the vocals need to come up a bit in order to fully understand what you are sayinh...it's tough to make out...you should run your lyrics through a clarity-type filter in order to get rid of the backnoise...the beat sounded pretty intense and I was lis liking what i could hear...the hook is tight...just need to clear up the the issues
Thanks for the tips, I have ben rapping for over a decade but this was only the fourth song I have produced and recorded on my own so I have a big learning curve ahead of me yet. Tips like yours are greatly appreciated.
This is actually a skit. And I will admit that there is a small influence from bone. I live 20 mins away from cleveland ohio where bone got there start from. On top of me being a huge fan. Mostly I like the layered vocal sound. Not many people are doing that any more. But thank you for your time and for listening to the track!
I also don't appreciate static nomad's comments. I don't know if you are talking about me or my brother, but those comments are completely off base. We give nothing but constructive feedback and it's always positive. We have never recorded or written a single thing that can be construed as propaganda. We generally reply with how tracks make us feel, the vibes they give. How is that propaganda? When we reply to member reviews of our own music, we say thanks for the feed back or we appreciate it. Where is the propaganda?
And do you that this was an accapella? Maffin downloaded it and created this. How was I suppose to make my lyrics relevant to the theme of this music when I spit them 12 months ago to give beat makers something work with?
I am sorry, Maffin, but I was given permission by looperman to respond these allegations because, as artists, our reputations are all we've got. This guy, for whatever reason, is committing unsubstantiated libel against Progress and Evolve and since we are not allowed to battle on this site, I was told I could deal with it here.
Again, Maffin great job man and Static stay classy bro.
the beat is pretty funky man..it comes off eclectic. the way you mixed my vocals with your track, it almost has some def jam spoken word feel to it...and do I detect some 70's flavor?
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the beat is crazy and u tear it the fuck up.
idk but i'm picking up some bone thugz influence
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And do you that this was an accapella? Maffin downloaded it and created this. How was I suppose to make my lyrics relevant to the theme of this music when I spit them 12 months ago to give beat makers something work with?
I am sorry, Maffin, but I was given permission by looperman to respond these allegations because, as artists, our reputations are all we've got. This guy, for whatever reason, is committing unsubstantiated libel against Progress and Evolve and since we are not allowed to battle on this site, I was told I could deal with it here.
Again, Maffin great job man and Static stay classy bro.
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Yeah why not lol