ArtfulOne

nice flow my friend, need just a little work in different area, but never the less nice. keep up the good work.

Pretty cool track ArtfulOne! Sceptikdeejay came through with a dope beat and you delivered on the flows. I'm not a fan on the chorus and I think the vocals should be turned down a little bit. But other than that the overall mix sounds good. It was an enjoyable listen. Nice work.

Kinda cool joint.The hook need work though.

Hi ArtfulOne,
I agree with joecramer comment: you definitely need a female vocal singing refrain by this one:) A kind of a very straitforward song (for me:)) but you did it very well with keeping time and rapping. This one makes me think of productions from Pitbull or some older music from 90's. But it is still really well done by singing along the whole track. Good job.
A.

Cool rap

I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
but :)
Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now i´m gone

Real good work
stay tuned
joe

Extra smooth & peaceful vibe. Pleasure to listen.

Chill beat, the delivery of your vocals reminds me of bloodhound gang, like Johnny said i'd recommend turning down the volume of the vocals just a bit so they fit more with the instrumental as they overpower it, but only by a little, still really good

Pretty nice, bit of chillout though I would look into the mixing. The vocals could be turned a notch down to allow the listener to experience the beat in combination with the vocals more instead of just hearing the vocals so hard

Also I would check into the limiter settings, everything seems to be quiet high up into the master, might be a good idea to turn things down so that the limiter doesn't have to cut a great deal on the volume

Still a good song though ;)

Nice track

Hell yeah you are getting better this is hot!

This is a cool style! I like the energy of it! Very original lyrics, and your vocals sound good! Groovy stuff!

It got me from the start.
Really a sensitive piece of magic!
Cheerz mate and head up

Hey Artful. I just downloaded the track. I'd like to give it a shot. I'll try to get to it this weekend and hopefully I'll be able to do something nice. Wish me luck.

Hey, amazing track! I really appreciate you posting the lyrics so I could follow along! Your delivery is killer! Very effective beat too! You nailed it! Faved for sure!

Nice sounding recording and some cool lyrics, great job on the vocals.

Wayne

Very interesting song. I like it. Emotional and has an energy that kind of bursts out. I still couldn't hear the words very well early on but I have old man ears. Thanks for sharing that piece it must be a little freaky to expose your feelings like that to us. You have effected me and I thank you.

Mad Respect and Mad love for this track.
It takes great courage and strength to channel your emotion into art and produce something epic.
you got a angel by your side
it may seem unreal
keep your eyes to the sky
he will make your dreams come real.

AWESOME that's all I have to say :)
Oh and faved too :)
Steve

Hey, this is awesome! I'm not a big RnB fan, but when I heard that FastFunghi was involved I had to take a listen! Great collab guys!

the emotion you put in was just crazy !!! this the sort of thing not many rappers these days would do, and for simply writing this for your dad you have my full respect ^^ anyway, i wish i was this good :)

Nice R&B, clever lyrics with irony...I like it!

Man as always your kicking ass! This is epically put together. Never stop what you do best and that my friend is music!

as i was saying befor i hit the wrong button lol

soz!

This reminded me abit of fun loving criminals.!

This has a great vibe to it.!

Love both the vocals,love the beats,bass,keys.!

This is some real nice blissed RnB!

Very very nice Track!

Thank you for sharing this beauty!

***bb***

I loved this!

R

I Feel like 1990s hip hop, 1960s Jazz, with a mixture of Modern synths and Sounds as well as a nice and steady Rap Drum Sequence, :) Sex to my Ears, Loving the Song, Im Pretty sure you did the other two artists proud, Your Flow go's great this Amazing Track! Well Done, hands Down :)