you realy are a talented person and you sure know how to piece together a nice trak guitars sample perfectly matched with the tune it has a nice relaxing flow and i noticed that you do a variety of genres and as they say in london " a jolly good show"
well done im impressed with your work
i really appreciate the kind words. this is quickly becoming a fav of mine...and as far as not sticking to one genre, i get so inspired by other people's work [especially my looperfam's work] that i have to try out every genre lol.
you need to slow it down a bit to mayby 175 bpms cos it is fast your vocals are a little offbeat from the overall tune it self and i kinda get lost once the tune breaks you need to have a look again at your tune and sort this out mate but well done on a good effort at makeing a dnb tune check my tune out syntholigy you will like it it has a steady speed or check out my tune divison active that has a load of vocals init there very good tunes mate but with the right structure of your tune it could sound good any hows check bak on you soon ok mate
your tune is great mate i like the overall melodies and the start a good tune now here comes a very tiny but. your drum loops are low that is the only problem i keep saying it to everyone that i review cos this minor prob seems to occurr in most tunes i have reviewd. so just put a bit of punch in your drum loops mate it will sound good but thats it do that and your tune becomes top class material i will check back when it is finished ok cos i like it man well done
Thanks for the review. Sorry i took so long to reply.. been occupied with other things. Anyhow, I know what your talking about with the drums, I still havent got the whole idea of volume control and mastering on FL. But hey, I havent took my music GCSE yet, in fact I havent even started it, and by the end of it, I should be better.
Thanks i changed it over i figure electronica is general enough. I cant manage to focus on one specific style ive just been making what comes to mind. Sort of going with the flow.
yeah i see were you are going with this track duppy man is one of my fav tracks. well done once again a nice flow in your track just 1 little suggestion not its not a problem by any means your tune is good as it is but why dont you have the beggining go for about 1 min 50 seconds then break out into that grimey baseline and work that sickness up to a fast dnb beat but thats a suggestion i still like the track as it is well done mate
thats a nice tune the worbbles and bass's are top notch but it would be nice to hear abit more of the drum though cos it seemed a bit low but thats just a very minor problem but overall well done
good on you mate a very nice start and overall wicked there aint realy a bad to say about this tune. just a suggestion turn you drum loops up thats all you need to do with that tune cos they seem a bit low and thats it i love that begining mate 10-10
well done its a nice track i like it very much l think though that you need to inhance you drum loops and synths and bass but a part from that 10-10 mate but thats my advice turn your samples up and drum loops and that will sound perfect check out my tune call'd
syntholigy and you will see what i mean mate ok any hows respect
wow what make is this tune its certainly not drum and bass im not sure what genre i would class that as. but unfortunatly it did not do it for me i dident feel that tune at all it was all over the place but well done for trying
yeah nice track i like it and here is the but. your drum loops are fine but you need to inhance your kick and snares cos the bass overpowers it and it makes it sound low i noticed you are useing a reversed snare right try an change that snare to something more powerful because like i say in every review the drum loops need to compliment the bass and whole tune its what defines your tune but i like it though just very minor problems i like the beggining and bass and melodies but i loose teack when the drum beats kick in but keep it up and well done mate check my latest tune called
syntholigy it is a very powerful dnb track to which ahs clear drums and clear bass and melodies you will like it any hows peace
yeah your tracks cool. i like it i see you created it on fruity loops. i noticed that you have used some vocals from it not bad and guess what the funny thing is i have also used those vocals in my tune aswell check it out its called division active a drum and bass tune i created click on my pic and check it out you may like it i did this tune 4 weeks ago but any hows great tune
your tracks cool but you have it in the wrong section try puting it in the jungle genre you will get more listen as this is jungle possibly drum and bass mate ok
i like that very much mate a good tune its ambient but at the same time trance a good arrangement keep it up 10-10 on this one. but just one little suggestion you may want to listen to your vocals agian cos they seem a tad of beat with the tune but that to me is a very very minor problem but i still loveing this track though
Hi djcodex,
Thanks for your review.I know very well, i need suggestions to improve my works.I must to say , my english not well.There are two words in your review , i don't mean them. 1.agian 2.tad
I need to know mean of these.I think , you said a problem vocals between.But i can't understood properly.Thanks again.
