Have to totally agree with Renz, stunning piece of work, loving the layback feel and vibe coming from the piece, can see where you thinking vocals may help lift to another level, personally it does stand alone well just as an instrumental...impressive Charlene...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Masterful!!!
Especially the dissonant piano....It takes a special ear to make what shouldn't work fit so well.
You are all over this S**t
Start to finish a beautiful work
Both musically and sonically
KUDOS
Peace
BT
You crazy girl....In a good way...
This is really nice, not sure about the dissident piano at about 1:00min.
Over all though you've put a nice feel to this, your sense of harmony is
on the mark, I can tell you enjoy what you are doing...
Keep it up cause it sounds like, you are about to say something that really
matters...
This is truly outside the box...Way to go young Lady....
Ha, thank you very much. I agree with you on that, I'm crazy, but who isn't now a days right. Thank you for all the support, I dig it. Hoping all is well on your end
-Charlene
your mixing is getting better every time :)
loved the first section starting at 1:36 love the drums and the low bass with the chopped vocals and the offbeat piano key love the ambience!
I posted your track, with just 2 guitar because our Friend "Doubei" suggested
he might want to do something...
Lets hope he'd like to join in on this..
I checked it out, and left my two cents ha. It's really awesome. Like I said, that little something extra I was missing. Added a whole new flavor. Thank you :)
-Charlene
You're getting better and better...where is the end? :-)
This is epic and relaxing...
And your voice...no words!!! :-)
Sure fave and big respect, Danke
Great Track Char!!!
Your instincts are great both musically and sonically
I love the percussion and it's syncopation...it adds alot to the track that you didn't just fall on a simple 4/4.
Fave
This is super nice, would have loved to hear your voice just a touch, more
up front...But I get it...Trying to get that deep reverb sound, is very tricky if
you're using another efx with it...like an echo in your case...The cleaner the
reverb the better, because the soft spots in your voice, would be much more
clearer in the mix..Reverb decreases a vocals volume so the cleaner it is the
less it affects your vocal and colour of your voice... And would still give you that nice depth you are looking for but won't put a cloud over it...
If you get my drift...Right now you're in the Ballpark...4 sure
But this is real close to the Money, Honey...Just joking... :-)
Never the less true...
Haha, no there are some parts that even seem a little different volume wise having a few more listens. I didn't want the vocal too strong in this one, but I get the feeling it might have sunk in too much on some spots efx wise as you mentioned for sure. That is good to know though actually I wasn't aware regarding the reverb/volume. Sweet info to know for the future ha. This is why I like this site so much. Thank you! :)
-Charlene
I recognize and have used some of these loops before. Your voice makes it very nice. almost ethereal.
I love how artists on this site take these loops and make them there own with there interpretation of the sounds. Great work!
Cru
I am very impressed with this track of yours.
Your choice of loops blends together effortlessly and they are all in agreement with each other.
Oh and your voice and lyrics are just TOPS! You have just the right reverbs on it.
I notived the drums too especially the claps, the reverbs too was a nice touch on that. Outstanding work here! You just keep getting better! Blessings! - B
This is real good, voice is on the mark with style and a feel reeeeal flow... :-)
If you don't mind I'd like to look at this, closer myself cause all kinds of things
are bouncing around in my head...Ideas that is....
Truly a sweet track with a Magical Voice... VVVVVVery Nicely Done...
wow Charlene, is that you singing? :D
it music is quite simple indeed but also fitting and what's here sounds excellent to be extended a little more.
i was thinking something along the lines of bass and strings, maybe additional drums/percussions.
if you want me to have a go at it let me know, i'd certainly enjoy it a lot.
take care :)
I can say nothing in the way of critique. I'm impressed and always look forward to a new one from you. Thank you for the song, and the download. It's going on the work playlist.
Nice, use to love using garageband. I have it on my mac though, it was the first DAW I used to make my very first beat ever. That was about 8th grade I think..I just wish I saved that beat. Oh well, but I do think you have skill. I love the groove to this, the musicbox type sound is really good too. Awesome! peace
Hey thanks! Much appreciated. Yeah, also seeing as what year you might have been in the eighth grade I think I feel really old now.. ha, sweet deal though thanks again.
-Charlene
Ha, honestly I am not sure if this qualifies as electro/electronic but it seems the most fitting. I am glad you did enjoy it though, thats always good enough for me. Take care!
-Charlene
These are some awesome loops you have worked with and what I love about loops is they are nothing until they are mixed with others and you have that talent and the ears to do wonderful things with the loops.
Nice
This is a pretty straight forward piece but you have a knack for knowing when to change it up/add a sound/subtract a sound.
I agree with Renz...you have a good ear for production.
There is one instance at 1:12...I don't know if it was a hard pan or a deliberate drop but sonicly the top disappears and the mix seems a little muddy for about 8 seconds then its back to full spectrum at around 1:20.
Just a little thing and totally sonic.
Musically this is a solid arrangement.
