I agree with Toonz. The acapella sample sounds "ok" but you could clean it up just a bit. The melody and the beat.....here's the part where it gets rough. These two things do not match (at all). You may want to listen to Deadmau5 & Kaskade's - I Remember. That song has almost exactly what you need to make that acapella track shine. Also, try not to just copy and paste a vocal track over beats, because as this song is a prime example of, it just doesn't sound pleasing to the ears, and when you are trying to make this kind of music (dance,house,etc.) you need to make sure that people can flow, and also dance to it.
However, like Toonz mentioned you may want to just completely start fresh and just work on song structure. Also, I would recommend learning the basics of chord progression and arranging. Although, this can get complex, take Deadmau5 for example. He uses fairly simple chord progressions, but because of how he arranges his music it sounds amazing.
Sorry, if I came off a bit odd, I'm just trying to help!
I agree with you and Toonz. But it's hard to make a song when you just have FL's demo... But i'm gonna listen to you for the next and try to use your review :)
The best song i do was "If I die" if you can tell me how you found it...:)
on Out at Night feat Michael Pimentel by LeoAveiro
However, like Toonz mentioned you may want to just completely start fresh and just work on song structure. Also, I would recommend learning the basics of chord progression and arranging. Although, this can get complex, take Deadmau5 for example. He uses fairly simple chord progressions, but because of how he arranges his music it sounds amazing.
Sorry, if I came off a bit odd, I'm just trying to help!
-Spoox
The best song i do was "If I die" if you can tell me how you found it...:)