AxelStPatience

This is a really heartfelt song you have written. It is delicate and emotional. Very nice lyrics and they are well delivered. The piano is always great to hear, even if only with just the vocals. Listened on my headphones, mix is ok, could use a little eq work, monsterage had a good idea by watching the sibilance, maybe add some de-esser to the vocals. Do you use a pop filter in front of your mic when you sing? If not I recommend buying or even making one.

I like it, it is a really nice ballad!

Wayne

sounds amazing i would also recommend killing the s's or cutting a little on high frequencies... you can also hear your lips, but for this song i think they go perfect cause it feels personal and emotional... anyways its amazing and loved the piano btw! :)

...
Austin , first I wanted to write U should sing closer to microphone ..& also to suggest U always pay attention to your music wave diagram and never let diagram to be steady & montonous & fine drawn ...
but....
no...
I think I was wrong to say them ...
cause U sung such by all your heart , such impressive & frank , that all my words became silent & prefered reticence just to can listen & focus on your simple but heartfelt song ...
thnx for download premission & letting me enjoy this later too more & more ...
and just according to your desciption I'm trying to be usefull as a listener if I want to suggest U to add a sax , or even a cello to this ...
but anyway I should confess that I was surprised by U & your tallents ...
all the best...___Behnam

Hey AustinG

Here's the link to what I did with you song :-)

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/159017

The song has potential. I think you did a great job singing and the piano playing. You need to get the fish half of it loud enough to hear. in other words you mix down need improving. I like the song really I do. Please do not take any offense to my comments.

Hey AG

I've uploaded the tweaked version of your song :-)

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/158803

I agree with danke on this. This is beautiful on it's own! But it's also drawing at the same time, so I probably won't be able to resist :-P

-Søren

I'm not sure if this song needs drums or more instruments...this is stunning on it's own...if there is some techinal problem, we have to lift ourselves up on them cause this is one of the most beautiful song I, (we) ever heard here...

Much respect, Danke

The reverb shows up when you are not singing, you didn't edit that out
before the Mix...If you still have the tracks, that can still be done...
It would really put your voice and keyboard in the right Space...

Peace..TG.

Sounds like you have the basis of a really cool track here. Will be nice to hear it with the drums worked in for some kick.

In the production, I heard a lot of background noise. Kinda like it was playing on an actual record. Not sure what it was but it really distracts from the song. Plus, the volume seems really low so when you hit the vocal peaks, it gets really loud. Piano sounds good.

Smooth everything out and get the drums your after and this has real commercial potential. Good luck.

RW

Hey

Very beautiful emotion piece, even without beat, love it, very nice work on the vocals, great voice...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

I shall give it my best, sir :)

LOL, your lyrics are hilarious. But still made sense...LOL if i was drinking something, the end would of made me spit it out. ha Great work here. peace

Gramo/Neo

Super one...yeah, don't have to overgain those guitars for the true punk rock song...love your stunning voice and the 'I don't care' attitude...

Brilliant number

Recpect, Danke

Hi. Not seen your name on the Loop before.

I hope you get the additional instrumentation you're looking for as I think the vocal here is really good.

Kick drum seems kind of out of time and the other instrumentation is very basic - a bit like a rough demo just tracking the chords of a song.

But the lead vocal has a lot of soul and emotion behind it. Second vocal (female) works really too.

This would sound pretty good as just an acapella.

There's a lot of potential with this track. Did you write it? Did you sing it?

"The night is upon us now" is a good chorus line.

Best of luck.

O my God, what a beautiful vocal)

My bad..I need to go to bed lol

https://soundcloud.com/j-o-d-beats/feat-austin-gallie

My bad..I need to go to bed lol

https://soundcloud.com/j-o-d-beats/feat-austin-gallie

Try this 1

I actually like the auto tune. It's sorts fitting to the track.

Hey Austin, this is what I did to your track...still needs a bit of tweaking ....let me know what think

Peace Jody

https://soundcloud.com/j-o-d-beats/feat-austin-gallie

Ok Austin you have a good voice in the soft sounding department, but can you belt it out for the chorus. The song lacks a significant chorus that will blow away the listener. If (as my spidey sense tells me) you have that kind of voice you can make this song into a memorable pop tune.
lets see what happens.

You have a really cute voice in this track :3

anytime let's work together on some stuff! Would love to collaborate

Well done on this song man. Really loved the lyrics and the simplicity keeps it raw. Can't wait to hear the remixes.
Keep it up, you have a great voice