nothing wrong with this bad boy track i like it very much but i would say one thing tho. you should turn the music up a little as your vocal is slightly louder than the track but thats just a slight downfall but good track dude keep them coming
Thanks for the input! I actually went through a long period of time adjusting the vocals before deciding to put them at the level they are. Out of curiosity, what are you using to listen to this with? Monitors, headphones or outboard speaks? I will take your advice and go back over the levels again though, because I believe that input should never be ignored :)
great track i love the intro very cool but your drum loops need to come forward a bit more as i feel they may be a bit low in the track but thats just me this is a cool track for sure keep them coming
i love this intro you got going on but you need to beef those drum loops up they seem lost in the track i love the overall track tho try maybe adding another drum loop to overlay the original drum loop to make it sound just that much better great track keep tyhem coming
the overall track is spot on but that bass line the synthy bass line that comes in from the intro and through the track and a bass line like that needs maybe some more volume the louder the better for it but nt to loud lol..... there is a track called
DJ Sly Code Of The Samurai
look it up on youtube in that track he go's top notch with the synthy bass line but it sounds so good and i think you bass would sound so good as well if you bring it forward loads of punch to it if that makes sense but no critique from me matey nice track keep them coming
Will give it a listen , I like a bit of dj sly's stuff EG "She Demon" but haven't heard that track. More volume on the bass sir, thats an order ! Will repost it.
man i love that intro i like a good dark ambient follow up before a nice beat comes in this track has exactly that the detail in the intro works you up for what is coming next i would dance on a dancefloor any day to this great work keep them coming
Thanks for the kind words!
I just updated the choon, so i'd appreciate it if you could reevaluate your opinion on my soundcloud account: http://soundcloud.com/djsynergex/mirky-waters
I'll update the 128 bit version later today.
Thanks again and ill hit up a track of yours...
Steve
i admire the the dedication you put into this track but for me your amen breaks are low the overall sound is noce and loud but the beats need to be brought forward great track tho keep them coming bud
dude this track is freaking sick i remember this track from time ago and yes it has evolved but i would say tho that it sounds a little high in the middle the drum loops seem a little behind within the bass line but still a sick track it has the sn76 signiture as always keep them coming bud great track
Thank you mate, it's good to be back on looperman, I've got some more tracks to upload soon , thanks for the review, I think there's still some of the dreaded eq issues with this track, it'll be tweaked and reposted again no doubt.
i like this the glitch is deep for me glitch is not my type of genre but i like the mixture of sounds you have used which keeps the ears keen on listening this could be used in a movie as it has that kind of vibe nice mixdown keep them coming dude
i must be honest i like the intro that is sick its when the drum loops kick in then the whole track is overpowered by this reece bass and it ruins the track you say you not use to making this genre then if thats the case i will let you off lol but the reece needs to be turned down the track is way to powerful i also hear a few clicks here and there you just need to go over the track and fix these problems and incorperate the intro into the track as well great track tho keep them coming
Thanks for the review. Yeah I actually really like the amen so I think that's going to stay. I just need to work on a bit more eq on it. As far as the reese being too loud I'm not really sure which part you are talking about. The main reese is cut off at about 600 hz and isn't that loud. The sub bass was absolutely too loud and I turned that down a bunch. The only other part of the reese is the bandpassed high end which is hi cut at about 1000 hz and isn't really overpowering or taking up much head room. The thing that takes up the most head room at the end is the gated and verbed lead. Anyways, thanks for the listen.
for me its nice and loud do not add any more bass as it is high enough i think i do like the kick and think that the reverb or distortion is cool i am not sure tho at what is making the track bass'y is it your drum hit or bass i think you need to take a look at either one and turn it down a little not a lot just a little but the track is solid great effort and keep them coming
for me your drum loops need to be brought forward a bit because the sounds overpowered the track but original is good the track its self is nice i like the sounds and the beat i would have just preferred to have heard the beat a bit louder is all great track keep them coming
great effort bro the track is nice and powerful i like the intro the beats are spot on the vocal is great but i feel that the vocal needs to be a tad louder and better matched but i like this great effort on a first grime track keep them coming dude
i have no idea what this is meant to be it is sure not dnb this track is to crazy it sounds more darkcore cross wierd i did not enjoy this at all great effort tho keep them coming
wow dude be sure to finish this track the intro is sick i would have loved to have heard the full song that intro got me going and then nothing it all stopped lol be sure to complete it i will give you a better review i am going to fav it so i can keep an eye out for the update keep them coming
this is a very nice track what i look for in any track is clarity i want to hear the drum loops and all the individual parts and well this has it all and i like this very much i do like the sub you used that comes in i would have loved to have heard a bit more bass on it but thats just me overall great track and i am going to fav it keep them coming dude
i have had a listen and i did not catch my sample but maybe you mixed it up so well i did not notice it the track is cool i would have loved to have heard more of that track with out the voice that kinda put me off i also make dubstep but more dnb but cool track dude keep them coming
i started with a lot of samples and when some didnt fit i took them out. i liked your sample and i might have taken it out, but i wanted to say thanks for the insperation
one thing i will say you have gots the lyrics i like well done i think we could incorporate this into the house fly label it could set the label on fire which is what we need at the moment
yeah man i love the lyrics it go's well with my track but the background tracks is low i tell you what if you like can you send me the vocal stem only and what i will do is master the vocal for you and fit it in the track and even the sounds out and make it sound better and i will send the finished artical
wow nice bass i like the clarity of the bassline you drum loops are nice it has a neurofunk vibe great effort i like the a great deal keep them coming dude
firstly nice use of the samples from loopmasters and primeloops i have most of those i use to use them in my novice times for me it sounds like you have just pieced together loops. most artist may use a couple of downloaded loops to define there tracks as i do i try not to make my tracks sound like samples as i would say that 90 percent of my track is original and the rest is samples but great use of them tho its just what will happen is one day that someone may make a track with the same loops and you might not like it but it happens
The start is ok but the whole track lacked perfection your drum loops were very low the vocal needs to be turned up to much compression is used on the whole track if i was to be truthful i would say that i did not enjoy listening to it so my advice is go over the whole track and make it sound better
Thank you Rolla.. this is the kind of review that people are looking for. A lot of people have been massaging my ego about this track and saying it's the best they've heard from me. I'm not at all wounded by the fact that you've been able to pick the holes in there that I've been looking for. It takes a true music lover to give such an honest and sincere review that gives the artist somewhere to start with what is wrong.
it has a nice flow the drum loops are nice and clear i like the use of the fl vsts you have used the tracks is nice for me its a bit slow i preferr my dnb a bit faster but apart from that it was nice listening to your track thanks for sharing keep them coming
Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you liked the track. This was my first dnb track. I may try something a bit faster next time. Thanks a bunch for listening. Have an awesome day!
ok cool track your drum loops loose the integrity in the track as evey other sample used overpowers it but because its the loop chalenge i will take it that you did not have much time to prepare this track its cool but not exciting keep them coming
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DJ Sly Code Of The Samurai
look it up on youtube in that track he go's top notch with the synthy bass line but it sounds so good and i think you bass would sound so good as well if you bring it forward loads of punch to it if that makes sense but no critique from me matey nice track keep them coming
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I just updated the choon, so i'd appreciate it if you could reevaluate your opinion on my soundcloud account: http://soundcloud.com/djsynergex/mirky-waters
I'll update the 128 bit version later today.
Thanks again and ill hit up a track of yours...
Steve
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