well done its a nice track i like it very much l think though that you need to inhance you drum loops and synths and bass but a part from that 10-10 mate but thats my advice turn your samples up and drum loops and that will sound perfect check out my tune call'd
syntholigy and you will see what i mean mate ok any hows respect
wow what make is this tune its certainly not drum and bass im not sure what genre i would class that as. but unfortunatly it did not do it for me i dident feel that tune at all it was all over the place but well done for trying
yeah nice track i like it and here is the but. your drum loops are fine but you need to inhance your kick and snares cos the bass overpowers it and it makes it sound low i noticed you are useing a reversed snare right try an change that snare to something more powerful because like i say in every review the drum loops need to compliment the bass and whole tune its what defines your tune but i like it though just very minor problems i like the beggining and bass and melodies but i loose teack when the drum beats kick in but keep it up and well done mate check my latest tune called
syntholigy it is a very powerful dnb track to which ahs clear drums and clear bass and melodies you will like it any hows peace
yeah your tracks cool. i like it i see you created it on fruity loops. i noticed that you have used some vocals from it not bad and guess what the funny thing is i have also used those vocals in my tune aswell check it out its called division active a drum and bass tune i created click on my pic and check it out you may like it i did this tune 4 weeks ago but any hows great tune
your tracks cool but you have it in the wrong section try puting it in the jungle genre you will get more listen as this is jungle possibly drum and bass mate ok
i like that very much mate a good tune its ambient but at the same time trance a good arrangement keep it up 10-10 on this one. but just one little suggestion you may want to listen to your vocals agian cos they seem a tad of beat with the tune but that to me is a very very minor problem but i still loveing this track though
Hi djcodex,
Thanks for your review.I know very well, i need suggestions to improve my works.I must to say , my english not well.There are two words in your review , i don't mean them. 1.agian 2.tad
I need to know mean of these.I think , you said a problem vocals between.But i can't understood properly.Thanks again.
not a bad tune mate but your melodies are to high in the tune and your drums are low im more drawn to your melodie when i feel i should be dwran to the whole tune if you get what i mean plus maybe you should put more bass and different melodies in there also because the track is basicly the same from beggining to end you need a bit more variation in the track arrangment mate but respcet for trying yeah check back on you soon ok
Cheers m8 lol i know what you mean this was something i threw together in couple of hours sommat to do while i waited for the bank to open lol sat in costa coffee for two hours with laptop n earphones thats why sounds are bit out
you track i like it very much a very hard and dark dnb flow but the minor problem i have to say about this tune is you volumes its nice and loud but maybe you should turn your drum loops up a bit and your samples down a bit and even the tune out but apart from that well done on your first dnb track i still like it though keep it up mate
check my tunes out my latest is syntholigy its a speaker killer any hows respect to you bro i will check back on you soon ok mate
not bad man i like your tune it has a good beat i like the synths overall wicked. but just one very very minor problem about 43 seconds into your track there is a cut but i think you did it too soon you should look into that mate apart from that 10-10 a nice get up and dance tune respect
It may sound odd, but i put that their purposely. I just like that "stop & go" effect. Originally it was an accident, but it grew on me. thanks for the review though. glad you dig it.
Thanks bud - it's hard to get a good flow going you know - one that tickles peoples' ears while they're still enjoying it.
Thanks again,
I'll check out one of your songs :)
STeve
yeah mate i like your track your drum beats are steady everythink is there but your bass melodies seem a bit low what you should do is inhance them to give the subwoofers a bit of punch because i feel that your drum beats over power it a little but i like the composition of your track it has good structure and flow there realy is nothing wrong with this track at all that was just a little suggestion from me well done you can see that you have dedicated hard time on this track i respect that highly your a true music maker i also take time when i produce my beats aswell any hows peace and respect to you mate
Hey, thanks for taking the time to give feedback, most apreciated. Your comment on my bass is duly noted. It's not the first time someone has mentioned not enough bass, I tend to hold back a little due to the fact my crappy monitors are too overpowering becuase of the sub box. Time for some tweaking mefinks :-) Thanks.
