Wow! some little mistakes in the vocals but really nice songwriting, nearly perfectly arrangement, mixdown not HQ but listener knows the direction of this cool track. In near future, I would like to do something with this vocals :-) 10/10 points for Idea, arrangement, songwriting! Greetings from germany, Chris
seems like inspired from "30 Seconds To Mars" ;-) Good idea, intro also nice and I like the piano and your "scream"... but to many distortions in the middle part (synth/base) and should be more vocs in that kind of, you have done in the intro first. Baseline / Drums sounds powerfull at the beginning, but missing some midtones in the whole mixdown. also vocs/screams need a little bit more loudness. 7/10 points :-) from germany
sounds nice! Cool track, also for european electronic fans :-) really professional quality, transparent, powerfull and I like the simple but clear sounding bassdrum and the wodden bells / Xylophon likely sound! should be worked out. Also need a nice vocal hookline. Would give on my community board, where I upload my songs 8 out of 10 points (must be worked out, need some vocals -> the missing 2 points) :-)
greetings from germany, Chris
added as reply: Yes, I meant finishing the track :-)
Just follow the link on my site, where I uploaded some other songs with male vocs. But must say, many of the users there don't speak english. But good reviews and high chart position for songs will give the chance for a sunday airplay on a real radio station in germany called sunshine live, one of the "first hour" leading station for electronic styles in germany ;-)
thanks a lot chris, I assume by "worked out" you mean I should finish it and I'm working on it as we speak :)... wheres this community board if I may ask? thanks again for reviewing :)
I really like it! Smoothie and nice grooving Track but just a little bit to short and missing an outro and more what you recognised, missed and felt for three long days. By the way the lower frequency of your Vocals should be cut and could used to have small chorus or little delay. I like your vocals, hope can do this month (after vacation) a nice track with one of yours.
Greetings from germany,
Chris (Just follow the Link on my site for some vocal tracks)
really nice powerfull dance/trance track, arrangement is nice, clear and transparent and your vocal style fits perfectly, but I guess Ur vocals should be set more in front of the arrangement of the track 'cause of getting overlapped by some synths sometimes.
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greetings from germany, Chris
added as reply: Yes, I meant finishing the track :-)
Just follow the link on my site, where I uploaded some other songs with male vocs. But must say, many of the users there don't speak english. But good reviews and high chart position for songs will give the chance for a sunday airplay on a real radio station in germany called sunshine live, one of the "first hour" leading station for electronic styles in germany ;-)
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Greetings from germany,
Chris (Just follow the Link on my site for some vocal tracks)
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really nice powerfull dance/trance track, arrangement is nice, clear and transparent and your vocal style fits perfectly, but I guess Ur vocals should be set more in front of the arrangement of the track 'cause of getting overlapped by some synths sometimes.
Conclusion: This track is airplay ready!
Greetings, Chris