Great voice you have.
Really enjoyed the track, only minor critique around the 1:55/ 2 min mark I was waiting for you to really drive the vocals home but it didnt happen.
I hear ya on that for sure. I thought about it but eh, I suppose I went with the safe route. I need to start throwing it out there ha, I appreciate the listen!
-Charlene
Lovely. Really pretty, perfect mix and very heartfelt.
You have a beautiful voice.
All I would say is slight harmony glitch at 2:06 (its flat), and would be nice to get a backing strings in at 2:08 with the drum return...and odd string loop cutoff at 3:12 (nice cello though)..but I'm being really picky as its really really gorgeous!
Ha, thank you. Not picky at all, as I said before, it's nice to put a track here and get some advice/tips on details. Thank you for listening!!
-Charlene
Nice music you mixed down here.
And with a voice like yours, you make even a bad song better. So you maked from this nice little piece of music, with your voice, just a real cool song.
Wow! This is something special. Nice blend of vocals and acoustic guitar. Very well written, well arranged and mixed down beautifully. This is the best track i've heard today. 3 and a half minutes of pure gold.
I can't help thinking this would remix really well as a trance track.
Thanks for sharing.
FR
That is really awesome of you to say thank you! I don't think I could pull off a remix but heyyyy, if you're up for it haha, by all means. Thanks again!
-Charlene
some lovely vocals....the drums kick in nicely but but I feel it would have been nice if they would have stopped for that first line then kicked back in again around 1:40 maybe a little hard with a full percussion line maybe a string pad to soften it..
the violin at the end it nice...
all in all a very very nice track I'd release it on my label as part of an EP for sure..
Hey! Thanks very much again for all the support from day one :) Your tracks were some of the first I heard when I joined here and I am always impressed. Hope all is awesome on your end of the world ha!
-Charlene
not something I'd listen to but on the other hand your voice is something I could just keep listening to, over and over :)
I'm looking for 1 or 2 more vocalists for my EP I've just started for early 2015, which I'm writing my own lyrics for too. would love you to be a part of it :)
this is the best song I've ever heared from U ..
seensible is your deep sensations while singing & your vocal execution is your best execution as I remember + one of the best lyriX of yours too (despite U're always a good lyricisT) ...
thnx for download ...Charelene this is so hard to can cnvince me to download a acoustic track , buT I'm sure I'll sing it with you while I'm listening to this ...
best wishes.___Behnam
Very Nice Vocal...
I like how you control things, simple almost like you are talking
that's all you need right there...
Solid harmonies done with taste...Outstanding
Good Fun Work... When you pay attention to details..And You Have...
Wonderful track you've made here. As others have said, your voice amazing -- powerful but subtle. The guitar complements the vocals perfectly, as if dancing around one another.
Hello again! Thank you much for this! This one hits a little close to home so I am very glad that you liked it. Hope all is well on your end.
-Charlene
I always look forward to your tracks. Great voice and you never disappoint. Seems to be one of your better vocal deliveries. Yes, is could be louder, but it's fine where it's at. Pretty impressive for just loops.
Nice funky tune, but your vox is lost in the mix. I wanna hear you dominate this blusey ballsy sound. You need to maximize that in the mix to make this perfection.
it goes up and down from the tempo. your synth pitch is perhaps off a bit. Good vocals I have to say. Big ups for that. Would appreciate this more in UK Garage stule though. overall good effort. keep up the good work.
Orchestral track at its best, has very much a film soundtrack feel and sound about it, loving it, love the pads and strings, very expressive piece, sweet pads/choir used, extreme good and pleasant listen Charlene...Fav'd...Peace n Respect on this one...will check out more of your tunes over next few weeks....Mosaic...
It's nice to see how you have changed the track into a more sort of epic orchestral composition instead of the industrial kind of thing, nice job on it ;)
also credits to Centrist for the track that this is based on
Had to drop by into your stuff for all the support you have given me from the start when I joined here ;)
and then the first thing I hear is this and it takes me away, sounds so great ;D Think you arranged the loops perfectly and it sounds cinematic to me
Thanks for the track and the support ;)
I will go listen to some other stuff of you which is more recent, waiting for your WIP to come out finished on soundcloud
Hola! Sorry for replying so late, as I have said to many, they really get away from me sometimes. I agree with you there, and I was definitely going for a light happy atmosphere ha. Thanks for listening :)
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
Really enjoyed the track, only minor critique around the 1:55/ 2 min mark I was waiting for you to really drive the vocals home but it didnt happen.
Its a minor thing though.
Well done
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/157258
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
real nice track...keep up the good work
Jody
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
You have a beautiful voice.
All I would say is slight harmony glitch at 2:06 (its flat), and would be nice to get a backing strings in at 2:08 with the drum return...and odd string loop cutoff at 3:12 (nice cello though)..but I'm being really picky as its really really gorgeous!
Well done. Loved it.
Maff.
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
And with a voice like yours, you make even a bad song better. So you maked from this nice little piece of music, with your voice, just a real cool song.
Respect. I realy enjoyed listening.
joe
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
I can't help thinking this would remix really well as a trance track.
Thanks for sharing.
FR
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
the violin at the end it nice...
all in all a very very nice track I'd release it on my label as part of an EP for sure..
keep 'em coming sister
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
Gramo/Neo
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
You have come such a long way since your first ever song on looperman and I am so glad I have followed you, This should be in the charts.
Keep them coming Charlene and with a voice like yours the tracks should never be instrumental :)
Steve
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
I'm looking for 1 or 2 more vocalists for my EP I've just started for early 2015, which I'm writing my own lyrics for too. would love you to be a part of it :)
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
seensible is your deep sensations while singing & your vocal execution is your best execution as I remember + one of the best lyriX of yours too (despite U're always a good lyricisT) ...
thnx for download ...Charelene this is so hard to can cnvince me to download a acoustic track , buT I'm sure I'll sing it with you while I'm listening to this ...
best wishes.___Behnam
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
I like how you control things, simple almost like you are talking
that's all you need right there...
Solid harmonies done with taste...Outstanding
Good Fun Work... When you pay attention to details..And You Have...
Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
Hats off.
Kind regards,
Steve
-Charlene
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
on One of Those Things by Cestevens1783
on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783
peace p.s. great vocal too!
Tune D
-Charlene
on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783
Love & Light,
Mykael
-Charlene
on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783
Evan
-Charlene
on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783
-Charlene
on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783
on Your Every Day by Cestevens1783
Steve
-Charlene
on Endless Battle-Forward March by Cestevens1783
Orchestral track at its best, has very much a film soundtrack feel and sound about it, loving it, love the pads and strings, very expressive piece, sweet pads/choir used, extreme good and pleasant listen Charlene...Fav'd...Peace n Respect on this one...will check out more of your tunes over next few weeks....Mosaic...
on Hell On Earth - A Tribute by Cestevens1783
also credits to Centrist for the track that this is based on
Thanks for sharing
-Charlene
on Endless Battle-Forward March by Cestevens1783
and then the first thing I hear is this and it takes me away, sounds so great ;D Think you arranged the loops perfectly and it sounds cinematic to me
Thanks for the track and the support ;)
I will go listen to some other stuff of you which is more recent, waiting for your WIP to come out finished on soundcloud
Cheers
-Charlene
on Just Another Day by Cestevens1783
(needs those basslines though)
Keep up like this! :)
-Charlene