yeah once again you have a problem with volume and you realy need to make your drums louder mate ok still screachish though like the first one i think you will have a good tune your new so welcome to looperman and also you have distortion in ths tune aswell mate but i like both your tunes and i will check back someday and see how you have progressed i make drum and bass so if you get time listen to my tunes aswell you will like them plus it can help you also as when you listen to my tunes you will see what i mean about volume controll but any hows i hope to hear others from you ok mate
mate your track sound ok but i would make you drums louder plus i dident feel a build up it kinda sounds very hollow maybe you should put a few more samples in there but apart from that you have a good structure of a tune but you need to nurture it a little but any hows well done yeah
check out one of my tune its called dark divided if you get time
i like this very much i like how you have made this tune dark like its something that came from you mind alone. your drum beats are steady and it is easy on the ears aswell your vocals are perfect the structure is brilliant a very nice flow and loveing it very much. it would also be good as a drum and bass tune aswell i would realy like to remix your tune for you and post you when it is done but purley as a challenge only cos that tune is top class. but thats only with your permission. but overall well done.
by all means...play away with my work. thats the main reason its up here. im so excited to hear what you do with it!
cheers for listening and the great review...
nice track mate loveing it i like the synths and every thing else a wicked track mate well done but what you need to do is slow it down a bit cos its a bit two fast maybe 175 bpm or so but thats all realy i like
your tune is top class mate i like it a lot everythinks good about that tune. but i see what you mean though about it not being dj frendly. i will tell you what i think the flaw is in you tune you have a steady drum beat but in the middle somwhere you have a beat roll that would knock the beat when mixing but overall i love you track
Cheers for the nice words, yes at the mid of the track, there are some beats which are not even matched each other, and the I didn't really arrange the bars and phrases. Thanks for your feedback!
oh my god wow crazy aint the word your samples are way to powerful and the tune sounds like the prodigy plus the tune is in the wrong section mate reminds me of dubsteap or maybe slow breakbeat but all that aside if you can volumise those samples then the tune may sound good mate. but any hows peace out
mate you track sounds out of sync the drums started of ok but the bass and melodies just dont match try matching your samples with the bpm of your tune. fl must have an drum macheine in it you see i have fl9 i use some samples but i also like to incorperate some of mine also my tip is when you use samples make sure they are the same bpm as the tune that you are makeing but good effort anyway and keep it up mate
i like your track but your synths are to high you need to eq those cos when you bring in your breaks they sound two low remember volume control always pays off.
yeah your tracks great i like no im loveing it but i do agree with
deepres you just need to define your tune abit by tweeking those drum loops because when you hear the nice hard synths and basslines im more drawn to your drum loops and hihats but i want to be drawn in to the whole tune but your tune is great mate keep it up
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syntholigy and you will see what i mean mate ok any hows respect
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syntholigy it is a very powerful dnb track to which ahs clear drums and clear bass and melodies you will like it any hows peace
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Thanks for your review.I know very well, i need suggestions to improve my works.I must to say , my english not well.There are two words in your review , i don't mean them. 1.agian 2.tad
I need to know mean of these.I think , you said a problem vocals between.But i can't understood properly.Thanks again.
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check my tunes out my latest is syntholigy its a speaker killer any hows respect to you bro i will check back on you soon ok mate
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Thanks again,
I'll check out one of your songs :)
STeve
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check out my lates tune called dark divided youll like it any hows respect and produce that forever ok
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i like this very much i like how you have made this tune dark like its something that came from you mind alone. your drum beats are steady and it is easy on the ears aswell your vocals are perfect the structure is brilliant a very nice flow and loveing it very much. it would also be good as a drum and bass tune aswell i would realy like to remix your tune for you and post you when it is done but purley as a challenge only cos that tune is top class. but thats only with your permission. but overall well done.
cheers for listening and the great review...
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deepres you just need to define your tune abit by tweeking those drum loops because when you hear the nice hard synths and basslines im more drawn to your drum loops and hihats but i want to be drawn in to the whole tune but your tune is great mate keep it up
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