Sick man. This my fav of yours currently. Love how the drums just hit. Nobody showin the drums love anymore. Then that f'in guitar sound(or whatever it is) just sick man, lovin it. Love how ya built that beat up.
Nuff said tight. Send it this way as is!
yo thanx brotha , i luv beat's i rememba when i was a child i was imitating drums with my mouth,i guess i got passion to it, you can download it now rom looperman,
peace and thanx for your reviews
Diggin it. Sounds waaay diffrent than I envisioned or have done to original beat it was for. Lovin how you mixed it down to have stand out parts. Likin how ya did a semi voice over with it.
This is what I wanted when I posted the Acappella. One to give me a diffrent insight, and you have done that. Whats funny is I originally spitted this verse faster. Now it seems I shoulda kept it that way lol.
Nice work, feelin this beat.
Send the beat over keith89115@yahoo.com I'll box with it.
Feelin it. Love how the beat gives me that "i'm tip toe'in along" Feel. Excellent use of sounds. Cant tell you nuttin to make it better. I wasnt feelin the "white noise" sound at first. Bassline effectively kills that noise for me though. It just didnt sound organic, which is what I believe you were aimin for.
Nice work. Keep it movin
Man tracks like this piss me off. Almost to the point I shouldent review it. You should do your own thing.
Got people on here giving you credit as a singer, when thats not your voice singing the hook. Thats original hook and voice for that hit song.
Seriously man do you. Im feelin the delivery and the slow down parts. like how you did the word "murk". But ya killin me, didnt have permission to use. Then you didnt even give them credit on your verses/intro/outro or nuttin. Bad way to show character.
I'm sure you can find a beat that matches, here on looper. Go that route.
Damn shame. This ish bangin to me. Been up for half a month and no reviews?
Well allow me.
Beat is tight anthemish. Nice work on buildin that beat up with your vocal. Nice flip on words to keep rhymin. You almost lost me on the hook. Then bam you rhymed yummy, layed that down right and at the last possible second.
Feelin the motto Mic+us=music so simple. But yet explores an enitre picture. Like we aint got ish but a Mic, but I make music suck on it.
Nice work, keep it movin
Feelin it. I like the static sound. But its to loud to me or just to overly done, cant decide. I really like how you actually broke down what you did. Diggin the up tempo jazz feelin.
Nice work.
Well first off. I didnt like the broken class sound. But indeed it made me come to attention to listen. Nice tatic there, if thats what it was intended to do. Do not feel it adds anything besides that though.
Feel you could up the volume on the drums(Im from Cali, I like bass. So this is sorta biased). But indeed feels to quiet to me.
Besides that nice work, feelin it. Gives me a sad vibe off rip. Then on beat change up at 2mins1sec into track. Gives me a rebound like Im back and live for the better good. Like I have overcome and now I am stronger feel.
Feel most people miss that when they make beats. Instrumentals tell stories without lyrics. More so for this genre.
You already have that, nice work. Keep it movin.
Likin it, fresh sounding. I feel like the beat talks to me. Lovin that bass, hits hard and resonates. Cant tell you anything to do better about it.
Nice work.
Never really listened to UK stuff. You make me turn my head and care to listen. Sounds very fresh to my ears, love the accent. Love the scratching, something thats not done much at all these days to me.
I dont need to say its tight, review numbers speak for themselves.
Much love.
Agree with others, vocals way to high. Then you said you cut the bass. Man I love my bass, aint nuttin wrong with my trunk rattlin.
Felt first beat change up, justified a style change up. Its on beat, but you didnt run the change up. Left the beat hangin. Then you change it some after the change up. Drop that on the change up of beat.
But ya know, Im a big fan of people doin them. Keep it movin.
Aint always easy doin it all yourself, much props.
Love the sounds on this beat. Sounds diffrent to my ears. So calm yet violent. Feelin Napoleon "Sippin a blue pacific" Lines are hot "without gettin specific". Was nice. Love how you intro'ed him. You let him build the beat, without him writing it to this beat. Feel alot of people miss that, the rapper should build up the beat.
Nice work, love the beat. Soon as Im done with current 4 projects, I'ma bug you. You just wait.
Feelin it. Substance over style, likin it. Voice overs killin me though. Might be alright through some speakers. But through my headphones, the voice overs are left speaker only. Minor fix. Nice delivery and song writting skills.
Feelin it.
From a rapper stand point. I'd practice freestyling. Freestyling is where you'll find your flow and persona. Meaning don't write it, just hit record and see what you say. Then repeat.
Even if you repeat words, just keep goin. Do a few cuts each to 5 very diffrent beats.
Easiest way to learn to freestyle is settle on a fill in word. like "m***** f*****r" or "im back" or whatever you wanna use to fill in with. Its not a word you ryhme with, but used to help allievate your brain. So you can continue without stoping. Merely fills in the sentence of a bar. After enough time, you wont need a fill in word.
Writting wont really develop your voice/persona/flow. But it will help with lyricism.
Keep it movin.
Wanted to get at you and say thanks for the constructive criticism. I'd been telling my girlfriend I need to learn to freestyle and work on my flow. I'll listen to rappers I enjoy and they can spit for 16 bars are so and flow nicely or even change the flow of the delivery and sound so smooth. Then again, they may use punch ins when recording, I dunno. But either way, I agree it's a skill I need to pick up on.
As Ghost AKA, the name I'm circulation, I'm aware of some things I'd like to talk about. They range from racial integration of the hip hop scene and many of us suffering the same social and financial barriers, to my take on the military having gotten to experience it briefly before being discharged, to even politics and world issues of the day. Of course I want a fun, off the wall song here and there like even Tech N9ne is likely to do that may be about the supernatural or religion, or anything like that.
