very nice choice of instruments, not sure if you made those yourself (don't know a thing about that music maker) but it surely sounds good together
nice and calm
I can definitively appreciate simplicity in music, as they are the melodies that we remember.
First and foremost I believe you have captured a very thoughtful sound, one that is very good. I enjoyed every minute (all three of them) of this song, yes it was simple, but it was also well defined and you kept working around that elegant melody. If this is your first song, I cannot wait to hear what you have in store for us later! Great track thanks for sharing! If I had to make one suggestion, it would be too check out some of the tutorials around the net on tweaking sound, they have helped me to learn to adjust my methods for the better, in particular the strings. as they are difficult for me.
It's about time you explore your own compositions... don't worry about the simplicity in chord structures of this piece, your arrangement is sublime. you have the (natural talent) ear for arranging music. I hope you learn as much as you can. My early compositions were simple chord structures. ( I just put one on looperman) I was fortunate to study in (college) music theory and to be exposed to many forms of music. But I will always remember that obsession I had with making music when I was 16. the same obsession you have, and don't worry about professionals and music theory majors in school, just follow your heart's desire of music when you can and enjoy what you create.
Steve
forgive me if persoanly I am a direct person .
who exactly as you have written in your profile ,
has used to be paritcular all the times .
hence ,i don't censor myself to say it's alittle spooney ?
very easy and simple notes of piano are not valuable enough
to can call this cinematic .
those violins are very dry and such vst using uses for
kindergardens here in spain!!
hope you'll be better about compostion and equalizing soon.
keep working and don't give up .
Bueno, no todos son tan afortunados como tú por poder estudiar música y tener un buen equipo para componer.
Hago lo que puedo con lo poco que tengo. Pero claro, supongo que para una profesional como tú, esto es sólo una estupidez.
Pues, bueno... avanzo a mi ritmo. Entre la poesía, el dibujo, la fotografía, el diseño digital y el canto no me doy mucho tiempo tampoco para meterme de lleno a la música (y ojo que todo lo que hago lo hago sin haber recibido instrucción alguna). Además, la ingeniería en sistemas computacionales me quita bastante tiempo también.
Si quejarte de lo que otros con mucho esfuerzo pueden hacer es para ti una buena crítica constructiva, entonces yo soy Marie Curie. e_e
Gracias por escuchar y comentar.
Hi SoleilxLune....you know enough about music to convey some very pleasant Sunday evening listening over my way...it does have a touch of the meloncholy...but the lighter sounds & high strings keep it floating just above becoming sad (if you had added a cello it would have really come across much sadder)...I like it the way it is...not too meloncholy...but certainly thoughtful....You did very well...keep on doing it....Ed
Aww! Thank you very much for your words.
Well, I think that this one is very (extremely simple ._. )
I've not been able to compose these last weeks.
University takes all my time.
Anyway, maybe I'll upload another song of mine soon.
Thanks for listening and comment :D
Ok, now your tugging at the heart strings. This is one of my favorite classical pieces. In fact, I did a version of it in March, 2012. I uploaded it to my collab site temporarily. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148251
A little advise...You are going to get a bunch of the so called 'pros' telling you that you should do this, or do that. Screw them all! The only way you will lean is by doing. Of course you don't know what they are talking about...They are trying to impress you with big tech words. Just have fun and learn as you go. The piece of the link I included here is terrible, in my opinion, but I have learned much since than.
Well, I guess you are right, maybe in some way; but I think that if there are people who know about this stuff (music), it would be good to learn a little from they.
And... about your Canon's version... well... I listened, and I like the strings and the piano solo :)
Anyway, I'm glad that you took your time to write a comment. It's significative to me.
Thanks for listening! :D
Hi Soleil,
You got already a lot of compliments here, and I can only add that you deserved all of them!
The song is "simple" but you already show good taste.
Keep going girl!
Ciao, Domenico
good to see U're back young tallented colleague Soraya .and when while listening to your nice piano I read your replY abouT being a selfthaughT who is learning music by herself's intelligence quotient , music even when there was no internet still and Islamc primitivism of this fascist regime of muslims in my motherhood land had forbidden for peoples to learn music , or sell & buy instruments even ,think this is worthy of greatest adoration,indeed .
