up mate
Also its not weird as there are a dinosaur growl in this music the researchers may try to find the only Archeopterix alive today and for sure there are enigma to solve in pyramids and one of them include a mummies :)
this could be a good plot for a movie
Again thanks for this good comment
take care
on The Hellquake by Byleth
Like I may wrote like 100 times I pretty love new persons who write me comment.
Since I saw your profile your bio seems to be similar to mine when i started to produce and composing musics.
So I wish you the best of the success ever ! Do not give up more you experiment more you will have your own clue to make a monster like my The Hellquake.
Take care dear wolf :)
p.s Im pretty tired right now maybe ..
on The Hellquake by Byleth
Hello mate.
Absolutely amazing track,
Well done mateā¦.favs it goes.
Jamid
The Archeopterix makes that tune way more epic !
btw did my reverse psychology work well in my description ?
Also I profit to say if I got 666 plays or more this masterpiece will be allowed to download :)