So I'll try what you're saying bro. If you've got any more tips message me sometime. I appreciate you taking the time to listen as well as try and help a fellow rapper in training so to speak. I preciate it. Peace be with you bro.
Feelin this beat. Likin it alot. Matter of fact Ima go smash it right now. Good work.
Edit- well i was going to smash it. But you dont allow downloads.
If you wanna hear what I'd do to it, email it to me keith89115@yahoo.com I will not post it, just share it with you.
Nice feelin it. Likin that UK accent. Hook is off the chain. And you sir are no UK eminem and that in my book is a good thing. Keep your sound comin, good work. Excellent writting skills with voice execution.
Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
Thanks man, it's a pop track, but I like to think it's quite a sick one. Going to get an actual singer to redo the chorus tho! Haha! Glad you like it man and thanks for taking the time to say so. You should have a listen to my other tracks Blacklisted and Floating castle, that's some of my more underground stuff, featuring some SICK mc's. Peace fam.
I must be on mars. Never heard of DnB till today. Only really ever liked techno/trance music live. But DnB is a diffrent beast.
I too liked the piano very much, good work.
Beat starts off with a EPIC feeling. Gives me goose bumps(no homo). What ever was done to the hook sounds very good. He used good words to match the bassline for the hook. I feel that makes or breaks a hook. What I do not like is, his style on this one. Comes off Eminem-ish to me. Sounds tight, Im just not a fan of that style. Beat definately EPIC though, much props.
Feelin it. Good work with the beat break down. Love piano's, sounds sick with the guitar. Both rappers came with their A game.
Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
Feeling it, like I said though. You dont allow downloads of your instrumentals. Definately feelin the off the wall vibe. Even though it makes me wanna do some Wu-tang-ish shaolin flow.
Not really my thing. But if I was trippin balls, this would set me off right. Melds together good, dont hear any breaks of rythm. Need a hot line to remix let me know.
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Nuff said tight. Send it this way as is!
peace and thanx for your reviews
on Whos Next by StereoMathematics
This is what I wanted when I posted the Acappella. One to give me a diffrent insight, and you have done that. Whats funny is I originally spitted this verse faster. Now it seems I shoulda kept it that way lol.
Nice work, feelin this beat.
Send the beat over keith89115@yahoo.com I'll box with it.
on No Regrets by TheZerit
Nice work. Keep it movin
on Fly by francis2323
Got people on here giving you credit as a singer, when thats not your voice singing the hook. Thats original hook and voice for that hit song.
Seriously man do you. Im feelin the delivery and the slow down parts. like how you did the word "murk". But ya killin me, didnt have permission to use. Then you didnt even give them credit on your verses/intro/outro or nuttin. Bad way to show character.
I'm sure you can find a beat that matches, here on looper. Go that route.
on Big BOI by Pares
Well allow me.
Beat is tight anthemish. Nice work on buildin that beat up with your vocal. Nice flip on words to keep rhymin. You almost lost me on the hook. Then bam you rhymed yummy, layed that down right and at the last possible second.
Feelin the motto Mic+us=music so simple. But yet explores an enitre picture. Like we aint got ish but a Mic, but I make music suck on it.
Nice work, keep it movin
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Nice work.
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Feel you could up the volume on the drums(Im from Cali, I like bass. So this is sorta biased). But indeed feels to quiet to me.
Besides that nice work, feelin it. Gives me a sad vibe off rip. Then on beat change up at 2mins1sec into track. Gives me a rebound like Im back and live for the better good. Like I have overcome and now I am stronger feel.
Feel most people miss that when they make beats. Instrumentals tell stories without lyrics. More so for this genre.
You already have that, nice work. Keep it movin.
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Nice work.
on PUBLIC ENEMY vocal perfect by phantomhim
I dont need to say its tight, review numbers speak for themselves.
Much love.
Thanks again fam, 1.
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Felt first beat change up, justified a style change up. Its on beat, but you didnt run the change up. Left the beat hangin. Then you change it some after the change up. Drop that on the change up of beat.
But ya know, Im a big fan of people doin them. Keep it movin.
Aint always easy doin it all yourself, much props.
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Nice work, love the beat. Soon as Im done with current 4 projects, I'ma bug you. You just wait.
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Feelin it.
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Even if you repeat words, just keep goin. Do a few cuts each to 5 very diffrent beats.
Easiest way to learn to freestyle is settle on a fill in word. like "m***** f*****r" or "im back" or whatever you wanna use to fill in with. Its not a word you ryhme with, but used to help allievate your brain. So you can continue without stoping. Merely fills in the sentence of a bar. After enough time, you wont need a fill in word.
Writting wont really develop your voice/persona/flow. But it will help with lyricism.
Keep it movin.
As Ghost AKA, the name I'm circulation, I'm aware of some things I'd like to talk about. They range from racial integration of the hip hop scene and many of us suffering the same social and financial barriers, to my take on the military having gotten to experience it briefly before being discharged, to even politics and world issues of the day. Of course I want a fun, off the wall song here and there like even Tech N9ne is likely to do that may be about the supernatural or religion, or anything like that.
So I'll try what you're saying bro. If you've got any more tips message me sometime. I appreciate you taking the time to listen as well as try and help a fellow rapper in training so to speak. I preciate it. Peace be with you bro.
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Edit- well i was going to smash it. But you dont allow downloads.
If you wanna hear what I'd do to it, email it to me keith89115@yahoo.com I will not post it, just share it with you.
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Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
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I too liked the piano very much, good work.
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
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Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
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