not a bad tune mate but your melodies are to high in the tune and your drums are low im more drawn to your melodie when i feel i should be dwran to the whole tune if you get what i mean plus maybe you should put more bass and different melodies in there also because the track is basicly the same from beggining to end you need a bit more variation in the track arrangment mate but respcet for trying yeah check back on you soon ok
Cheers m8 lol i know what you mean this was something i threw together in couple of hours sommat to do while i waited for the bank to open lol sat in costa coffee for two hours with laptop n earphones thats why sounds are bit out
you track i like it very much a very hard and dark dnb flow but the minor problem i have to say about this tune is you volumes its nice and loud but maybe you should turn your drum loops up a bit and your samples down a bit and even the tune out but apart from that well done on your first dnb track i still like it though keep it up mate
check my tunes out my latest is syntholigy its a speaker killer any hows respect to you bro i will check back on you soon ok mate
not bad man i like your tune it has a good beat i like the synths overall wicked. but just one very very minor problem about 43 seconds into your track there is a cut but i think you did it too soon you should look into that mate apart from that 10-10 a nice get up and dance tune respect
It may sound odd, but i put that their purposely. I just like that "stop & go" effect. Originally it was an accident, but it grew on me. thanks for the review though. glad you dig it.
Thanks bud - it's hard to get a good flow going you know - one that tickles peoples' ears while they're still enjoying it.
Thanks again,
I'll check out one of your songs :)
STeve
yeah mate i like your track your drum beats are steady everythink is there but your bass melodies seem a bit low what you should do is inhance them to give the subwoofers a bit of punch because i feel that your drum beats over power it a little but i like the composition of your track it has good structure and flow there realy is nothing wrong with this track at all that was just a little suggestion from me well done you can see that you have dedicated hard time on this track i respect that highly your a true music maker i also take time when i produce my beats aswell any hows peace and respect to you mate
Hey, thanks for taking the time to give feedback, most apreciated. Your comment on my bass is duly noted. It's not the first time someone has mentioned not enough bass, I tend to hold back a little due to the fact my crappy monitors are too overpowering becuase of the sub box. Time for some tweaking mefinks :-) Thanks.
yeah once again you have a problem with volume and you realy need to make your drums louder mate ok still screachish though like the first one i think you will have a good tune your new so welcome to looperman and also you have distortion in ths tune aswell mate but i like both your tunes and i will check back someday and see how you have progressed i make drum and bass so if you get time listen to my tunes aswell you will like them plus it can help you also as when you listen to my tunes you will see what i mean about volume controll but any hows i hope to hear others from you ok mate
mate your track sound ok but i would make you drums louder plus i dident feel a build up it kinda sounds very hollow maybe you should put a few more samples in there but apart from that you have a good structure of a tune but you need to nurture it a little but any hows well done yeah
check out one of my tune its called dark divided if you get time
i like this very much i like how you have made this tune dark like its something that came from you mind alone. your drum beats are steady and it is easy on the ears aswell your vocals are perfect the structure is brilliant a very nice flow and loveing it very much. it would also be good as a drum and bass tune aswell i would realy like to remix your tune for you and post you when it is done but purley as a challenge only cos that tune is top class. but thats only with your permission. but overall well done.
by all means...play away with my work. thats the main reason its up here. im so excited to hear what you do with it!
cheers for listening and the great review...
nice track mate loveing it i like the synths and every thing else a wicked track mate well done but what you need to do is slow it down a bit cos its a bit two fast maybe 175 bpm or so but thats all realy i like
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well done im impressed with your work
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Also, Do you think I may need vocals with this?
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Thanx for the review m8.
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syntholigy and you will see what i mean mate ok any hows respect
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syntholigy it is a very powerful dnb track to which ahs clear drums and clear bass and melodies you will like it any hows peace
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Thanks for your review.I know very well, i need suggestions to improve my works.I must to say , my english not well.There are two words in your review , i don't mean them. 1.agian 2.tad
I need to know mean of these.I think , you said a problem vocals between.But i can't understood properly.Thanks again.
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check my tunes out my latest is syntholigy its a speaker killer any hows respect to you bro i will check back on you soon ok mate
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Thanks again,
I'll check out one of your songs :)
STeve
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check out my lates tune called dark divided youll like it any hows respect and produce that forever ok
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check out one of my tune its called dark divided if you get time
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i like this very much i like how you have made this tune dark like its something that came from you mind alone. your drum beats are steady and it is easy on the ears aswell your vocals are perfect the structure is brilliant a very nice flow and loveing it very much. it would also be good as a drum and bass tune aswell i would realy like to remix your tune for you and post you when it is done but purley as a challenge only cos that tune is top class. but thats only with your permission. but overall well done.
cheers for listening and the great review...
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