auralincarnation

I like this. It's very retro sounding and you've layered those vocals well. Reminds me a little of BT (the artist not the telephone company)
It's also pretty epic at nine minutes twenty.
I enjoyed this track.
FR

Danke 30th Jul 2013 09:03 - 13 years ago

on Do Better by auralincarnation

Hi!!!

I love your song, gotta special mood. Superb vocs, would you please tell me who is the owner of this singing?

Respect, Danke

auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

hey Danke!

Thanks... All parts of the track including the vox is all me!

evilarmy83 30th Jul 2013 08:25 - 13 years ago

on Do Better by auralincarnation

Sounds good, the voice and the directions it gos when harmonizing with the music reminds me of Mike Patton.

auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

rock thanks

StaticNomad 30th Jul 2013 07:42 - 13 years ago

on Do Better by auralincarnation

I like what the intro arpeggiator is playing but I don't like your choice of synth sound. Excuse the pun, but I think you can do better. Just spend a while choosing a different synth patch. It can be a really boring thing to do but I think you need to. I was really surprised on 1 min when the main song came in. Track really took off. I think vocally it's a decent song, actually, and pretty well sung. Some effective FX on those vocals from time to time (especially the call and response delay bits) I can imagine this being quite a popular song. Would probably be more popular if it had a more distinctive vocal hook that repeated, though the lack of it is not necessarily a criticism. The main thing I really do not understand is that incessant bass drum ending. You've got to get rid of that as it serves no purpose. Also, I don't think that's a great bass drum sound so you either need to replace it with a better one or process the one you've got to improve it. Hope these suggestions help as I'm sure you can do better and hope you will make it happen. Let me know when you post a better version.

auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

static, where have you been all my music creating career? this is exactly what I was looking for as far as feedback!

thank you so much!

my questions about your comments;
which patch are you thinking needs changing?
the arp'd patch?

as far as a vocal hook, artisticially i was going for more of the unorganized sadness of the topic of the song but I'll look at it with different eyes and see if I can arrange one without fudging the flow.

Lastly your completely correct that ending section has to go, it was my mistake for I was being short sighted and only thinking of my next gig and how this track was going to be mixed in...when I should have left it alone and do that arrangement for my live set and not what I posted here.

really thsnks... I'm gonna hit you up via personal message if you dont mind...maybe i can do the same kinda thing for you?

either way.... rock on and thanks again!

roblobloman 25th Jul 2013 20:02 - 13 years ago

on Auralincarnation-Falling Down by auralincarnation

Nice track!
It may sound old but the bass rocks!

auralincarnation replied 25th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

thanks love your stuff too...
yea i think i made this track with logic 9.0.3 or something. far from new

DesignedImpression 25th Jul 2013 02:10 - 13 years ago

on Auralincarnation-Falling Down by auralincarnation

This is not bad. Hearing the messages. Dig the steady paced instrumentation that helps the vocals story be heard and thought about. Cool synth and melody at 5:20 mark. Can hear all parts really clear, sounds good. Interesting vocal ideas and lyrics. Thank you for posting this. Peace.

auralincarnation replied 25th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

thanks for the digs but i hear ya on fm there... thistrack was a departure from my normal debauchery to work on my vocal mixing chops and ideas.

oh and to prove that with some auto tune any terrible voice can be made at the very least listenable

evilarmy83 24th Jul 2013 12:04 - 13 years ago

on Auralincarnation-Falling Down by auralincarnation

Cool track my friend.

auralincarnation replied 25th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago

thanks!!

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