Good lyrics, but the flow seems slightly out of sync on a few parts. The instrumental was good too, but a little quiet. Overall it's pretty good, but some minor changes can make it alot better! Love to hear more of your work.
Might be my first time experiencing music of this type. If a sense of suspense and relief were intentional for the audience, then it was done very well!
I think that your delivery is the only thing that needs some work. I didn't really feel that much impact from your voice, if that makes sense. Everything else sounds pretty good. I'll be waiting to hear more!
This was really good. Definitely could picture this in several movies (alot of potential in a sci-fi movie in my opinion). The melody was really good. I personally liked the repetitiveness in it, it seems to fit the mood very well!
Thanks for your words.
To be honest, I'm still thinking this is "repetitive". The thing is, I didn't want to make it too short. For that reason I replayed the first part. But I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks! :)
This is dope as hell... I just listened to some of my favorite artists, and you definitely compare to them in my opinion. The production is good, but I like it better if something hit a little harder (just my personal preference). Hope to hear more of your work soon!
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To be honest, I'm still thinking this is "repetitive". The thing is, I didn't want to make it too short. For that reason I replayed the first part. But I'm glad that you liked it. Thanks! :)
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thank you my friend.
have a nice day
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