O.M.G ur mad suspect,an lack attention 2detail,dude i didn't write dis,I lookd at a pic,thru a beat 2getha an jus freestyled on it!it's a concept,c i hav hate iz kryptonite,an a superman died 2nite?it's 4peopl like u!d concept it how haterz like u ruin d world kuz u kan't deal wit life an chooz d path uv d hater!funni u wuld hate on it!go 2 utube fella,it haz gr8 reviews,an look at d pics!it goez well,an i don't c no 1 freestylin dat good dz dayz 4 1 an 2!i spell slang,but u obviously cannot spell start!iz koo, u must get no education nor real muzik where u r,nyc 2jerz dey play my songz,an sum peopl appreciate poetry an good concepts!listen 2it again!it tellz a stori,an y a superman died 2nite,an truth b told all u guna do iz hav peopl look at my song mor now,if u hated it dat bad,u jus wuld uv left it blank,an kuz I'M NO HATER,IMA LEAV IT UP!peopl like u feed me 2do mor,...so 4da last time kuz dude here kan't read or write,it wuz freestyled by lookn at a pic on my myspace,peopl wantd me 2prove my skillz a, a whole song,1take,concept an all,not jus jibberjabber wuz created!kep da comments rolling though! peopl frum da hood neva tuch classic beats,or alternativ, i dared 2!an not my best wrk,but sure izn't hard 2do!nor ur challenge an put ur money up! ...DO BETTER THAN I DID!..don't say u kan,jus do it!"i liv in a don't tlk about it b about it world!or dey don't teach u dat where u frum,2stuk on kikn it 2ur kuzin,daz koo,tell her i sed hi!...;)...
All feeback is good thanx. the vocals r going up soon workin on them now. Yes it was all hand an not just a sample all of it was by hand. but thanx for ur imput.
Would not mind a kick in the beginningon the strong beats. The the little naked synth would be better with a bit of reverb and maybe a little echo to ear feel.
Otherwise nice musical sensability.
I would put some high stings in counterpoint to the other two lines. Would fill out the songs alot. Vocals wwould aso work, but those are hard to come by these days. :)
The early pan to the right would be better if it swung back before the come back, if you follow.
Let me remind you that music is contrast and repetetion. I know that that melody is hard to pair with another, but imagine a complete change in direction and then a return to the original. Melodic counterpoint is the term of he day. Would make the song strong as hell.
Play against one another and the world comes to fruition?
Big fan dude. I downloaded your acapella, "God is Mad" and itfit a song that I have been working on recently. I am still doing a few minor adjustments, but I think you will be pleased once you hear it.
I obviously, had to pitch shift lower to fit your vocals to the beat being 132 bpm.
Other than that it is a pretty fcking roocking beat.
I have a buddy going to look at it and master it on tuesday so I will try and get it up on Wednesday for a bit.
I do not mast my work...I listento it as loud as possible...thats just how I roll.
I have been trying to fix bar 9 or 10 as your go into a triplet in the rap and I would have to adjust the couple bar to make it workable, or ignore it as it goes back to normal time right after. I am thinking ignore... Talk to you soon.
It isn't even a triplet, its just you trying to fit the words into the rhythm, but there are too many words. Great rap though.
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Whoops, get rid of those rideous strings or lower then and put a bit of reverb to take the edge off a bit.
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The progressions is nice as hell, but there is no bass line, just as bass drum track.
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Its a metaphor...
Brilliant.
on Disposal by barnardski
WRite on brother.
Not rap on....
Or rap on and get a better mic.
it really is horrible the world....
Hahaha the the "rat a thighs"
You'll make it brother...
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No way around that. nice work
The drunker I get the less I care about naked drums!
Hahah, jk
Try harder, and by that I mean give the MFer some depth. Have fun and play with it//
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Vocals were lovely and the music was even more lovely.
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Nice song. Needs more action or one hell of a vocal part. Hopefully both.
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There has got to be a way to fill out those sick azz bass notes...and the lyrics. Lol
J/k Nice job.
Not professional but you'll get there.
on Dynamic Disaster by AudioL
Cause thats more in line with reality.
The pan work was great.
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Otherwise nice musical sensability.
I would put some high stings in counterpoint to the other two lines. Would fill out the songs alot. Vocals wwould aso work, but those are hard to come by these days. :)
Great work.
on got no name by younga09
Let me remind you that music is contrast and repetetion. I know that that melody is hard to pair with another, but imagine a complete change in direction and then a return to the original. Melodic counterpoint is the term of he day. Would make the song strong as hell.
Play against one another and the world comes to fruition?
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I obviously, had to pitch shift lower to fit your vocals to the beat being 132 bpm.
Other than that it is a pretty fcking roocking beat.
I have a buddy going to look at it and master it on tuesday so I will try and get it up on Wednesday for a bit.
I do not mast my work...I listento it as loud as possible...thats just how I roll.
I have been trying to fix bar 9 or 10 as your go into a triplet in the rap and I would have to adjust the couple bar to make it workable, or ignore it as it goes back to normal time right after. I am thinking ignore... Talk to you soon.
It isn't even a triplet, its just you trying to fit the words into the rhythm, but there are too many words. Great rap though.
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This place is incredible.
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I really expected to hate this, but it is clean and just ballin in general