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##### bro, im lost, part 1 and 2 are miles apart in terms of, everything, really enjoying this great vibe and i think you
should smash the vocal out loud its a little quiet on speaker ok on headset, so you have got some talent, im glad you also took my comment with good faith too, i like the script and delivery and the tone of your voice, weird is good, ive got a few myself, great creativity bro you getting a fav for this :))

nice track Rats, now that's a rodent i know lots about, love that metal sound the music is great but the voxs are to quiet, its a metal track put the volume up by 50% no ##### it 75% and then add a soundgoodizer too :)) put the master slider up bro

littleeli, im a supporter of anyone who brings there own voice, so fair play you only been here 5 months, honest feedback, the last line you wrote is close, the vocal is to loud and far to harsh, you need to EQ it too, the vox sound raw with none or very little processing and you seem to be just shouting it out and its difficult to catch what your saying and im English, im just trying to help bro, started singing myself a year ago, i was ##### but with constructive critique from the community helped me grow, but you got to learn how to engineer it better thats were all the magic happens, dont give up on this the beat is good revist the vox you need structured verse and breaks you got to be on beat, simple thinga like layer your vox X3 just off set them sidechain some reverb and a few milisecs delay to add to its character, take this as its meant bro, just help, ive worked with loads here on collabs i do everything from pop to rock but im best known for rapping and roasting everyone im contraversial but a massive community player, keep working hard Eli

great synth work dean, nice vibrant pace to it also solid beat and nice pads, plenty happening throughout just adding to the listen good mix bro

nice track bro, love the vibe, and the repetitiveness of the track, could do with a vocal though

how you bro, its been a while, hope all is well. nice strong vocal, well written. nice return, different vibe from you, but you got all the angles covered fam

very nice minimalist piece, as Dennel says simple is some times great, it was a really good listen and a decent length for a short, nice synth work bro, i haven't got a clue what you on about regards gaming im old school space invaders pacman and defender :)) i can just about see a 60 inch screen these days

3 on the bounce bro, nice flow, slow mo, nice story, paradise with a hotty, king of the world woo, thought you was rapping about me fam :))))) go get 'em bro

top work bro love that intro and that repetitiveness of the melody like all the synth work and that punchy beat, great tempo too its a foot stomper and a head bopper, great mix

another top job bro, excellent mix with allsorts popping in plenty of variety a dark piece and your vocal just improves with every track, keep on Alex

great mix bro, seriously. one big problem its to ##### short. i had to listen 3 times, really catchy, groovy vibe, and a fly beat, nice work

that should have been Johnnie, typo bro :))

nice intro, this is a different vibe from you bro, got a rock edge, that guitar is fire, slightly different fx on the vocal, and it is a little quieter so the muusic shines too good lines as always Jonnie

of course i was always going to return the complement :)) i agree with Micky why hardly any comments this is a cracking mix. quirky is an understatement, love that intro, great synth work plenty of variation to keep you listening, solid beat and drums too the treated vocals are cool, vocodex, is it your voice underneath. the sound production is sharp as well nice job bro, join in a bit more bro i see you have 3 in your profile

really nice mix bro, great intro, good synth works and the melody is really nice plenty of changes to keep you interested and the sound quality is top notch on headset and speaker

nice intro bro, i know that flow anywhere now bro, top job as usual great bars and story, well written, i always concentrate on the script we are lyricist its important to get the right lines as you know. its great to have you around, keep getting the groove back John

great mix Click thats a lovely vocal but its still got scare fest stamped through it, i also agree with Rita, your work is excellent bro, you never disappoint its always a pleasure to press play because you know it will be worth it.

i checked the other too bro, no comparison this is clean far clearer the first had far more side noise, hiss. i like the high melodies work you added the production is far better too, the difference shows how you have grown as an artist with far experience now than 3 years ago, nicw work Koga keep em coming

nice work TG, you got a decent grimy feel going on, the mix itself is good an an interpretation which is always good to hear of the genre but like others you need to revisit the kick the sound and tone seem flat to me and the only reason i say that is because its too loud and dominates an otherwise decent track, nice too see a new member too, loads of advice here, collabs, and a good bunch, so join in play your part comment reply and make friends you grow more as an artist, trust me i know.

nice work captain, this track as got bags of groovy going on, i heard Robbie had gone AWOL rumour has it he survived the crash landing and was immediately transported to the medical centre but he was caught trying to warm an ice Goddess, that carries a severe term in the penal colony so he done one, never said goodbye to anyone. remember the Motto when you signed up all them years ago
'never leave a fellow looper behind we consider that a crime'

go find him boss bring him home safely, his family are missing him, safe journey
and the bass was fine for me, it cuts through but some like it loud and grimy great work as always

yeah bro don't be shy if you play your part in the community and you keep bringing good work and commenting on others you'll make good friends and people will offer you also, its all about growing and getting better we all join to have fun, your just as important as everyone else put collab request on your next tell them what you want and see how it goes singers like good tracks with rhythm space for verses and a catch change for a good hook chorus line, i might jump on one if its takes me, i admit im not the greatest but im not garbage either, they also tell me im a good song writer probably my strongest skill along with being a big promoter of our platform and wanting more people to join us so come on in Blackfira and show yourself

nice track bro great intro building to that fire bass, tight melody and drum too, its got variation, the vocal could be a few db higher for me but other than that its a good track. and you dont need to use vocoloids there's plenty singers here or real vocals for download just reach out and ask for a collab with someone you like

Mr Baxter so good to see you and better to here you too Robin, i got your bass popping through. great female vocal nice instrumentation throughout solid drums too bro. hope your well and staying around a bit, its been an age, im still that lovable guy too but im controversial AF now :)) if you get a chance check some of my rap tracks i do lots of singing and rapping now

excellent work Alex Zoots black Peter is a great track anyway but i have to agree this has raised it the contrast in vocal tone and language is outstandingly good possibly your greatest work to date for me anyway, top job

yes bro, good to see you back around and here the flow, nice bars well written, hit the point, 'keep my parents awake' sic line and sheesh was fly bro nice work