Hey Jadon! This has great potential buddy. I feel this! Since u asked for help I can give my humble advise at some things.
The intro is great, nothing much to do bout. It's builds pretty big which suggest a darn good beatdrop. Right now it's sounds to flimsy with only the saw 8bit mario imho. Maybe using the low ranges of the nice square synth u used in the beginning can help make it sound more PHAT. Deadmau5-ish randomness is what expect hearing this. In the break section the melody is off key at some parts although I like the two together i must say! Hope i've helped a bit ;) Cheers FF
Ah, Massive is without a doubt, incredible! Too bad I am unable to load up anymore presets on it. But, as of now, just from recently downloading it, I don't think I'll have to anytime soon. Thanks for the comment man!
Think that harderthantherest meant to say u improved the flow of the beat. And I must agree. Ur spitting skills are really awesome. U have a hint of Kanye in ur sound though I don't wanna compare u to someone else :) U guys work together nicely.
hey brillbilly, nice work mate, really like how the percussion-synth follows the melody. Great vibe! Takes me back to India for some reason. Keep it up;)
Hey Cruc, this seems the in the direction I'm looking at too. I like to compose some songs with a deep though funky electric sound. This works as an inspiration to me. I really like the 'chorus', it has great progression in it. And the communicating basslines at the 'sides' is a nice find actually. It grabs ur attention more. And there's no other way to have two baselines talk to each other. ;)
In between at 2:30 the rythm gets to loose and crowded in my humble opinion, but I really like the feel of the track. Great job mate. Chrs FF
Thanks, I'm glad you like the track. I was very influenced by two songs Roxy Music "The Main Thing" and Peter Gabriel's "Digging in the dirt" in the making of this song.
Harderthan, awesome beat, there are some true samplekings in here! Audiotism, these rhyms are sick, stick to beat like glue and fits wonderful with the flow. I'm impressed!
Sometimes i hear the beat get pushed to the background though, maybe EQ a lil' the high freq to let the beat also pop under the S's in ur rhyme. Other than that, very solid!
First of all thanks for your listen and comment!
Second of all thanks for the very constructive advice, i agree with you, the beat sometimes fades away under my vocals, im still in a learning process of how to mix my vocals correctly. I will however take this advice with me and use it in my upcoming songs. Thanks alot.
~Mate, i reaally love the intro, but then the synth at 33 sec doesn't seem to fit and the song loses my attention. At 1:00 minute it continues as expected and wanted. Just to give ye some feedback :). Keep it up!
Hahaha, this was in ur trash? You perfectionist you.. :)
I'm a sucker for that 'squishy' synth at 2:00. I would build more around that if you are looking for an advise. But thats my pref.
Great work man, sorry for my ignorance, European folk here, but is this a speech of Kennedy? I like the beat and your rap very much. Very prof. If you meant to send out a warning, this does the work. Thanks for sharing!
Hi Darkreine, this really good! I love the amazingly full and deep synthwork! Great bassline, especially around 4:40 the melody is taking me to places I've never been before.
As for the de- synced beat, there is parts in the song where it really helps the rhythm, an makes this track really original and stand out. But in some parts I have the feeling the DJ is messing up. That's the danger of such a complex beat. But overall amazing work!
I for one like the vocals a lot. It makes me wanna say pe-te-ke-ta-ta-pe-te-ke-ta-ra-te-ke-ta-pe-ta all day long. After 3 minutes it had me laughing so loud, you know those jokes when if you repeat it isn't funny anymore but if you repeat it long enough it becomes funny again? That feeling. Faved and downloaded. Big Tune!
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The intro is great, nothing much to do bout. It's builds pretty big which suggest a darn good beatdrop. Right now it's sounds to flimsy with only the saw 8bit mario imho. Maybe using the low ranges of the nice square synth u used in the beginning can help make it sound more PHAT. Deadmau5-ish randomness is what expect hearing this. In the break section the melody is off key at some parts although I like the two together i must say! Hope i've helped a bit ;) Cheers FF
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I get that india vibe too.!
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In between at 2:30 the rythm gets to loose and crowded in my humble opinion, but I really like the feel of the track. Great job mate. Chrs FF
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Sometimes i hear the beat get pushed to the background though, maybe EQ a lil' the high freq to let the beat also pop under the S's in ur rhyme. Other than that, very solid!
Second of all thanks for the very constructive advice, i agree with you, the beat sometimes fades away under my vocals, im still in a learning process of how to mix my vocals correctly. I will however take this advice with me and use it in my upcoming songs. Thanks alot.
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I'm a sucker for that 'squishy' synth at 2:00. I would build more around that if you are looking for an advise. But thats my pref.
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Great work man, sorry for my ignorance, European folk here, but is this a speech of Kennedy? I like the beat and your rap very much. Very prof. If you meant to send out a warning, this does the work. Thanks for sharing!
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Then go to the front of the class,collect a gold star and tell all that i gave you a merrit and A+ for your whole attention.!
cheers man!...party hard!
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I love orbital...I love ish too lol
Most of my music is more ish than non-ish!
Thanks for droppin in on this!
peace man!
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As for the de- synced beat, there is parts in the song where it really helps the rhythm, an makes this track really original and stand out. But in some parts I have the feeling the DJ is messing up. That's the danger of such a complex beat. But overall amazing work!
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