soem nice ideas here .. I don't normally do rnb it's not my type of thing but I did enjoy this ..there a few small areas that need ironing out in the EQing and the levels but over all the production is nice...keep 'em coming brother
some really nice idea here very... late 80's style almost moby type vibe to it... nicely produced .. I would have probably gone for more drop because it would break the track up some what..but nice... it's great when you find out stuff aint it...keep 'em coming brother
Thanks man. I appreciate the comment. Heh, if I knew what a drop was back then it would definitely be in there :P Finally got my program back up and running so I should have some new stuff out soon! Cheers!
some really interesting ideas here...over all the track is well produced ..maybe a few more fx in there would mix it up and make it a little more interesting because it does get a tiny and I mean a tiny bit mono tone towards 3 mins ish...some may say thats me picking hole but I have to be honest... having said that I like the track and enjoyed the listen...keep 'em coming brother
Hey bro!
Thanks a lot for your honest opinion. I'm always glad if somebody is talking about the flaws of a song as well ;-) And I'm glad, you laike it anyways :)
In the first arrangement I had some more SFX in it, but it just seemed overloaded to me ;-) So I decided to keep it as simple as possible without lowering the overall ambience of that song.
I'm a big metal head brother... I can digg the skill it takes to put something together like this.. nice..but you gotta work on the production side for me the track suffers a little because of the lack of EQing etc but I did enjoy the listen..keep 'em coming brother
You bet... I'm fairly new to mixing, compression and EQing. I hope to have the improved versions of all the songs in a week. Thanks for the input Numberjack.
some nice ideas here..for me thought I think the track is quite thin...thats bass kicks but the drum track is like wafer thin you need to layer it up a bit brother...everything works nicely it just seems it'd get lost in a good head wind.. having said that I did enjoy the listen and the bass line is worth the listen on it's own... keep 'em coming brother
it's well documented that I don't do hiphop..but I like this... the production quality is great and it has the deep textured sound of a pro track... for me though I'd have run a sub under it something to add to the over all track...keep 'em coming brother
some really nice ideas in here...I have to say I did notice you still have got your trademark trance synth in there which works great..for me a track like this needs to play with percussion a little more more specifically ethnic percussion...adding more with some panning would increase the texture of the over all sound and feel of the track..the basses are excellent and wouldn't be out of place on any dance floor the world over...nice track brother thanks for sharing I enjoyed the listen...keep 'em coming
thanks for listning and reviewing.. im still working on the song im going to extend it and add another main break to it.. i will add more percs and while i was making the song i was thinking about paning the beats but it was going to take a while and i wanted to get a demo up asap :)
this reminds me of some of the tracks I heard whilst waiting for the levellers to take to the stage in their early years.. some nice ideas and the soundscape works really well with that scots warpipes sound..loving the idea behind this track...nice ...keep 'em coming brother
Hev Numberjack - don't think I've ever heard of the Levelers, but if they were piping this kind of stuff in before sets I think I would have really dug them. My family's of the Clan Calhoun so it's about time I brought the sounds of pipes to bear in the music! Glad you liked this one! Cheers.
some nice ideas here but the track gets a little mono tone after a while and starts to get samey... you need to mix it up a little more...I'm not sure about the chosen genre but hey I'm not the genre police!!
