As a poet, I appreciate your expression. As a producer, there's one problem that can't be ignored. There are no words spoken until :35 into a 4:44 long track. :35 is enough time for listeners to get annoyed and switch to another track. It's also enough time for a listener to leave you alone altogether. You wouldn't stand on stage silent for :35. Don't let a track play for that long before letting loose. Other than that, I enjoyed it. However, I appreciate the art and understand the effort put forth. The average listener doesn't care about any of that. They want satisfaction.
I like the way this flows. I like how you play on the vocals but then bounce on and off of them. Keep putting them together. Once you get your mix game up, you're good money.
on DoomsDay ft JFL by TheWritersPoet41
on I Will Rule - Ft FarishaMusic And Big Reeg by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
on Estae - Bright Lights (D.O.B Version) by benski
on No Name by benski