Nice, good production. You got touches of modern music arrangements and sound selection in.
You know, jesus is the only help and freedom. When someone else has help and freedom I feel like it's a lie. I'm not a savior, apostle, or anything else. I'm just some dude living my life.
I don't really know jesus. If someone followed me around and I died and they wrote a book about me. Then someone reads that book, do they know me? Maybe something but I don't even know what love is? I know what hate is and if I don't do that maybe I love you? Just a theroy.
Thanks, man. I really appreciate both the feedback and your honesty.
I actually relate to what you said. I've never been comfortable accepting something as truth simply because it's written in a book. To me, truth has to be experienced, not just read. The real question is, what does it mean to know the truth?
For most of my life, I resisted the idea of faith for that very reason. But after facing many challenges and having physical and spiritual encounters I couldn't explain, I felt I had no choice but to seek the answers for myself. That journey led me to the conclusion that no one should believe anything about Jesus if they've never encountered Him personally. I think He knows that too, which is why He reveals Himself to each of us in ways we can understand.
I see it like this. If we were lost in a desert and decided to split up in the hope that one of us might find help, and I came across an oasis with fresh water and a tree bearing good fruit, I'd taste it and discover that it was good. The first thing I'd do is mark the path and go looking for my friends to tell them what I'd found.
I wouldn't force anyone to drink the water or eat the fruit, though, because that's a choice they have to make for themselves. All I can do is tell them where the oasis is, describe what I experienced, and invite them to come and see. Some of my friends might choose to keep wandering under the scorching sun rather than believe me, especially if they had known me as someone who wasn't trustworthy before I found the oasis, and I'd understand that. Trust has to be earned. Others might even think I'd mistaken a mirage for an oasis and come back with a foolish story. I'd understand that too.
But even then, I could never keep the oasis to myself once I'd found it.
The interesting thing is that, from my own experience, once you truly encounter Him, the questions don't necessarily disappear because everything suddenly makes perfect sense. They disappear because the answer outweighs the questions. It's like the scale tips so heavily in one direction that the doubts no longer carry the same weight. They don't feel suppressed or ignored. They simply lose their grip in the light of what you've experienced.
If anything, I completely understand when someone says, "It's a lie," after hearing something like this. If you were anything like me, someone who carried a heavy stone tablet engraved with questions about God and life from the very beginning, and you climbed the mountain determined to challenge everything, only to come back because what you encountered not only melted the stone in your hands without harming you but also shattered every doubt you carried, then you'll understand.
You'll also understand why the people still down in the valley, holding nothing but ink, paper, and questions, might laugh when you return and say, "There truly is heaven and hell."
I don't blame them. I was once standing beside them.
Sounds like a big mix. Hard to handle the full sound space with a lot going on. I had a similar problem with my trance project I'm working on. Volume is so high it appears to be clipping. To help you out some if you would like, and I'm sure there is more than one way to fix this mixing issue. With multiple instruments or sound clips you get extra gain. When adding some types of effects to them makes it even worse.
I used a limiter on master and cut the db on input back to around 5-5.5 db. Play with this area some mixes need more or less db. Just cut it back until most of the clipping goes away. Doesn't have to be perfect but get it close. Just my theory to help with all the extra db gain.
Interesting advice, so I usually cut the dB about -3 to gain dynamics. I hate over-compression (Loudness wars), and I listen in many different types of environments to understand how it sounds on the worst and best equipment. Also sending it out to people whom I trust will tell me if it's good or not. I do know from the monitors that it is not clipping at all, as well as the Izotope Ozone indicators. On the best (Bose 12 speakers in a high-end car system, and a high-end Paradigm system), it's amazing; even on a mono track on a basic phone, it's just fine and very clear. So it's very fascinating to me what you are listening to it on. As I am always open to feedback, I do have that question. Also taking a cue from the Bryan Ferry world of mixing, there are quite a lot of tracks going on and sometimes subtly. I hate basic dance tracks that literally use only 8 to 10 tracks on the mix as they really lack depth. I usually tend to end up with 40- 80, sometimes. Curious why you make that statement and if anyone else hears that. look forward to that feedback @all
The beeping part flows really well. When it drops the choir part plays it's like my brain still heard the beeping but it's gone. Cool. Love it when that happens.
Nice drops and arrangements. I like the background part where it's low in volume and trippy.
Well done. Nailed the trance or hypnotic style. Very important. I'll keep listening to the other parts and arrangements. Good simple transition. Wonder what it sounds like with the white noise gone? My transition can be rough sometimes so I have to do a lot to make it happen. Easy is better.
So I'm done with the 1st section and now your rebuilding and used the white nosie again. I didn't feel the transition was as smooth. Still ok cause everything else is bad booty.
Yup I'd say 95 out of 100. Personally I would transition the second part by mixing the white noise with the lead. Start the lead low and filtered and bring it up with a gate, reverb and delay. That way the transition would be cool different and the reuse is acceptable of the white nosie.
