Really like the way this rolls along - got me noddin' my head right away :) You seem like you have the same challenge as me, mixing and mastering is still something I'm learning about. I try playing my tracks in lots of different rooms and in different hardware (headphones vs. speakers) and I can sometimes hear what I need to change when I get away from my usual speakers/headphones. Great track though, I like the way you've structured it - a little smoothing of those rough edges like the others have mentioned and this track will sound like buttah.
on Walk With Me - unmastered by RebelThoughts