Agree with others, vocals way to high. Then you said you cut the bass. Man I love my bass, aint nuttin wrong with my trunk rattlin.
Felt first beat change up, justified a style change up. Its on beat, but you didnt run the change up. Left the beat hangin. Then you change it some after the change up. Drop that on the change up of beat.
But ya know, Im a big fan of people doin them. Keep it movin.
Aint always easy doin it all yourself, much props.
Love the sounds on this beat. Sounds diffrent to my ears. So calm yet violent. Feelin Napoleon "Sippin a blue pacific" Lines are hot "without gettin specific". Was nice. Love how you intro'ed him. You let him build the beat, without him writing it to this beat. Feel alot of people miss that, the rapper should build up the beat.
Nice work, love the beat. Soon as Im done with current 4 projects, I'ma bug you. You just wait.
Feelin it. Substance over style, likin it. Voice overs killin me though. Might be alright through some speakers. But through my headphones, the voice overs are left speaker only. Minor fix. Nice delivery and song writting skills.
Feelin it.
From a rapper stand point. I'd practice freestyling. Freestyling is where you'll find your flow and persona. Meaning don't write it, just hit record and see what you say. Then repeat.
Even if you repeat words, just keep goin. Do a few cuts each to 5 very diffrent beats.
Easiest way to learn to freestyle is settle on a fill in word. like "m***** f*****r" or "im back" or whatever you wanna use to fill in with. Its not a word you ryhme with, but used to help allievate your brain. So you can continue without stoping. Merely fills in the sentence of a bar. After enough time, you wont need a fill in word.
Writting wont really develop your voice/persona/flow. But it will help with lyricism.
Keep it movin.
Wanted to get at you and say thanks for the constructive criticism. I'd been telling my girlfriend I need to learn to freestyle and work on my flow. I'll listen to rappers I enjoy and they can spit for 16 bars are so and flow nicely or even change the flow of the delivery and sound so smooth. Then again, they may use punch ins when recording, I dunno. But either way, I agree it's a skill I need to pick up on.
As Ghost AKA, the name I'm circulation, I'm aware of some things I'd like to talk about. They range from racial integration of the hip hop scene and many of us suffering the same social and financial barriers, to my take on the military having gotten to experience it briefly before being discharged, to even politics and world issues of the day. Of course I want a fun, off the wall song here and there like even Tech N9ne is likely to do that may be about the supernatural or religion, or anything like that.
So I'll try what you're saying bro. If you've got any more tips message me sometime. I appreciate you taking the time to listen as well as try and help a fellow rapper in training so to speak. I preciate it. Peace be with you bro.
Nice feelin it. Likin that UK accent. Hook is off the chain. And you sir are no UK eminem and that in my book is a good thing. Keep your sound comin, good work. Excellent writting skills with voice execution.
Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
Thanks man, it's a pop track, but I like to think it's quite a sick one. Going to get an actual singer to redo the chorus tho! Haha! Glad you like it man and thanks for taking the time to say so. You should have a listen to my other tracks Blacklisted and Floating castle, that's some of my more underground stuff, featuring some SICK mc's. Peace fam.
I must be on mars. Never heard of DnB till today. Only really ever liked techno/trance music live. But DnB is a diffrent beast.
I too liked the piano very much, good work.
Beat starts off with a EPIC feeling. Gives me goose bumps(no homo). What ever was done to the hook sounds very good. He used good words to match the bassline for the hook. I feel that makes or breaks a hook. What I do not like is, his style on this one. Comes off Eminem-ish to me. Sounds tight, Im just not a fan of that style. Beat definately EPIC though, much props.
Feelin it. Good work with the beat break down. Love piano's, sounds sick with the guitar. Both rappers came with their A game.
Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
Feeling it, like I said though. You dont allow downloads of your instrumentals. Definately feelin the off the wall vibe. Even though it makes me wanna do some Wu-tang-ish shaolin flow.
Not really my thing. But if I was trippin balls, this would set me off right. Melds together good, dont hear any breaks of rythm. Need a hot line to remix let me know.
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Felt first beat change up, justified a style change up. Its on beat, but you didnt run the change up. Left the beat hangin. Then you change it some after the change up. Drop that on the change up of beat.
But ya know, Im a big fan of people doin them. Keep it movin.
Aint always easy doin it all yourself, much props.
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Nice work, love the beat. Soon as Im done with current 4 projects, I'ma bug you. You just wait.
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Feelin it.
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Even if you repeat words, just keep goin. Do a few cuts each to 5 very diffrent beats.
Easiest way to learn to freestyle is settle on a fill in word. like "m***** f*****r" or "im back" or whatever you wanna use to fill in with. Its not a word you ryhme with, but used to help allievate your brain. So you can continue without stoping. Merely fills in the sentence of a bar. After enough time, you wont need a fill in word.
Writting wont really develop your voice/persona/flow. But it will help with lyricism.
Keep it movin.
As Ghost AKA, the name I'm circulation, I'm aware of some things I'd like to talk about. They range from racial integration of the hip hop scene and many of us suffering the same social and financial barriers, to my take on the military having gotten to experience it briefly before being discharged, to even politics and world issues of the day. Of course I want a fun, off the wall song here and there like even Tech N9ne is likely to do that may be about the supernatural or religion, or anything like that.
So I'll try what you're saying bro. If you've got any more tips message me sometime. I appreciate you taking the time to listen as well as try and help a fellow rapper in training so to speak. I preciate it. Peace be with you bro.
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Edit- you take that scratch out, and I will kill you!. Love the scratchin
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I too liked the piano very much, good work.
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
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Love the scratching even more, I miss that sound.
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