Thank you for that I always fall asleep on this track and two of others track ( Pandora and The Abyss Full Xtension). But the ominous overtones surprised me at first, i thought it was too dark, but it works... but yeah, thanks again for listening and the input...:-)!
P.S.
I will check out your "Alien Invasion", maybe we could collaborate one day.
Thanks John for the words. As far as adding vocals....a song is never really completed...just abandoned..lol
The only plans I have for this track is a better mix and master. If you have some ideas for some vocals..I'd love to hear.
The only thing that stops this from being an awesome track is the quality of the production. Vocals and lyrics are awesome. I love the track as is, but if you want to make money, get the production level up and this baby will soar.
cheers man i really appreciate it its my first song and it was done with a mic about 10 years old which is broken now hahah but yeah im looking for a decent mic now :)
Thank you for the listen and review. ImproveWithError, (the review below) was kind enough to share his loops for this track as well as others. Take it easy.
Gord
Thanks for the advice. I pulled them a little and it does sound better. not technical with this..just get a beat and record over audicity 4 fun. can always use some advice!
Whatever genre you want to put it in, doesn't really matter. It was an enjoyable listen. I like the inclusion of the bird sounds. Would be nice to hear vocals on the track.
Thanks John! I tried to involve more vocals but I still haven't found a way to do so. I guess I can't picture it yet, but I was definetely thinking about it. Thanks for the review!
My friend you have a fan. I love the sound that you create. That being said, this is a very good track, but with a bit more mastering it could be over the top in terms of being a very popular piece.
Personally, I like the bootleg, outtake quality to it as it, but still this piece has such great potential.
on Sunshine by Jalyn
All The Best
John
on Alien Invasion (Terror from OutterSpace) by Stylah
A definite fav
John
BTW, I have a two part song about Alien Invasion if you're interested. They're called More Time Part 1 and Part 2.
P.S.
I will check out your "Alien Invasion", maybe we could collaborate one day.
on Melancholy Mourning by Avonaco
All The Best
John
The only plans I have for this track is a better mix and master. If you have some ideas for some vocals..I'd love to hear.
on Feeding The Dragon by Octonimus
Faved
John
on Lost Cause Final by DevineMC
Absolutely great work (Faved)
John
on Green Horizon by Express77
Well Done
John
on Let It Out by DJWingProductions
can't believe it hasn't been faved...............until now :-)
John
on La Tentacion Vive Arriba by Vicen
Faved and Downloaded.
John
on Massacre At New Cali by brassmonkeyltd
Has me swaying
John
on hunger instrumental by TanakaMak
This is pretty good, but in a year you'll be God
John
on She Likes Me I Like Her Featuring Ajay by trell74
Faved
John
on Like A Pickled Hampster by SweeneyMusic
All The Bset
John
on Ohoowuw by CLProductions
Faved
john
on I Understand collab with ChrisCharles2910 by Gordw
A definite fav
John
Gord
on Dance a Little Closer by BonusG521
Faved
John
on Here I stand ft Imajen by TheWritersPoet41
Faved
John
on soundz like muzik 2011 by djparadox2010
I would fade out the end.
Other than that you have a sweet piece of music here.
John
on let me take u on a trip by kariman
All The Best
John
on Sturdy Indigenous by Groggy
Keep Up The Good Work
John
on her ghost by throughthevalley
Personally, I like the bootleg, outtake quality to it as it, but still this piece has such great potential.
Faved
All THe Best
John
on Lyrical Assasin by sparktheflame
Great track
John
on a tragic collapse by throughthevalley
Faved
John
on missing you by throughthevalley
Faved
John
on wait feat LisMarie by TheseMetalDays
All The Best
John
on Nohaybanda by TheseMetalDays
Faved and Downloaded
John