cottonproductions

2:30-2:47 Awesome track, I have not heard this type of style and its good but it's not quite radio ready yet. You have more power in your voice than you think or have been told. The highlight to me in this track was (MSM) 2:30-2:47, That was the perfect bridge, little bit long but has an AMAZING build none the less! Not a lot of people use bridges in there tracks any more, they don't realize its one of the most important parts, I'm sure you know this already but the "Bridge" is a crucial part of the song structure because it creates the energy and excitement to your listeners building anticipation for the chorus which is the most known part of a song structure, the most memorable. This track could go far, Plain and simple, you can sing but you need more verses and about 2 more bars for your chorus and keep your bridge and you will have a hit. If you to work more on this let me know, I will write the rest of the song and we can share styles, we can do this beat and I will make another one for this song? Its not going to be an overnight project though. I use "Melodyne" which is a professional 1200$ program to move each vocal note to the correct pitch or position in time. Fine-tune their length, their volume or the intensity of their vibrato. Basically I will take the excess ash and feed back out and It'll sound pro rec. and radio ready. All my artists (Rappers) are trying to go solo and once they get that ideal in there head without structure there music gets to be repetitive, same rap and melody and i'm trying to do something different. I heard your voice and I knew you could be a hit. I don't mind rendering HQ and vocal mixing for you on this song, all I'm asking is you do one of my songs and I will send you the lyrics and instrumental via e-mail and the only thing you need to send me back is the acapella as clean as possible so we can make the track sound Club and radio ready. this isn't a joke and i'm not backing out because i just spent 6500$ on pro-tools, 2 more Yamaha Caragen Master switch boards, 3 mixers, VST's, SF2 Files, Vocal rendering Software and my beautiful Bosse JX-212 stereo system. I have everything I need and more to make both tracks and any other you might want to work on in the future, sound beyond professional.

My e-mail is

cottoncoe@live.com

I'm gonna let you do you thing.

Hit me up if your interested Angela.