as I said some nice ideas ...keep 'em coming brother
some really nice vibes on this one very old skool jungle... I would have liked to have heard a little more sub under it all... but a nice track ...I did enjoyed the listen...keep 'em coming brother
some really nice guitar work on this one...some face melting solo stuff too... I'd go with Kikajon it reminds me of living colour..nice ...I enjoyed the listen...keep 'em coming brother
some good ideas... not bad for a first try... you need to try adding in a sub and mixing it up more... your drops need to be padded so it would go crash sound...smooth pad or dark pad or whatever rather than silence... you should have a listen to some of the dnb artist here at the loop...rollagee or travis huckins get some ideas these guys are great at this genre..anyway nice first try I have heard alot worst brother...keep 'em coming
ha ha ha ...nice idea... a bit naughty to post it here on the loop though... you need to add some kinda sub in there and maybe a reese or two for it to really qualify for this genre..but ...never the less a nice idea...keep 'em coming brother
some truly great ideas here...loving those strings & that vocal pad is wicked too.. I'm guessing from the drum track your normally a dubstep producer..very nice ...I would have added a little more reverb to that kick and added a layer of a kick with a longer tail just to add a little mid to your kick but thats just me being picky brother....a nice track...keep 'em coming brother
some really nice idea blume.. I like the whole dub feeling to the track... hopefully that won't be ruined once you put in those wobbles...you got a vocal in there ...and I hope you don't mind me saying...just doesn't fit...it's that "time to get grimey" one...it just seems out of place ...as I said some nice ideas gonna check back once this ones finished...for def... keep 'em coming brother
Hey thanks brutha for checking this one out. I hear ya man. I was iffy about that lil grimey vocal too. I'll probably take that out cause I agree with you. I don't think I'm going to add wobbles I like the bass as is. I might just try to add a sound to compliment that dark sounding pad. Nice!!! thanks Numberjack. I appreciate your honest critique. You helped me make up my mind...
Respect bro!!!
some nice ideas brother...I'd would have probably put it in breakbeat though... it kinda reminded me of those old skool hip hop track with the crazy electro snyths... nice track maybe a little more work on the eq would have made the tracka little clearer having said that I like what you've done with...keep 'em coming brother
Thanks Numberjack (like that nick), yeah most of my stuff goes to the breakbeat section, and I must've been high from smoking my socks or something that I decided to drop it into Grime knowing its actually breakbeat. So a bit of confusion there.
Thanks for the positive input and constructive comments. Thanks!
some really nice ideas...I would have loved to have heard a nice record crackle over the whole track to give it that coltraine feel ya know?...nice track I enjoyed it ...keep 'em coming brother
some really great idea here brother... I would say though the intro is a little long..the rest of the track is great the production is good..personally I would have liked to have heard a few more fx in there just to add some texture..but thats just me being picky..nice...keep 'em coming brother
le tme first say I don't really dig on rap so... for me the paino loop needs to come up...maybe that reverb or what ever fx you've got on it needs turning down to boost it and give it strength...after about a minute it does get a bit samey because there not enough changes to keep you interested..maybe you should consider a heavy bassline sub driven or even chopping up that loop and making a few rolls ...anyway...keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas here ... I can totally hear where you want the track to go and what you want the track to be ... for me it does get quite mono tone because theres not much to hold your ear after about 1:30 mins... I like the dark atmosphere you've got here maybe a few fx might liven things up a bit...keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas here... I would have liked more of a mix up on the drum track it tends to get a bit mono tone after a while.. the distortion you've got here works really well but it does make it quieter so maybe a boost around the drop would work ..but having say that a nice track..keep 'em coming brother
nice ideas brother...that top end of hats is still there a little too high but the track is great..loving the feeling and emotions you added to the track very nice...what software you using? maybe I could give you some pointers or send you in the direction of some one that could brother... nice track I enjoyed the listen just need to work on that production side... keep 'em coming brother
hey bro! thanks for the words. I'm really glad you like it! I use reason 5 and Cubase with buit-in and ozone plug-ins to master, but I have no proper headphone yet to see the differences. anyway I'll be happy if you can give me some pointers in the right way. cheers
nice intro... I like it alot... a very nice track...all the elements are all there..I would have liked to hear more of that sub..maybe bringing it up in the mix a tiny bit might help that...other than me being really really picky ...this track works it brother...keep 'em coming brother
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Thanks a lot for your honest opinion. I'm always glad if somebody is talking about the flaws of a song as well ;-) And I'm glad, you laike it anyways :)
In the first arrangement I had some more SFX in it, but it just seemed overloaded to me ;-) So I decided to keep it as simple as possible without lowering the overall ambience of that song.
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Yeah I know about drum layering cause I do it most of the time on my Hip Hop sampled beats.
But I didn't want to catch the attention of the listener with my drums but with the bass and the melodies.
This just ain't Hip Hop or other heavy and fat drum based music...
It just got to be funky...
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