Yeah we are a real mix up of genres and emotions - I write all of our songs around a particular emotion and Oli works on building up the vibe musically and Kate Bush is my all time fave - saw her live back in 1979 and it was magical ;)
I released a riddim track yesterday. Doesn't look like riddim is very popular here on looperman.
I think it's to confusing for people. I'm not sure they understand it. Mostly hypnotic beats so should be a dopamine hit that you can notice. Messes with their head so they blame the music I guess.
That's funny. I did the birthday track too. I didn't even plan it that way either.
Anyway I gave this track a go and even stopped it cause I already know it's live and outstanding. I'll go and Finnish song now. I'm sure I'll like other tracks by you too.
Not bad at all. I like the effects on vocals. The sounds of the signers grab your attention. Beats are creative enough to listen too.
I been where your at now. Your location that is. Im no stranger to Kentucky. I was born in Cincinnati Ohio. Live in Lexington, Somerset, Corbin, and Williamsburg. I worked in Louisville KY doing retail resets for home Depot.
Not bad at all. I'm not an expert on boom bap but I know it when I hear it. Nailed it. I did notice that the main lead appears to be background and the other instruments that normally are background are in front. Main lead is very background.
I kinda like that. Not exactly sure what others would think or if this is just the way boombap is? Im doubting thats how its always done. The fact you can pull that off is saying something I think.
Very mellow and laidback feel and sound. Just relaxing, I can tolerate a lot of music with that feel to it.
I think overall its excellent and risky but sounds good to me.
OMG your destroying the phonk gerne! Im kidding of course. This was different but yet pretty cool. If someone just turned this on and I heard it, I would know its phonk.
There are people who think it should only be memphis rap. lol whatever.
Bro, you're absolutely right, there are no rules in art. I just do what I feel =) Music genres keep evolving precisely because some people take risks and do things in their own style
Yeah or hell yeah! Kind of thought this might be good right off rip. Even if you used Ai, I guess its very useful for stuff like this. I cant sing or write so if I really needed a signer and lyrics I would use Ai as well.
Im not into the heavy metal music anymore but I used to be back in my high school years and early twenties. I still liked this song anyway.
Hey I downloaded the song and would like to upload this song. It's yours but if you allow me to upload it I'll tell the story about it in the description.
Pretty sic. Your drops are your own. I really like it. I'm watching YouTube tutorials for professional drop creation and the right sound design is 1st step.
Thanks so much for your honest insight, JW. I really appreciate your kind words. Your feedback means a lot to me, and Im truly grateful you took the time to listen and share your thoughts.
Yes I'm sure there is always room for improvement and we should always push ourselves to achieve higher.
I'm mostly self taught and not close to being a professional. My dubstep track I'm a boss dose have some sampling in it but from the reception I got appears to be the best thing I created so far and Having difficulty doing better than that track.
Time isn't on anybody's side either, I'm 48 so ##### I might die before I can get into sound design and melody creation myself. Lol
Nice to see that your not scared to public release your music for feedback. I have known people to keep decent and really good music private cause they didn't feel it was good enough.
My dubstep track is located here if you want to listen. I'm sure it has lots of improvement that could be made too but was the best I could do at the time. I'm simply not a professional and doubt I could achieve that anyway not really a goal in my life right now.
I'm trying to understand how to improve my mixing and mastering. I'm self-taught, now and forever, haha. I learn by watching YouTube videos and experimenting, but I have a bad ear for this; I struggle to notice differences.
I just listened to "I'm a Boss," and I think it's a great composition. For me, creating something like that is very complexso many sounds, so many effects, percussion... ugh, I'm not capable of doing something like that. Besides, the sounds are incredibly clear. And I've seen that you have more great tracks; I'll listen to more when I have some time.
At 48, you have half your life ahead of you to keep learning. I'm turning 62, I started at Christmas, and I see that I'm not making much progress; it's very difficult for me. But it was something I always wanted to do: create music. I decided to learn, but only for myself, for my own satisfaction. I wouldn't have signed up here or anywhere else if I hadn't realized it was the right thing to do to thank Odarka for letting me download her voice. But I'm embarrassed to share what I do without knowing anything about music; I use a Circle of Fifths to help me with the chords, haha.
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You know, jesus is the only help and freedom. When someone else has help and freedom I feel like it's a lie. I'm not a savior, apostle, or anything else. I'm just some dude living my life.
I don't really know jesus. If someone followed me around and I died and they wrote a book about me. Then someone reads that book, do they know me? Maybe something but I don't even know what love is? I know what hate is and if I don't do that maybe I love you? Just a theroy.
I actually relate to what you said. I've never been comfortable accepting something as truth simply because it's written in a book. To me, truth has to be experienced, not just read. The real question is, what does it mean to know the truth?
For most of my life, I resisted the idea of faith for that very reason. But after facing many challenges and having physical and spiritual encounters I couldn't explain, I felt I had no choice but to seek the answers for myself. That journey led me to the conclusion that no one should believe anything about Jesus if they've never encountered Him personally. I think He knows that too, which is why He reveals Himself to each of us in ways we can understand.
