Cyberflares

Hey Robin - for 6 months I wasnt sure if that vocal fitted or if this track worked but it kind of grew on me enough for an attempt at a little remix ... go figure - thanks for stopping by, much appreciated

THX MAN....THE RAP IS SOMETHIN I NEEDED IN MY LIFE....HITS HOME....

Hi! Thanks for the positive comment

Appreciate the helping ears!

Legendary!

Thanks for your comment and listen (and fav). The prolonged build up was deliberate from the start of production, to create an extended period of tension - and ultimately, a satisfying resolve with a big drop.

smooth is what i was looking for . Thanks.

Thanks for listening, glad you like it! used to play the bass ages ago and never forgot how important it is . nice to meet you too!

99.5% of the folks here would not have picked up on that so kudos to you!

I told Danke that it reminded me of Killing in the Name by Rage. I did change one word so it isn't a direct rip off, lol. Plus that line works in the track, yes!

Thanks from Danke and myself!

Wayne

Thank you! Glad you could enjoy your listen.

Thanks I appreciate the feedback. peace and love

thanks Robin, all the work was Oli really, i did only provide the vocal but we passed it back and forth to get the final cut, the object here for me was to allow another producer to produce me, i usually only produce myself and he done a fantastic job, i was chuffed to bits with his craft and the beat was so fat he didnt send me the music as is it was a raw piece similar, so that was a nice surprise too

None of my other guitars sound like this one. My Epiphone Riviera has 3 P 90's in it but those pickups are not any way comparable to the P 90 Pro pickup in the new Jr.

Cheers!

Wayne

Thanks !

Robin it was a great track, i was singing feel held back say we on the right path immediately on listening and had it wrote in half hour. i was a little worried it was to vocal heavy, i tend to write too much tbf, my son has said it before he says you give them too much, Manuela has pointed that out above too, so will take some backing out to give the listener a breather, so check back later, i love this music so will make the changes as ive been advised, its always a good idea to listen to your listeners especially if you sort of agree too

This is probably because I compose in the tracker. Thank you, Robin.

Sorry man I could only work with what I had. But I am still grateful for the listen and to the original guy who made the track thanks for the love

cheers Robin its in a little better shape than the first upload still searching for the best result