I agree with hunta on some of the beats, they are tending to overlap, perhaps a slight timing change or, a under play at a lower volume, then let it slice in real hard, 8/10 - you can only get better :)
u are defo getting better. to improve it i would watch the drums because there seems to be an overlap of a few beats. it would also be nice to hear some of those sounds that people don't usually notice aswell. however i really liked some parts of the track. the track gate was superb. I would give it technically 5/10 but for the ideas and musical content i would give it 8/10. keep at it mate. the techincal side probably takes years to get to, i will let u know when i get there.(if i do).
Nice one mate. sorry if i seem a little harsh but if u want 2 get better its the best way to learn.
cheers mate
Hunta
Man you've improved since your first track, the hihats and claps are clear... When the synth changes around 2.10 it sounds got, really uplifting. I'm not so sure about the drums velocity changing, but it's just my opinion.
Good job, keep it up. I'd give you an 8/10
Cheers S.
you remind me of this nintendo times me bitin that frigg'n controller *rofl* great mix with that deep voice thoug! maybe you could change your beat a bit more variations trough the track besides that, good track!
Nice synths you got goin on there. And the sweepy brush sounds on the drums (?) sound wicked. If ya remaster or remix this maybe try boostin the bass up just a bit. Cool stuff mate!
made me want to dance! reminds me of some mortal combat stuff at the beginning! what if you what if you sampled that into your beat! that would be sick! get at me if you end up doing so.
Mos' ReQuest~
I named one of my tracks D-D-D-Dance because I couldn't think of anything better. I can never think of good names for tracks really. I really like that reverb or whatever around 1:05. And as Eshar said the kick at about 2:00 is good. You should make it longer. I have found(and I'm sure everyone has) that in dance/trance genres repetitiveness is not always a bad thing but you still want some variation. So adding a few new drum parts and extending the play time of synth would be great I think.
-DaMann
I really like this one. Light, fun, and not overly intense, but worth raving to. Could do for a little more oomph in the bass synth, but that's just my opinion. Excellent work!
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Yeah, the bass synth could use a little bit of a boost. A little "oomph," so the saying goes. imho
I used your intro on my "Only One" track before I heard this song. I'm pretty sure that loop is the only thing our songs have in common. Completely different uses. Very kool track by the way
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Great job!
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peace
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That aint positive! :p
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Nice one mate. sorry if i seem a little harsh but if u want 2 get better its the best way to learn.
cheers mate
Hunta
hehe :p thx for the review!
And about if you were "harsh" I dont think you were harsh :p
You just said your meaning (I shall watch the drums) :D lol
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Good job, keep it up. I'd give you an 8/10
Cheers S.
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-DaMann
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Hunta
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i do really like the synths but there is one thing : this track needs more bass and a little more speed ..
anyway: godd work mate!
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Nice synths you got goin on there. And the sweepy brush sounds on the drums (?) sound wicked. If ya remaster or remix this maybe try boostin the bass up just a bit. Cool stuff mate!
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not bad... its a simple but god trance track :)
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Mos' ReQuest~
Check my newest beats out!
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-DaMann
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Yeah, the bass synth could use a little bit of a boost. A little "oomph," so the saying goes. imho
ok
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Excellent work, man. Great energy, kickin' tempo. All-around win material.
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