Kudos
Peace
BT
Hola and thank you! Yeah as you mentioned though around 1:12, its hard pan, maybe it bit too much and it does sound a little iffy right. Thank you again!
-Charlene
Wow. I associate you with your great voice but you have some serious producing skills too. Loops only come to life when put together skillfully. I really enjoyed this track.
Would be cool to hear your voice worked in, even if it's a small part like you mentioned. If not, it's great as is.
Hey thanks! Yeah I think this will be put on the back burner for now, but thank you for listening and I am glad you liked it :) Hope all is well on your end.
-Charlene
on Ambivalence by Cestevens1783
Got a line already in mind, you drop the lyric and I'd be able to refine
the dance in Time and flavour ... :-)
This is a good one...
Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on Ambivalence by Cestevens1783
Peace
BT
-Charlene
on Ambivalence by Cestevens1783
Cheers,
Scott
-Charlene
on Ambivalence by Cestevens1783
Have to totally agree with Renz, stunning piece of work, loving the layback feel and vibe coming from the piece, can see where you thinking vocals may help lift to another level, personally it does stand alone well just as an instrumental...impressive Charlene...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
-Charlene
on Ambivalence by Cestevens1783
IMO, keep the vocals chill to keep the vaporwave vibe you got going on here. Great work.
RW
-Charlene
on Alluring Indecision by Cestevens1783
Especially the dissonant piano....It takes a special ear to make what shouldn't work fit so well.
You are all over this S**t
Start to finish a beautiful work
Both musically and sonically
KUDOS
Peace
BT
-Charlene
on Alluring Indecision by Cestevens1783
This is really nice, not sure about the dissident piano at about 1:00min.
Over all though you've put a nice feel to this, your sense of harmony is
on the mark, I can tell you enjoy what you are doing...
Keep it up cause it sounds like, you are about to say something that really
matters...
This is truly outside the box...Way to go young Lady....
Peace..TG.
-Charlene
on Alluring Indecision by Cestevens1783
loved the first section starting at 1:36 love the drums and the low bass with the chopped vocals and the offbeat piano key love the ambience!
-Charlene
on Fall to Me by Cestevens1783
Charlene...Hi...Just to let you know...
I posted your track, with just 2 guitar because our Friend "Doubei" suggested
he might want to do something...
Lets hope he'd like to join in on this..
Hope you like it...... Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
You're getting better and better...where is the end? :-)
This is epic and relaxing...
And your voice...no words!!! :-)
Sure fave and big respect, Danke
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
Your instincts are great both musically and sonically
I love the percussion and it's syncopation...it adds alot to the track that you didn't just fall on a simple 4/4.
Fave
Peace
BT
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
up front...But I get it...Trying to get that deep reverb sound, is very tricky if
you're using another efx with it...like an echo in your case...The cleaner the
reverb the better, because the soft spots in your voice, would be much more
clearer in the mix..Reverb decreases a vocals volume so the cleaner it is the
less it affects your vocal and colour of your voice... And would still give you that nice depth you are looking for but won't put a cloud over it...
If you get my drift...Right now you're in the Ballpark...4 sure
But this is real close to the Money, Honey...Just joking... :-)
Never the less true...
Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
I love how artists on this site take these loops and make them there own with there interpretation of the sounds. Great work!
Cru
-Charlene
on How Could You How Could I by Cestevens1783
Your choice of loops blends together effortlessly and they are all in agreement with each other.
Oh and your voice and lyrics are just TOPS! You have just the right reverbs on it.
I notived the drums too especially the claps, the reverbs too was a nice touch on that. Outstanding work here! You just keep getting better! Blessings! - B
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
-Charlene
on Fall to Me by Cestevens1783
If you don't mind I'd like to look at this, closer myself cause all kinds of things
are bouncing around in my head...Ideas that is....
Truly a sweet track with a Magical Voice... VVVVVVery Nicely Done...
Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on Fall to Me by Cestevens1783
it music is quite simple indeed but also fitting and what's here sounds excellent to be extended a little more.
i was thinking something along the lines of bass and strings, maybe additional drums/percussions.
if you want me to have a go at it let me know, i'd certainly enjoy it a lot.
take care :)
-Charlene
on Fall to Me by Cestevens1783
-Charlene
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
Gramo/Neo
-Charlene
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
I never really understood what is the particularity of electro but.For now i will just enjoy this one.
peace
-Charlene
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
LOVED IT
Steve
-Charlene
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
This is a pretty straight forward piece but you have a knack for knowing when to change it up/add a sound/subtract a sound.
I agree with Renz...you have a good ear for production.
There is one instance at 1:12...I don't know if it was a hard pan or a deliberate drop but sonicly the top disappears and the mix seems a little muddy for about 8 seconds then its back to full spectrum at around 1:20.
Just a little thing and totally sonic.
Musically this is a solid arrangement.
Kudos
Peace
BT
-Charlene
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
Would be cool to hear your voice worked in, even if it's a small part like you mentioned. If not, it's great as is.
RW
-Charlene