Steve(first commenT) is a master abouT those things he has told & personallY I've learned aloT from him & I have np doubT soon U'll be unbelievable in music .best wishes.___Behnam
Thank you very much for your words. And, well, I guess you're right about you tell. Until some time ago, there were things that were forbidden for women. I think they still exist. The thing is, I'd really like to learn music. You know, with a teacher, with someone who really knows of music.
Anyway, I'll keep practicing in the way I can.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
really enjoyed this track. it has a placid quality which is not necessarily associated with dubstep so it is kind of "fusion" in my mind. when the voice comes in that is a special moment for me. seems really first class production. congrats!
Thanks! Well, I didn't know if this one was dubstep or fusion... but, I guess you're right: it's more like fusion.
Well, thanks for listening and comment! :D
I loved it. As being someone who also is very new with music and still in the learning process with everything and using software, working out the kinks etc, I think this is beautiful!!
Thank you very much!
Well, This is only a try. I have to fix some details yet.
But I'm sure that all is about practicing.
Practicing makes the master.
Thanks again.
Awww! Thank you very much!
I know this melody is a little sickly sweet, but this is the first try of a song made by myself entirely.
I hope I can make more.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
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Beautiful track. Love the melodies, very well done!!
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nice and calm
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I can definitively appreciate simplicity in music, as they are the melodies that we remember.
First and foremost I believe you have captured a very thoughtful sound, one that is very good. I enjoyed every minute (all three of them) of this song, yes it was simple, but it was also well defined and you kept working around that elegant melody. If this is your first song, I cannot wait to hear what you have in store for us later! Great track thanks for sharing! If I had to make one suggestion, it would be too check out some of the tutorials around the net on tweaking sound, they have helped me to learn to adjust my methods for the better, in particular the strings. as they are difficult for me.
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Steve
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who exactly as you have written in your profile ,
has used to be paritcular all the times .
hence ,i don't censor myself to say it's alittle spooney ?
very easy and simple notes of piano are not valuable enough
to can call this cinematic .
those violins are very dry and such vst using uses for
kindergardens here in spain!!
hope you'll be better about compostion and equalizing soon.
keep working and don't give up .
Hago lo que puedo con lo poco que tengo. Pero claro, supongo que para una profesional como tú, esto es sólo una estupidez.
Pues, bueno... avanzo a mi ritmo. Entre la poesía, el dibujo, la fotografía, el diseño digital y el canto no me doy mucho tiempo tampoco para meterme de lleno a la música (y ojo que todo lo que hago lo hago sin haber recibido instrucción alguna). Además, la ingeniería en sistemas computacionales me quita bastante tiempo también.
Si quejarte de lo que otros con mucho esfuerzo pueden hacer es para ti una buena crítica constructiva, entonces yo soy Marie Curie. e_e
Gracias por escuchar y comentar.
on Unrequited love -Original Song- Soleil Lune by SoraSolitudine
Well, I think that this one is very (extremely simple ._. )
I've not been able to compose these last weeks.
University takes all my time.
Anyway, maybe I'll upload another song of mine soon.
Thanks for listening and comment :D
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https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148251
A little advise...You are going to get a bunch of the so called 'pros' telling you that you should do this, or do that. Screw them all! The only way you will lean is by doing. Of course you don't know what they are talking about...They are trying to impress you with big tech words. Just have fun and learn as you go. The piece of the link I included here is terrible, in my opinion, but I have learned much since than.
Anyway,
Cheers,
Scott
And... about your Canon's version... well... I listened, and I like the strings and the piano solo :)
Anyway, I'm glad that you took your time to write a comment. It's significative to me.
Thanks for listening! :D
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Steve
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You got already a lot of compliments here, and I can only add that you deserved all of them!
The song is "simple" but you already show good taste.
Keep going girl!
Ciao, Domenico
Comments like yours are very significative to me.
Thanks! :D
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Steve(first commenT) is a master abouT those things he has told & personallY I've learned aloT from him & I have np doubT soon U'll be unbelievable in music .best wishes.___Behnam
Anyway, I'll keep practicing in the way I can.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
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Well, thanks for listening and comment! :D
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Well, This is only a try. I have to fix some details yet.
But I'm sure that all is about practicing.
Practicing makes the master.
Thanks again.
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Gentle blissfull soothing!
It's a little gem!
Be proud little lady this is so sweet and so warming!
This made me want to dance in sunlight covered in white petals.!
Yeah i know...that's girly but what the hell lol
I know this melody is a little sickly sweet, but this is the first try of a song made by myself entirely.
I hope I can make more.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D