That intro is really cool. Has so much Air in it. Great stuff. You should build on that and introduce some extra synths in it to play with melody! Great stuff Beerling.
Very peculiar song, great mysterious connection with JJ's great acapella. I like it a lot. Only around 2:33 seems a bit off, might be wrong though. Great stuff mate.
First, thank you, and yes it's a mistake using a duplicated voice track, I try to make chords for vocals.. but yes at 2:33 the 2nd voice is set at a wrong key (I use celemony to re-tune voice).
HI! Man, you are developing like crazy! :) I really, really like the first 'chorus' and comes back at 1:40 I believe. That's just awesome. The changeups I'm not so sure about. After the chorus i think you still need some glue. I mean extra chords to make it less of shock if u know what I mean. No problem to go to another key. But maybe a 'pivot' chord will do the trick. I'm not pro in arranging, but I use some basic schemes to help me write. I decide which rootkey a track is gonna be and write around that.
this scheme was really helpful to me, wish someone gave it to me earlier. :) Then when you decide another key is going to be the root note in a break for instance, (I) I think chord II and IV of your first choice key are used mostly to pivot it.
If you have an Smartphone I use an app called 'suggester'. Search chord progression in the app store. In this you can choose certain keys and build reaaally easy some chord progressions. Hope I've helped a bit! Maybe you can find some extra chords here!
All this is just a help, you're absolutely not bounded to such theory. Cheers!
You have to be an angel (or something similar to one...)
Thank you SO MUCH for all those advice and suggestions! I'm taking a small pause from this track now but will come back and all what you wrote will be very educational and useful when I continue.
WUT? This. is. mad. Glad yer back! This is sick Audio. Seriously. This is so going in my playlist ASAP. Great vocal effect. Perfect combo with the beat. *presses play for third time*
AWeSoME@! That off-beat thing is running like a mofo! Faved man! There's just a little part where it is to much to my liking at 2;06 till 2;26. But other than that man, this is sick. Great rappin by buddahman too.
Thank you for the feedback! I know what you mean about that part, I kept tweaking the change ups and I may have overdone it. I'm gonna go back and review. Peace.
Reminds me a bit of Sade, very smooth. I feel it. Your voice is wonderful. Just a lil' to much volume that makes it crackle sometimes. If you could reduce those peaks in your mix this is even more great! I'd like to collab with you sometime. I have a beat that will suit your voice. :)
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this scheme was really helpful to me, wish someone gave it to me earlier. :) Then when you decide another key is going to be the root note in a break for instance, (I) I think chord II and IV of your first choice key are used mostly to pivot it.
If you have an Smartphone I use an app called 'suggester'. Search chord progression in the app store. In this you can choose certain keys and build reaaally easy some chord progressions. Hope I've helped a bit! Maybe you can find some extra chords here!
All this is just a help, you're absolutely not bounded to such theory. Cheers!
Thank you SO MUCH for all those advice and suggestions! I'm taking a small pause from this track now but will come back and all what you wrote will be very educational and useful when I continue.
Take care! =)
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