This is seriously good - great dance track. The piano is awesome - I think the track stands up even without the vocals which work well for the most part.
Hi Clindsay and thanks for listening!
I think I'm going to upload a version without the vocals on Soundcloud after reworking the song a bit.
I'm glad you liked it!
OK - love the music - like the arrangement - this is seriously good (not really weird)- problem is that the main vocals are not clear enough and get lost in the music. Background vocals are terrific. I think the main vocals need a recut/remix where they are more forward. Your English is fine it's the mix that is problematic. This is a gem - just need to shine it up.
Well, at first, thanks for the criticism. It makes me improve.
I guess you are right about main vocals. I've tried to fix that. You can listen again if you want.
To be honest, I wanted to give a "whisper effect" to my voice. I guess I didn't achieve it :P
Anyway, thanks for listening and comment! :D
Wow - why isn't this getting more listens? Very sophisticated and well produced track - professional quality. Probably could use an instrumental bridge or break to highlight the very good melody lines.
I really like it - great use of strings and the melody is compelling. I liked the background 'heys'. The production values are actually very good bass and all. On its own it is good with a good lyric I think it could be great. I can tell you took some time with this.
I like mixed genres. Loved the intro - the rap not as much. I think the country flavor was good and this could be remixed as a solid arrangement. Very talented.
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I think I'm going to upload a version without the vocals on Soundcloud after reworking the song a bit.
I'm glad you liked it!
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Thats very kind of you to think so!
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I guess you are right about main vocals. I've tried to fix that. You can listen again if you want.
To be honest, I wanted to give a "whisper effect" to my voice. I guess I didn't achieve it :P
Anyway, thanks for listening and comment! :D
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-clindsay
Appreciate your comment.
Have a good day!!!
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