djgraehulc

Maybe find another instrument for that lead melody, maybe a rhodes at a lower octave and this would be extra tight. Until your next track "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Love the strings fam and the overall sound of the track. I think it has that old school flava goin on and the sample off the hook. All I can say is "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Why did'nt you put a lead instrument in this? This sounds so jazzy to me I want to down load it and add one myself. Added with some strings and a bit of piano this would have been very smoothe but it's not mine it's your's LOL. But great work so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

This was tight but I think this would have sounded better with a synth or a tenor saxophone for the melody that you have but it was great. I give big props to those that can rap on there own beats and sound fairly good.So until next time fam "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I liked the parliment yaaa! You always did have some crazy sounding music, most of it I liked some of it was %$#@& But I know you have some stuff in the wings and I'll be checking them out. Until then "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

When you show luv this is what you get back, something to ponder on and say me and someone else really put a great piece together because you can't do it alone is all i'm saying that's why you collaborate because two heads are better than one with ideas bursting at the seems to drive one another. So until next time "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

You should have mixed it up a little bit. This would have been tight if you had sat down and took your time with a hellava drum track, I guess you wanted to put it out there pretty fast. Some projects take time to really put together so in the mean time do other tracks to give you other ideas about a track that you think may have potential. One more thing, a bassline, a real fatass bassline. Until your next beat homie "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I'm trying to figure out why is everybody jumping on that T-Pain sound. Roger Troutman started it first and there won't be another like him. I mean everyone from usher to snoop is doing it now and I really think it's being played out. But that's my opinion, not trying to vent or anything but I'm really tired of hearing that. So "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I really don't know what to say about this track. I like it but I don't like it. It could be the way you chopped it up or maybe just a bad sample selection but I'm not trying to put the track down or anything but to me something don't sound right. Oh well that's just my opinion so never mind me and keep doin what you do and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

The first break I loved and the gun shots caught me off gaurd. I think you could have hyped it up a whole lot more though. But that's just my opinion,so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Now this a nice track and well worth the wait. How long did you work on it? Give me a shout back and let me know. Pick a number from 1-10 I'll give you a 10 fam. So "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

It sounds like it's mastered pretty good other than the synth could be a bit lower. But it has that club bang to it, definately will keep you jumpin. So "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I like the horns in this track. All I can say is that it's hot,so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

This started off very nice and then it lost all it's steam. Maybe you should have left that second verse out and went right to the synth and then the arp and back to the synth bassline and this would have been A1. I really liked the beginning it had a nice funky rhythm to it and it was bangin. Keep trying "WE" all can only get better and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I love the piano on this track it's very mello. Forget the strings the piano is what's up because it's the most beautiful instrument out of any other out there. So "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Man! You need to cut the time down on this one. The track surely is a different sound all together. I applaude your originality because that's what hip hop needs right now. So keep it up and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

You should have gave us more of the track. I hate when people only give you a minute of a song because they think it's hot. Yeah I liked how it sounded but I expected at least 2-3 minutes of a track so I can get the feel of where that producer is coming from. But anyway "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

The sounds you used are great but you should have put more effects to it to make it really sound extraterrestrial. And add a couple of breaks. "WE" can only get better, so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

This is more abstract hip hop than aggressive and it sounds very repetative. should put more with it to really make it sound fuller but "WE" can only get better. So "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

You should have made that clap sound a bit crisper and the background synth a little louder. this track could go either way a rap or RnB IMO. Keep doing your thang and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

I think the synth and the strings really made this song along with the vocal's it really is a nice song. Just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

The beat is ok but you should work on the vocal's a bit more. The vocal's are overpowering the track on some parts of the track. But "WE" can only get better with time so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Almost sounds professional homie. The vocal's alone sound very good and the beat was ok all I can say is "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

Definately need someone spittin on this track. The track has tons of potential with the right vocals. The snare roll should be a bit more crisp, other than that "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".

You were right,I really liked the synth along with the piano which accompanies the drumline. Just keep it up and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".