Fayz

pretty neat track, generally i dont like things like this, but i think you made it work. the distortion on the vocals is pretty cool to, i dont know many people that can make that work without blowing the quality out the door, unless they only use a very small almost unnoticeable amount. i couldn't follow to much with the lyrics though but im sure if any one listened to it enough they could get it. overall it's a pretty cool track. the vocals seemed a little monotone though. not that you need to change the way you preform your vocals i think its cool, i think it would be pretty cool though if they changed from left to right ear and back each time you spit out a phrase, would really give it that edge that would make more and more people want to listen to it over and over ya know? but again im not telling you how to run your own show im just adding my two cents as a idealist. overall great job and i hope to hear more.

i thought it was an alright track, you definently had the mood in it but it didn't really go anywhere, i mean i understand that the idea was dark and creepy but at some point i think there should be a build up to a greater piece or a spot in the track that has something a little different than what you hear and make that one piece really special to the track make it stand out, also for something like this since its all instrumental i would probably cut the time down a little bit id say after about 2:30 it gets a little tedious. granted im not the greatest musician or mixer but theres always something inside my head that goes off when something is good but could be done so much better and this track really gave me that feeling. i only tell you all this stuff because i want you to reach that point of greatness and this track could really go there it was so on the verge of amazing. i hope i have gave you some constructive criticism with the key work being constructive. and with that all aside i just want to let you know that i did enjoy the track and that it really just brought out that mood and you know what? i say you should make another one like it but id really like to see some thinking out side of the box.

nice! i love how it started off kind of slow and then bam it hits ya, i honestly cant tell it hasn't been mixed down because its so awesome i really like how everything comes together so well and just wow amazing great job^^

hey brilliant track, definitely pro material, makes me so sad that this isnt on the radio! honestly i could probably cry right now, this track is just so beautiful and it should definitely be shared with the entire world! great job! 5/5 stars, two thumbs up ect.

you are one of 'the' best guitarists on this site, your recordings are clear, your rifts are original and their very, very! well played, and your synchronization with the other instruments is amazing! man if you ever got into a band with even a mediocre vocalist, i ##### just based on what you could offer and your abilities you'd make the charts, yo keep up the good work like i know you'll do
pce- Fayz

Wow, amazing track!!! excellent vocals! i especially like what you did with the screamo parts, very well done!

wow really good i like the back ground music and the vocals are really good too great job to the both of ya

im gonna have to agree the radio filter works really nice with the track, its a little hard to understand though but still a very nice track, great job ^^

wow again amazing track, you have got to be my favorite artist on the site, yo if you got a music myspace I'd really like to put up a couple of banners on my myspace.

great track, i really like the bass, almost made my over sized headphones vibrate of my head lol. i could definitely see this track in a movie, hell i would make it my theme song lol. no body would mess with some one that has that much bass.
again great job, and keep em coming im looking forward to listening to more of your work.

this track really hit me in the heart. it kinda has that feel of one of those slow dance songs ya know? it really makes me wanna call some one up and tell em i love em. great track with some vocals this could be one of my favorite songs on this site.

the only i would work on is the piano at the beginning, beautiful piece, but each time you made a cord i kinda jumped. maybe just try mixing it down a little bit? and then the song would be flawless in my opinion

all and all a really great track
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Great i cant wait to hear it! ^^ pm me when you get it finished and i will check it out

Rock on! great piece of music! I like how it doesn't stay so intense through - out the entire song, the slowing down and building back up is something i really appreciate. all and all this is something i could listen to and never get tired of, great job!

Hell yeah!!!! the second the guitar kicked in i was ready to mosh, i just couldn't stop listening! this is defiantly a song to show to all my friends phenomenal job and great use of effects

I thought it was really good, i really liked the drums, however i thought the guitar was a little too repetitive, but things really kicked up with the synth and the bells, i really enjoyed listening. good job!

wow its really amazing *Que the goosebumps* it feels like there's a deep emotion to it and the title is just really heart hitting, great job! really a beautiful piece.

wow a truly beautiful piece... i almost cried when i heard it, really good, and im really sorry for your loss