StableD
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Cape Town, South Africa
Joined : 17th Oct 2007 - 18 years ago
StableD comments on tracks
StableD has posted 23 comments on other peoples tracks.
Comments (23)
Comments (23)
on And Now by DJSchmeeJ
on Just now - by angler234
on Let Them Hate Ft Dj Relicnj-Raheem Devaughn by Sourmango
If I were you, I'd make a choice between the synth and the piano when it comes to melody. It sounds as if the two are battling it out with each other to be the loudest. Keep both but there should be one dominant melody at one time. For example, you could use the synth for the chorus, since the vocal seems to work together best with the synth, and the piano shines through on the rap verses. Or vice versa.
I would clean up the snare and make it more pronounced, its such a phat clap / snare, I'd like to hear it sitting near the top of the mix.
All in all though. I gotta say - this is quality stuff. You got the right mood and atmosphere. Stick to it and keep ripping it up!
on Stardust Overdrive 1st version by typeMARS
on What We Want by skandalouz
on THE RAIN KEEPS FALLING DOWN by kerry
But because the tracks are so crisp and clean there is a rift created between the quality of the vocal recording as opposed to the musical section. I think your tracks will benefit a great deal from a bit of good post-production mixing and cleaning, perhaps a reverb to add ambiance, which I assume is the mood you're after with your general style. Also, your 'sad piano' song is great but next time you record, put a towel over your head with the mic under it with you, this way you can cancel some of the unwanted sounds that may filter through, such as the TV noise :P
Your voice is also consistent which is good.
kerry :)
on The Boss by MenzieBeatz
on Pop Goes The Weasel (Cranked Up Remix) by Rhythmimic
on Sweet Darling by renofr
Indeed that might be a good idea to think about a reverb for the drum part, thanks for this advice.
on Breakbeast by DJExodi
on Knock Knock by SamYashi
on The Moment by lyric4u
on Sand In My Eyes by lyric4u
on we gon rock ft dj 2tone a.k.a tha genuis by tharaw123
on Let the beat control by atti15
on the still sea is darker than before by TheseMetalDays
on That One Part At The End Of A Romantic Comedy... by Markypoops
on 2029 by djvex
on LOSING HOPE by merlin2007
on through water by TheseMetalDays
on stuck wit em by DannyBOLO
on dream by DannyBOLO
on Frozen Planet by ngSBB
The only thing i'd add is possibly more accented percussion to fall in with the EQ sweeping bass to give a strong mid-end part, to give the song some sort of resolving feeling. Otherwise, i'm very interested to hear more - i love this kind of music!