Thank you very much, I appreciate it! I do my best to create electronic tracks with a very different kind of sound than what most people are used to. (Without being too strange, lol.)
I LOVING THIS i too did a Mario yoshi version mix you should check it out my friend is named Meliner Star in Yoshis land, thank you for sharing one fun track.
GREAT WORK ! i kind dont fit the title to the song this sound more like a battle song or a song to give you energy to fight back, LOVEIT MAN for me it dose,nt need vocals it fine like it is.What it need it A KICK ASS SOLOING MAN !
solo's didn't make it today! lol!,rule #1 with me: i spend only one day on a song. I write on the fly and record so the more complicated the song gets more likely i'll forget how to play it!! Yeah the title isn't very original but its hard to give a song title without lyrics...thanx for the review!
It sounded very good until the drums came , i find it should of stayed all acoustic for me it sounded better , other thing i think you should sing a few tones down you sound stressing in the chorus try adding a female singer to help you out in the chorus or combining your voice with hers , well just my 2 cents as you say is not finished maybe consider it, good luck.
Wow love the love MELLOW ROCK BALLAD , intense ver very nice job y would love to put some lyrics to this master peace. Thank you for sharing my friend.
And i thought i was the only one doing kitty songs ? great work ,great idea very original if you like you can cheack out my Kitty song too a tribute to one fellow member, i thought the Big Kitty was going to sing this time ? ahhhh !
it's in the right Genre , well done i think it needs some more elements to be more complete , like more changes and lead loopy sounds, Overall good track !
Nice job on the guitar not to sure if the rapping is compatible with the concept but i think with a little more work it can be better,Good luck friend.
I think you have a copyright issue here so you better attend to it my friend, This Song original is from
Edward Cullen ,
song name ( Bellas Lullaby Rivers Flows in ) Maybe you took the idea in piano and remix it and added some drums and Efxs BUT ' this song is not yours.Forgive me for the intrusion but we musicians have watch our backs.
I said in the name of the song that is by Yiruma, because the sheet version that i have is signed by him. :-?? and anyway i am not using this to make any money :P just posteted here and on youtube asa a cover. and when i said entirely by me i ment the beat part and the cover, not the melody itself because everybody knows this one
in what part of the song this suppose to be Blues ? Anyway it sound more to a ChillOut Genre and it was very pleasant to hear thank you for sharing my friend.
I know you can do a lot better so don't quit for NO body OK ! look it's simple try to practice tapping your feet 4 TIMES IN THE FLOOR when you're going to rap a song this will keep you in timing with the track.Another thing when you recor your voice in any mic never sing to close to it ( why )? because it will CLIP ( clipping is when the volume red line hit the red part you don't want that ) remember it dosent matter how low you record the software can always bring up or down the volume of the track if your doing some Editing, try to learn how to edit song in a recording software use anyone you like ( MAGIX,ACID.SOUND FORGE EXCT ) there are a lot of them in the NET so you pick one and start editin simple stuff so you can learn then how to edit your stuff ok my friend ' GOOD LUCK '
Thanks for the advices man. I'll practice more for the next time. Thanks for clipping advice (i know I clipped, next version i'll re-record the vocals to don't clip, and make the music longer, because i had another verse, but the music was too small). I don't really like editing, but i'll try to learn the basics of Acid Pro whenever i find a good tutorial. Thanks for all the advices, you looks really nice!
See ! Music isn't about just what you like or your friends like it's about what has meaning and can touch people you can,t even speak there language. Music can be as i always say ( UNIVERSAL LANGUAGE ) if you try to see it that way then you will know what is really meaning of music making, You did a great job id would say in some parts you mixed some drums that thru me off a bit on the vibe that was going on but other than that you get the hang of it, Take care my friend.
I thank you for your comments I deeply appreciate it. I am glad there are people who are able to give good critique. I know some of the beats threw off the whole song but like I said I am experimenting with sounds. I just like listening to music when it has meaning and depth.
tHATS THE CONSEQUENCES OF AUTO TUNE ! off KEY SINGING '' great work but sometimes is better trying less softwares for the voice, I think if you try you could do a great job singing.Good luck my friend.
hey thx for takin your time to review my track,
i know sometime its better natural, but for that kind of music, i found it totally appropriate, in my opinion...
just to let you know, i use an antares vocal producer witch is hardware, so i cannot correct it after i recorded, thats why i leaved the off key singing for this small demo ;)
thx again for reviewing!
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i know sometime its better natural, but for that kind of music, i found it totally appropriate, in my opinion...
just to let you know, i use an antares vocal producer witch is hardware, so i cannot correct it after i recorded, thats why i leaved the off key singing for this small demo ;)
thx again for reviewing!