I see it like this. If we were lost in a desert and decided to split up in the hope that one of us might find help, and I came across an oasis with fresh water and a tree bearing good fruit, I'd taste it and discover that it was good. The first thing I'd do is mark the path and go looking for my friends to tell them what I'd found.
I wouldn't force anyone to drink the water or eat the fruit, though, because that's a choice they have to make for themselves. All I can do is tell them where the oasis is, describe what I experienced, and invite them to come and see. Some of my friends might choose to keep wandering under the scorching sun rather than believe me, especially if they had known me as someone who wasn't trustworthy before I found the oasis, and I'd understand that. Trust has to be earned. Others might even think I'd mistaken a mirage for an oasis and come back with a foolish story. I'd understand that too.
But even then, I could never keep the oasis to myself once I'd found it.
The interesting thing is that, from my own experience, once you truly encounter Him, the questions don't necessarily disappear because everything suddenly makes perfect sense. They disappear because the answer outweighs the questions. It's like the scale tips so heavily in one direction that the doubts no longer carry the same weight. They don't feel suppressed or ignored. They simply lose their grip in the light of what you've experienced.
If anything, I completely understand when someone says, "It's a lie," after hearing something like this. If you were anything like me, someone who carried a heavy stone tablet engraved with questions about God and life from the very beginning, and you climbed the mountain determined to challenge everything, only to come back because what you encountered not only melted the stone in your hands without harming you but also shattered every doubt you carried, then you'll understand.
You'll also understand why the people still down in the valley, holding nothing but ink, paper, and questions, might laugh when you return and say, "There truly is heaven and hell."
I don't blame them. I was once standing beside them.
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I used a limiter on master and cut the db on input back to around 5-5.5 db. Play with this area some mixes need more or less db. Just cut it back until most of the clipping goes away. Doesn't have to be perfect but get it close. Just my theory to help with all the extra db gain.
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Nice drops and arrangements. I like the background part where it's low in volume and trippy.
Nice job.
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So I'm done with the 1st section and now your rebuilding and used the white nosie again. I didn't feel the transition was as smooth. Still ok cause everything else is bad booty.
Yup I'd say 95 out of 100. Personally I would transition the second part by mixing the white noise with the lead. Start the lead low and filtered and bring it up with a gate, reverb and delay. That way the transition would be cool different and the reuse is acceptable of the white nosie.
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I always like weird music, the screech's were good. Good attention grabber. Also noticed you like to try different genres of music. Keep it up.
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Had a lay back feel for me with a beautiful voice with a touch of emotion to it.
Put together very well.
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I think it's to confusing for people. I'm not sure they understand it. Mostly hypnotic beats so should be a dopamine hit that you can notice. Messes with their head so they blame the music I guess.
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I feel more like a party people when it comes to music. Nice work. My favorite by you so far.
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Anyway I gave this track a go and even stopped it cause I already know it's live and outstanding. I'll go and Finnish song now. I'm sure I'll like other tracks by you too.
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I been where your at now. Your location that is. Im no stranger to Kentucky. I was born in Cincinnati Ohio. Live in Lexington, Somerset, Corbin, and Williamsburg. I worked in Louisville KY doing retail resets for home Depot.
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I kinda like that. Not exactly sure what others would think or if this is just the way boombap is? Im doubting thats how its always done. The fact you can pull that off is saying something I think.
Very mellow and laidback feel and sound. Just relaxing, I can tolerate a lot of music with that feel to it.
I think overall its excellent and risky but sounds good to me.
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There are people who think it should only be memphis rap. lol whatever.
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Im not into the heavy metal music anymore but I used to be back in my high school years and early twenties. I still liked this song anyway.
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This was a good one.
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I'm mostly self taught and not close to being a professional. My dubstep track I'm a boss dose have some sampling in it but from the reception I got appears to be the best thing I created so far and Having difficulty doing better than that track.
Time isn't on anybody's side either, I'm 48 so ##### I might die before I can get into sound design and melody creation myself. Lol
Nice to see that your not scared to public release your music for feedback. I have known people to keep decent and really good music private cause they didn't feel it was good enough.
My dubstep track is located here if you want to listen. I'm sure it has lots of improvement that could be made too but was the best I could do at the time. I'm simply not a professional and doubt I could achieve that anyway not really a goal in my life right now.
https://on.soundcloud.com/BC4DSJXCHYMzOMeYBa
Some samples and loops came from looperman.
I just listened to "I'm a Boss," and I think it's a great composition. For me, creating something like that is very complexso many sounds, so many effects, percussion... ugh, I'm not capable of doing something like that. Besides, the sounds are incredibly clear. And I've seen that you have more great tracks; I'll listen to more when I have some time.
At 48, you have half your life ahead of you to keep learning. I'm turning 62, I started at Christmas, and I see that I'm not making much progress; it's very difficult for me. But it was something I always wanted to do: create music. I decided to learn, but only for myself, for my own satisfaction. I wouldn't have signed up here or anywhere else if I hadn't realized it was the right thing to do to thank Odarka for letting me download her voice. But I'm embarrassed to share what I do without knowing anything about music; I use a Circle of Fifths to help me with the chords, haha.
Best regards, Juan Carlos
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Best regards