I love your voice, its outspoken, strong and has a unique form from most in the pop music industry. I believe you sound better in this genre without the auto-tune,i believe your voice sways and compliments the piano piece.It sounds so much better natural when your reaching your high notes versus the auto-tune effect. What captivates most listeners is the strong firm high notes and makes them believe they could never sound like that. If you have your audience believing its impossible to sing as good as you then you learned what many amateur singers have struggled with, (Captivation, inspiration and most important motivation) its the climax point in every song, the part where the singer finally shows there talent, there gift,whats separates the shower singers from the God gifted. When auto-tune effects are being used in this "Climax Point" it takes away a little part of the emotion and shock to the audience in this genre, the kind of shock and emotion that puts feeling in your chest and some to even cry in awe and for you and anyone else who is reading this I am not criticizing your music, i am only trying to push someone with a god gifted talent in the right direction. I'm sure you don't want to post your music on here the rest of your life, you want to be heard, to be on stage doing something I'm sure you love with a passion right? undoubtedly you have talent in this genre and would be great in a pop/dance beat I'm sure. I say leave about 16 bars open for a collab in a sense, Not everyone of your tracks need a collab but because you can sing it might take you to a higher limit, explore your options a little bit. My name is Colton and I plan on changing the game of music, I will be the best music Producer Out in the industry. I would love to make a collab with you sometime and if it turns out how I think it will, i will have it pressed to play on my local radio stations until it travels farther. Think it over and get back to me on it. Keep doing your thing Shibbyco. Rates: 10/10

~~~Cotton~~~

Did It Again Jkent,Quality-Delivery-Hook-Production and a sick beat, keep this comin Fam.

---CottonProductions---

Damn jpnylonmag!, you got talent!!! I love this track and its my fav so far his words flow right with your beat simultaneously and I love the scratch reverb its very today and if you keep it up I know you will get signed soon, Im gonna be chekin up on you just to see whats next keep it up,

your fellow producer and Fan,

----Cotton----

LOVE IT AND I DISAGREE WITH Spivkurl ON THIS ONE BECAUSE TO ME ITS SOUNDS LIKE AN AWESOME OLDSCHOOL HIPHOP WITH A ORCHESTRAL FEEL AND I THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT BUT TO ME I GUESS IT COULD FALL UNDER DANCE BUT IT REALLY DOES SOUND MORE LIKE OLD SCHOOL HIPHOP IM TALKING N.W.A OLD SCHOOL AND I LOVE IT.

KEEP IT COMING FERN13!

---COTTONCOE---

i LOVED IT AND I HOPE YOU KEEP THIS UP THE FUSION IS INCREDIBLE AND I JUST WANT TO SAY IM A FAN AND I ADDED TO FAVS I HAD TO AMAZING JOB IT DOES HAVE A WARM FEELING TO IT AND I LOVE THE REVERSE POLARITY YOU PUT IN IT, LOVED IT AND JUST WANT TO SAY PLEASE KEEP TRACKS LIKE THIS COMING!

---COTTON---

You got it and i added it to my favs the second i heard it, i would give you advice but i find this track untouchable it has the orchestral softness with heavy thrashing metal not many can pull this off and im a fan of metal but i have to say i do admire this track it was jaw dropping how you fused this together and all i can say is wow.

Keep it up Kper cause this fan is behind you all the way.
AMAZING WORK!

---COTTONCOE---

GREAT TRACK AND I COULDNT OF SAID IT BETTER THAN Donnie_Vyros a break beat would be perfect but thumbs up for what you got to me it sounds good and as far as its genre it has great house potential.

keep it up theduke2248!

---cotton---

you got a fan here and i just want to say...THIS TRACK WAS COMPOSED PERFECT AND FOR THE LIFE OF ME I CANT FIGURE OUT WHY ITS NOT ON THE RADIO BUT I KNOW IT WILL BE SOON YOU HAVE A FAN AND I JUST WANT TO SAY KEEP THIS UP MRGLEEK1 CAUSE YOU GOT FANS BUILDING AND YOU HAVE TO MAKE TRACKS LIKE THESE NOW SO WE CAN FEED OUR ADDICTION.
GREAT TRACK I HOPE I CAN GET THIS TYPE OF HOT BEAT ON MY TRACKS ONE DAY WITH RAPPERS THAT CAN SPIT HOTT FLOWS LIKE YOU GUYS.

---COTTON---

great job nice flow and im a fan so you better keep these beats coming! keep it flowing Lato!

---Cotton---

Amazing! you got a fan and i have to say i admire your work on this track you need no advice you already know the vocals to use a touch up so there for you need no advice because this track was hott and i loved it! keep it coming Butcher_Spanked!

Great composure koble, i thought you did awesome on this and i say this because its not something i could see anyone singing to but a possibility for rap and for sure i could see this in a Asian subtitled movie were they kick in your track when they train hard for a fight, i loved it and keep up the great composeures! As for dj4real great loops and keep up the work to the both of you i loved it.

----cotton----

I listen to all genres of music so i can get a feel of what i want to make in a track and when i came across this track i have to say: Im majorly impressed this was damn good and you should be proud of yourself! yes it has the inflames feel from hell and you have my fav on it. keep it up Steinaa! you got a fan here.

JKent, let me tell you when i first read your review on my beat you said you made a song out of it and i didnt belive you because i had alot of people on here say they would and never came through,not only did you deliver but you brought the fire and made it hott, im going to post it on myspace and my website.I really didnt think peole would digg my beat but now you made me bust out my notebook and pen cause i just got schooled.If you like his one let me know i was on the verge of giving up beats on here but i will post a few later this week and if you can flow like you did this one, our tracks will be on fire,let me know what kind of beat your looking for next.

JKent your on fire!

---cottonsky productions---

feeling the drums in this one the arrangement is perfect to a powerful emotion, keep it up man im a big fan!

This track has a nice flow to it,you got it, mad respect jjdaboss

lynx, i got to give you credit on this flow it most def,you got the talent,keep this up man, its hott!

i think it was a great track and i loved it, nice work lynx!