This is a rly awesome track man! My only suggestion is that you should turn the Resonance down for your filters because it can be quite piercing sometimes. I think in FL Studio for the free filter it's called Q. But other then that, awesome man!
Wow this is the first decent track I've heard on this site in a while1 very professional. I'm not the best in the world but I got some xp. Would you consider collaboration in the future? Check out my track "Future Sensations" to examine my work and see if it's a possiblity :)
Ehh ok I guess. I'm not goin to lie to u, but I felt like the synth u used at bout 0:30 wasn't rly mixing well. But nice effort, jus dnt expect a Tiesto track from ur first ;)
ooooo I LOVE the last part! but one thing, u should work on ur traansitions, cuz the need to be more smooth. But other then that it was good ;) and maybe could u check out my stuff? I could sure use some tips from u!
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thanks for the review, i'll be ure to hav a look at those transitions, u really shouldn't be advertising ur tracks ina review but im still gonna go chek em out anywayz :)
Not too bad man :) but ur kick is very important to a track so search the internet for some good wav file kicks. Also use sub bass w the kick, it rly helps :) oh and make sure to check out my stuff too
Hmmm, well I thought it had to some good synths :) But u may wanna to get a lil more powerful kick,and some fx. Go to google and search vengeance sound. They have AWESOME samples and trust me, u will be AMAZED! But a good track man ;) And maybe can ya check out my tracks too? thanks!
I thought u had good fx too, but u need to have more of an opening. U need to tease the listeners w only giving them tiny bits of the synth at a time. Make then want it! Got the idea? ;) and maybe return a favor by checking out my work ok? Nice job man :)
Good beats man. I can tell ur more of a minimal house sorta guy ;) but if ur after very BIG, venue style techno add reverb to ur beats and synths! it rly needs it. but do it jus for the intro, and add reverb and delay to ur crash, and the music rises and builds and u build tension in the listeners stomach w excitement and then u have that big BOOM! and u drop the music for 4 beats and then u drop the reverb and go back to minimal. Get the idea?? lol but nice man. And check out my tracks alright? :) Thanks
Yea I'd have to agree the do kinda sound like loops, but good ;)
another thing is the synths u used... a lil boring in my opinion...BUT that can be EASILY fixed w reverb. Cuz my guess is ur using Sytrus, and there good synths...but the lack reverb and delay which can be good if ur the customizing type. that's why alot of pple use Nexus is cuz the work is done for them. but good job man ;)
FIRST up WHERE DID U GET THAT BASS!!??? AMAZING!!! lol I did like it all but u can kinda tell alot of that stuff is loops cuz of it lack of matching up w everything else. But I LOVED ur fx u used! Great job. Although u may wanna change the name cuz that could scare alot of pple away ya kno? but nice work ;)
Hey Uum well one thing is that u rly have good beats but it gets lonely w jus beats.. u need some sorta atmosphere at LEAST.. and if u dont have any other instruments running stay away from panning cuz that hurts a persons ears after a while. But good work. And also u were missing a key element, A BASS!!! lol but nice job and check out some of my tracks :)
Oh my goodness!! I LOVE it!! and that is why I would like to ask a favor. I am not only a trance and Techno music artist but I also am a video game developer, and have a team of designers and we want to use ur sound for our game! u can pm me so we can talk more bout it. thanks! And get back to me ASAP
Well for ur opening beats I would rly suggest compression. U rly need it it for ur kicks and maybe a little for ur claps. Also for ur claps I would suggest about 10% reverb. Trust me, it needs it. I don't mean to always seem negitive but how can u ever get better?
I did love the Bass riff! That was rly good and the fill that was awesome! I wish I could write Bass like that, but I'm more of a melody man. Oh make sure to check out my tracks since I checked out urs. Anyways nice work ;)
I like the start up! With all the beats and stuff but I jus feel the vocals just don't go well w the music for some reason. I guess it's just the fact of when I use someone elses work I can't rly feel it that well if u kno what I mean. Nice though I'd rly like to kno what u used for the start up that was cool :D
Yes I was hook from the first couple seconds!! But I got a really good suggestion: The melody when it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down (something like that, anyways as a fill after about the third loop,at the last part where u go down u should go so it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down
Down
Down
Down
I know its kinda hard to understand, but do u get what i'm sayin?
if you send me the midi file to my email which I'll private message u, I'll do it for u
Well it's alright, not bad. Although the transitions aren't very smooth, and it doesn't flow that well. U need to speed up ur start up because after the first minute u start to lose ur listeners. But keep up the good work. :) And check out my tracks
Good job some of those loops u used were well used I used the same ones for my first song I did but nearly as good as u! Great work. The synth though kinda bores me after a while. Try changing it up a bit.
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acid planet, in one of their free loop give a ways, i think... or it might hav been here :)
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thanks for the review, i'll be ure to hav a look at those transitions, u really shouldn't be advertising ur tracks ina review but im still gonna go chek em out anywayz :)
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another thing is the synths u used... a lil boring in my opinion...BUT that can be EASILY fixed w reverb. Cuz my guess is ur using Sytrus, and there good synths...but the lack reverb and delay which can be good if ur the customizing type. that's why alot of pple use Nexus is cuz the work is done for them. but good job man ;)
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I did love the Bass riff! That was rly good and the fill that was awesome! I wish I could write Bass like that, but I'm more of a melody man. Oh make sure to check out my tracks since I checked out urs. Anyways nice work ;)
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up up
up down down
up down
down (something like that, anyways as a fill after about the third loop,at the last part where u go down u should go so it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down
Down
Down
Down
I know its kinda hard to understand, but do u get what i'm sayin?
if you send me the midi file to my email which I'll private message u, I'll do it for u
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but I do instumentals I just can't find anything
that matches what I do
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