i really like this track but the drum needs to be louder, all the mix of instruments is awesome and actually quite beautiful, but the drum feels like it needs to be louder. (if it is too loud on the track then lower the volume of all of the other tracks and leave it)
The pella fit well here cus A. it was at 88bpm. B. it's only 1 verse, perfect for helping me develop the basics for this beat before i spend a bunch of time building a long track that didn't sound good.
We'll collab again i'm sure, but like I said before I'm working on solo project I can perform live.
its all a matter of opinion. the only thing i would say to do is to get the right emcee on it. it would have to be a continuous flow. i actually do dig this one a lot. all you need is some fire on this one lyrically and you got a well packaged track. hit me up if you are looking for a lyricist for any tracks in particular that you love you made
this is amazing. just the kind of inspiring beat i love. if you wouldn't mind i would love to hit this ish up. one of my best tracks is at this adress called the dreamer if you want to see how i do
the mix is good, sounds like your most radio friendly track. got a little singing chorus going on to a thumping to a hard beat. good flow too. nice work! not your usual style of beat, but your flow was untouchable!
it sounds a little off tempo but that is my fault obviously. what you could change is maybe the drum every once and awhile. also make it bump more. maybe a bass?
yeah i know it needs quite alot of work man, this is my rough version done in about half an hour. cheers for the comment and the acapella. il let you know when ive finished it properly
this is cool. thanks the review. my suggestion is raise the beats volume. its not bumping hard enough. i dig the beat and the vocal soo much that i have to tell you what this track needs. all you need to is raise the beat. everything else sounds right on. the vocals are ill and your rap skills are quite impressive seroiusly. nice work. i just really think you could change a couple levels and make this hit immediately
hey what up my friend. dont know if you heard but i made a sick version of this track with me and my friend freestyling on this beat. let me know if its fresh and whats up here is the adress.
yo man, just back from a dead zone with a new track, thanx for ur work i hope u and ur friend spend sum good time recordin it, it would be great if u send me ur vocal's couse i got few thing to do on that track u see i cant finish my track's before i got lyric's ill send u the final work
peace bro
hey stephen, i thought i would respond immediatly because it seems like you want to know about the acapella and song. hmm it would be interesting to see what would happen if you combined the two. if it is 85 tempo, in theory it should workk, but i found that basically my flows are so strange that sometimes it doesn't work even if the beat is on time. so if you want to give it a go that chill, but i think you should try it, send me it, and if it doesn't sound that great to us, let me try, cause i've done a lot of acapella to beat matching work using garageband. (a cheap studio program) and i am pretty good at it. i like what you did with this one definitly a paradisey (is that a word?) sort of beat. i love dnb and this is pretty well done! nice work
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his acapella was too short for me to make a whole trackk so i decided to flow on it but i like what you did with it to.
we should workk collab again some other time, if you ever wanted to.
well anyways you did well with this one. nice work. liking the beat and napoleoncomplex is really good
We'll collab again i'm sure, but like I said before I'm working on solo project I can perform live.
Thanks for the listen and review chase.
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this is amazing. just the kind of inspiring beat i love. if you wouldn't mind i would love to hit this ish up. one of my best tracks is at this adress called the dreamer if you want to see how i do
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it sounds a little off tempo but that is my fault obviously. what you could change is maybe the drum every once and awhile. also make it bump more. maybe a bass?
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