As long as this track is you should've uploaded an album LOL HAHA!!!!!!!! You must have a ton of e-mail to just run across this. But enough of me talking bull, you got potential, maybe put a few more break's in there and more sound fx and I'll be bobbing my head like a bobble head haha. So just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
For starter's don't be afraid to try different sound's because I used to be like that to. It's a learning and feeling out thing to try new sound's, not everyone will like what you make so that's why you experiment and make whatever come's to mind it will give you more experience in other genre's. Hope this help's and just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Thank you so much. I will try that then. I just get confused easily because there is so much that can be done. The problem I have is finding complimenting sounds. I am trying really hard to master the 303 because its my favorite sound of all sounds, but that thing is a world of its own anyway. I was thinking reverb to produce a false sound, but it changes at tweaks in a way I dont want it to. I was also thinking I could layer the sound but I get stuck on leveling out so one does not overpower the other. Thank you for the advice. I will try harder. Peaec
Eating greenbean's and gettin mean LOL!!!!!!!!!! But seriously, the overall track sound's A1. Very clean and the vocal's are not to low or to high. All I can say is "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
thanks man, alot. i still have alot of work do with this song. but i'm haveing fun doing it. i'll have some new stuff posted soon hope you check them out.
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Minor
It sound's like the track is skipping or coming in to fast. Maybe that's the way you wanted it, but as far as the track overall very laid back kinda tune. Keep it up and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
It started off kinda hype until cause started rapping. that's where I feel the track lost it's energy. Maybe go over the beat again & change a few thing's & drop it again. "WE" can only get better and remember "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
this was very ill my dude. I kinda hear where you were going with this, loved the guitar work. Definately has potential to do great thing's with, just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Thanx Very much, I just went for it for wut its worth. U realy think if I practice I can pull it off? I can't wait ta rock the crowd! This was a quick doodle to a get me back into the music. Next time I'll take a lil more time. Thanx again DJGaehulc
Try not to spend to much time on a track. I know sometimes when I'm doing a track that I really like my mind get's stuck just like writer's block so I'll go to a different track or I'll just stop making beats all together and then come back after a while and try it again. But the track is nice and I'm sure you'll get it right so "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Did'nt someone else have this very same beat? I just can't put my finger on it. Or Were you just showing your rap skill's? The rapping was okay but you should"ve had your own beat not someone else's. These day's it's all about the beat IMO, so just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Well yeah man its cam'ron beat, just showin off my skills really... I thought it was common for cats on here to rap over other beats, just for a mixtape or something.. Thanks for listening tho
Aye man Turn them Sh!t's up! Turn my Sh!t's up LOL. You need more volume to this track. It's a nice track man it just needs volume. Just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Ya gotta put more to this beat, maybe some vocal's and add a couple of break's here & there because at this point it sounds like one long loop. But don't worry about it right now because "WE" can only get better and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Good looking out bruh. I have another version of the song but it has samples in it that are not cleared. So i rushed and redid this one for looperman. But listening to it again it does sound like a long loop. Thanks for the review.
It sounded like the volume went up at about 1:13 sec into the track. It sounds better a little louder, I don't know if that's how you made the track or you did'nt know that it went up. Big up's for the mix & master very clean. "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I think you were to much into the rapping than the music. Don't get me wrong, but to me if the music is not right the rap is not right. The music on this track sounds so lifeless, I know you're talkin about killing I guess the music is supposed to be lifeless. That's my 2 cents and just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I think you should shorten the intro because it took almost 1:30 sec to get to the song. Right now you think this is your best work, just wait and you'll be saying the very same thing the minute you make something else that's bangin. This is because you're constantly learning or I should say "WE" are constantly learning, so just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I really like the flow of this track. This track has a little different vibe than the RnB that's out these day's just keep doin your thang and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
djgraehulc: I greatly appreciate the feedback!!! I had to twist the song around because whenever i give it out i want like a ciara type sing on it,lol, but i will keep you up to date
This was a good try man. You need to do this again for sure and when you do I would like to hear the finish production. Until then just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I really liked the melody in this track and your drum work is on point. That violin melody is what really made this track and the toms... just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
You should definately finish this. I thought drum & bass was to have a lot of breaks and switches to it. The overall track has a nice beat to it though. Just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
Oh Yeah! I like this one. If we were rated from 1 to 10 I would give this one at least an 8 or 9. The mix & master is on point very clean. It started off slow but ended with a bang. All I want you to do now is "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I think your piano is not in tune. I don't know if that's how you wanted it or if you just don't know it's out of tune. I like the backwards cymbol and the breaks. Just keep doin the damn thing and "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
It sounds like you went to see the Mario Brothers my good man. Ya gotta make those synth's sound nice and fat and to do that you need to tweak the knobs and play around with whatever vst that you used. But for your first track you did'nt do half bad. I say give you about a year and you might be a beast. Just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
I made the sample,....SIKE HAHAHAHA!! But let's be real, this is a solid track all the way around and big prop's to the mixing & mastering you guy's did a hellava job on this track. Just "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
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