RichardShekari

Hi, Richard. First, you have written a very inspiring lyric. Is a joyous message and the melody you crafted delivers that with even more power and emotion. I very much enjoyed listening to the song. I do try to provide some suggestions on tracks where I have thoughts about how they might be made even better. I only do this where I really like what I've heard, so I hope you will receive this in the spirit in which it is given. I think the balance in the mix between the instrumental backing and the vocals could be modified a little bit to bring up the instruments a bit more. The vocals clearly need to be dominant in the mix, but the instrumental "bed" backing them I think needs to be elevated just a wee bit. There are also some interesting background vocal parts that really add something special and I'd lift them up a bit more in the mix when they occur. That said, it is a very fine song.

Great stuff with positive message. Love the beat. Love and peace. Cheers!

Richard, the new drums are sounding very nice. I like the new groove very much! I did play it in my show, though :-)

Hello RichardShekari, my friend yet another well constructed and arranged track with a very nice message of trials and triumphs thru faith.....musical accompaniment is really good, another good job my brother.

Hello Richard , oh I love this afrobeat man !!!! It is so nice to me....and I always notice your rich and catchy chord progression !!! The vocals are wonderful too ! Cheerssssssssss !!

Hello RichardShekari, just enjoyed your track From Rage To Grace and enjoyed it and its strong message of hope and perseverance, the musical accompaniment also was well down and a nice complement....more great work my friend.

Lyrics are very inspirational. Song is great. Good job as always my brother. God bless you!

I loved the lyrics and the way you turned them into a warm, healing song.
Excellent outcome as always Richard. I believe you know by now that I am an admirer.
Best wishes, Anthony

Hey Richard, like all your music this track is another fine example of your talent, creativity and positive messages infused within. I enjoyed your song and liked the synth melody you played which enhanced the joyous bounce of the track. Great job Brother,

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Love it, nice track my friend

Great song!

Big island vibes, keep it up Richard Shekari
Jonathan (2NDNTR/7THGR)

Hello RichardShekari, my friend I thank you once more for the reminders of faith and strength to help thru these perilous times....very necessary messages for us all....more great work my brother.

amazing work :D

Nice song. I like the progression.

First of all... very nice melodic lines and chord progression Richard !!! Very catchy .....!!!! I like it very much !!

Beautiful stuff here. Great job!

yo RichardShekari this song is beautiful, best of luck

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Brother Richard, your production on this is really good man. The worship is just so heartfelt and true, your voice sound just great, so good, cant stop playing this!!

The real journey - "stars..." :)

nice rapping and still full of warm spirt too boot!
its 'busy' in some parts but it's always great when people break a bit from form and mix it up (I think) and a great listen

Ouch Richard i did wonder how you would rap now i know very cool man. have you ever tried rapping the gospel? that would be interesting anyway wow very cool track and rap. well done.

great song, the melody kinda reminds me of echoes by gorilla Zoe.

Nice intro slow beat this time works well and lyrics are good as always do you have your tracks on other sites? Quality track. :)

Hello RichardS, great track my friend, the vocals along with the backup vocals very well done.....message of course speaks for itself....this is another great effort.