dustymusic89 already said what I was thinking and it's true, go to english lyrics is not just a translation, it's a close to total rework.
Nice composition and instruments used ! (I'm just not too fan of the "stereo" effect on the voice sometimes).
Yes, I already mentioned that a simple edit in English is not enough. It would take the soul out of the song! You are absolutely right! However, we plan to release some songs from the album "Lieder" in an English version at the beginning of the new year. Until then, we ask for your patience and recommend reading the translations. Thank you for your time and kind words.
The bass/kick is clipping (check "red" light warning on your daw), or is on purpose ? to get distorsion ?
Apart this ; great vibe, great melo, try to find a aca now =) and build it aroud (verse, chorus bridge)
Great intro, Like the mood, Like the minimalist instrument choice.
I was just waiting for a bridge/break or chorus using others chords or same but an other melody.
I like the instrumental "live playing" feelings, the melody, the chords, the mix.
I'm waiting : a voice/rap and chorus (or multiple?) and more variations : a "more dynamic/moving" break/bridge ?
Hello, here my raw advices :
• Too long intro : you can cut out the 1st sentence,
• Voice just a bit too low, it feels in the back just a bit
• At 1:35 we need a bridge (new chord?)
Nice mixing with drums, bass and background instruments, well done !
To resume this feels like an intro, I feel like "ok well done and what happen next ?".
Paco de lucia here ? Nice track, playing and record !
I feel the back drum beat a bit to "harsh" and the bass seems not same key and maybe too low.
Otherwise Nice work
Hey Paco.
Thanks for the points.
as I said to Mr CC, As you know I always do something away from the norm.
I thought to do it this way will be a contemporary sort of vibe.
Glad you like it.
Maj
Nice chords/melo on guitar, nice drums with nice bass couple ! Nice effect on the background.
All these combined is perfect !
Mixing ; you can lower the snair a bit, and push a bit the voice, we lose lyrics sometimes with high pitch background sound pads/effects. The kick-bass mixing is perfect !
Rap : I think you can find or make rap more "punchy", to move your head more on the beat.
I listen with my audio-technica headset and small JBL bluetooth, same advice.
cheers !
Same as sunnydas said about effect for the voice.
I like the instrument in background used nice sound.
I like the voice/rap too, cool rythmic.
I can remix your voice, send me a wetransfer link =) (free of course and you keep the files and rights)
Perfect !
At the end start the EDM remix !
an I found it ! at 2:10 that reminds me Phil Collins - In the Air Tonight ! yt : /watch?v=YkADj0TPrJA
It tooks me hard brain power to find this.
Cheers !
Nice one ! That can be an original sound track of a movie like Cloud Atlas (don't ask me why I remember this movie ^^).
Nice vocal, nice melody, atmosphere all works well together.
But, if I can give my advice ; I expected a shorter intro and an other drum kit for the last part. For me it's feel too "electronic" compare to the 1st part (rythm pattern is rly good, (maybe change a little the repeated pattern of gross beat).
Remins me Galt MacDemot atmosphere ; https://youtu.be/zMsnnH7Tu34
Interesting, nice playing, nice mixing, well done.
That can be a soundtrack of a movie.
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Nice composition and instruments used ! (I'm just not too fan of the "stereo" effect on the voice sometimes).
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I was just waiting for a bridge/break or chorus using others chords or same but an other melody.
Feed back appreciated.
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I'm waiting : a voice/rap and chorus (or multiple?) and more variations : a "more dynamic/moving" break/bridge ?
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• Too long intro : you can cut out the 1st sentence,
• Voice just a bit too low, it feels in the back just a bit
• At 1:35 we need a bridge (new chord?)
Nice mixing with drums, bass and background instruments, well done !
To resume this feels like an intro, I feel like "ok well done and what happen next ?".
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I feel the back drum beat a bit to "harsh" and the bass seems not same key and maybe too low.
Otherwise Nice work
Thanks for the points.
as I said to Mr CC, As you know I always do something away from the norm.
I thought to do it this way will be a contemporary sort of vibe.
Glad you like it.
Maj
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All these combined is perfect !
Mixing ; you can lower the snair a bit, and push a bit the voice, we lose lyrics sometimes with high pitch background sound pads/effects. The kick-bass mixing is perfect !
Rap : I think you can find or make rap more "punchy", to move your head more on the beat.
I listen with my audio-technica headset and small JBL bluetooth, same advice.
cheers !
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I like the instrument in background used nice sound.
I like the voice/rap too, cool rythmic.
I can remix your voice, send me a wetransfer link =) (free of course and you keep the files and rights)
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At the end start the EDM remix !
an I found it ! at 2:10 that reminds me Phil Collins - In the Air Tonight ! yt : /watch?v=YkADj0TPrJA
It tooks me hard brain power to find this.
Cheers !
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Nice vocal, nice melody, atmosphere all works well together.
But, if I can give my advice ; I expected a shorter intro and an other drum kit for the last part. For me it's feel too "electronic" compare to the 1st part (rythm pattern is rly good, (maybe change a little the repeated pattern of gross beat).
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Thanks for the listen!
Cheers!
~Eighteen
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https://youtu.be/zMsnnH7Tu34
Interesting, nice playing, nice mixing, well done.
That can be a soundtrack of a movie.
I'll be sure to check out what you've been making too