Description : I lost my mom on July 4th, and it seems like the pain never eases. I wrote this song in remembrance of her.

BIG SHOUT OUT TO DIVADYALBUM3 FOR ALLOWING ME TO USE HIS MUSIC "I need your love".

I hope you find my vocals satisfying to your AMAZING music.

I cannot mix music well, but hopefully this version gets the point across. Sorry I am a bit pitchy, however I could not stop breaking down.

Any feedback is welcome! :)

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  1. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Tue 25th Aug 2020 - 3 weeks ago

    First, my deepest condolences for your loss. Mere words always fall short during life-altering moments such as these. I cannot begin to imagine the emotional sorrow and profound loss you have experienced. Nothing in life prepares anyone for the loss of a beloved parent. May the Lord give you Mom's soul; blessings, comfort, peace, and eternal rest.

    Now your singing. I appreciate your effort, honesty. To me, it sounds like you put a lot of heart and soul into this song. I would like to suggest you do a re-recording at some point. I have empathy about where you are coming from on this, but you can redeem yourself as a vocalist if you want to and when you are ready. You have lots of potential because it sounded like you forced this singing which resulted in being out of tune. The fact that you did this so soon deserves two-thumbs up!

    Cheers!
    Joe

  2. danke
    danke on Sun 23rd Aug 2020 - 4 weeks ago

    Dear Lady ... in addition to the fact that the pain can be huge now in your heart and soul, the profession has to be chosen separately, even if we are amateurs ... sometimes you sing falsely and it spoils the whole picture a bit ...

    cheers, Danke

    KaunaRiddle
    Reply by KaunaRiddle

    Singing from your heart is not singing falsely... which is exactly what I am doing. It is not a professional recording, rather done on a small PC computer... remember?

    While I appreciate your feedback, remember sometimes the heart is full of pain, and it bleeds into what one is trying to express.

  3. CinCoCent
    CinCoCent on Mon 10th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    First off my sympathies and very sorry for your lost. What a beautiful marvelous unique dedi.
    Love it but cant help to feel your pain. We here at LM cry with.

  4. theSesztak
    theSesztak on Sun 9th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    your voice is kind of bad with all respect to my opinion, the music is perfect I hope you understand that it is a constructive criticism and don't take it like a fool, just know that I don't want to make you sad with my comment, forgiveness about my opinion

    KaunaRiddle
    Reply by KaunaRiddle

    As I said in the description, I do not have the knowledge of mixing vocals into the music at all, so professionalism is not present at this time.

    My sadness is overwhelming right now, however not everybody is going to like my voice... and that is ok. There's some voices out there that I can't stand either.

    My voice WAS a RAW recording of the lyrics, and while I appreciate your feedback... The message of the song is what I wanted to put out.

  5. krotan
    krotan on Thu 6th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    I really sympathize with you ...

  6. ronabo
    ronabo on Thu 6th Aug 2020 - 1 month ago

    Hi KaunaRiddle, I am so sorry for your loss. Touching song and lyrics. You have a lovely voice.

    Keep your head up!

    Ronabo

    KaunaRiddle
    Reply by KaunaRiddle

    Thank you.

    Hopefully I can redo soon, without all the pitch mishaps or tears falling down.

    Kauna.

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