Your music is awesome, but is very very busy for the train beat. The way you introduced the beat is great, but the drum beat that comes in matches it, but doesn't enhance it in any way [very plain, generic]. Try to find something a little deeper that would create a stronger groove [hip hop maybe]. The keyboards are way too busy for this beat and is over powering it. Maybe towards the end of the song introduce it, after the groove is firmly established, start with small pieces. Even if you just introduced it with a 1/4, then half, none, then full.
Anyways, in no way am I saying it sounds bad, that is just the direction I would go with it.
Thanks for your feedback. Its great to hear when other people like my work. I haven't been on or editing in nearly a year, but hope to be back at making music (and editing track like this one based on the feedback I've received.) I built this one from scratch and made my own loops... after awhile, things can get lost in sound. I'm listening to track now and can hear the edits you suggested.
...I was going to listen to some your work, but it seems your list of music is a bit short. I hope to hear some of your stuff sometime.
Thanks again.
on PLEASE REVIEW - Night Train by audioprojek
Anyways, in no way am I saying it sounds bad, that is just the direction I would go with it.
...I was going to listen to some your work, but it seems your list of music is a bit short. I hope to hear some of your stuff sometime.
Thanks again.