ioncewas

ioncewas

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ioncewas 4th Sep 2021 00:31 - 5 years ago

on Ow Oh Ow Oh by pseudoble
Hi Pseudoble, "floats along"...I think you did that fantastically. It's been a very long time since I've touched an MPC; you should make a few loops with it and post them, the sounds of the drums are quite rich and clear. That's what gives this track such a shine. The atmospheric sounds, sax, and the subtle hum...all feel really good; The only issue I have is the mid-drums loop (a break?) that comes in every now and then. I think it sounds strange to me because it has some low end sounds like bongos. Only thing I suggest is experimenting that fill-in sound. You could program a break using the drums you already have moving the track, so that the fill feels natural. Keep it up you're doing great. I'll ensure to listen more to other of your pieces.
pseudoble
pseudoble replied 4th Sep 2021 - 5 years ago
Thanks for the careful listen and thoughtful feedback - I dont have an MPC - just the DAW! which is what I use with a mini keyboard (and I have other keyboards and guitars which I sometimes experiment with). I dont think I known for sure which bit has the low end sounds but Ill have a listen with the headphones on and see if I can find it. Even if I can I doubt Im experienced enough to fix it - very much have my L plates on in learning the software and putting things together. This of course is why comments like yours on looperman are so good - helps me (us) to learn : )
ioncewas
ioncewas 3rd Sep 2021 23:42 - 5 years ago

on i saw you in my dream by St3phko
Hi Stephanz, I wasn't sure where to leave a comment, I actually listened to a few of your tracks and I'l likely leave a comment anyway on several, but this one captured my ears by it's warm tones and welcoming theme. Great atmospheric synths, relaxing; the effects on it are subtle but effective, I would actually not mind a little more delay so the end notes tail a little longer, I like when notes tail long enough so they feel part of the next set of notes. Keep up the great work.
St3phko
St3phko replied 4th Sep 2021 - 5 years ago
Thank you very much for your great feedback, it will help me work harder on it
ioncewas
ioncewas 3rd Sep 2021 23:33 - 5 years ago

on Never Gonna Stop Lubass Remix By AAP Featuring HDF by Lubasskoo
This was one of the first tracks I heard here and I wanted to come back to say a few words. I really like the structure of this piece. Every section meshes with the last very well.
The intro synth is wonderful, I like that subtle bandpass effect on it. The piano section with bendy-filtering is also a great addition. Pretty much every sound you included carries the track in a uniform way. Levels sound pretty great, too. I would say the only change I was expecting was a different melody after the break, that would allow the track to change a bit. As is, it sounds good. I don't make alot of music and I certainly don't claim to be of any kind of experience, but good sound is good sound ;) Keep it up.
Lubasskoo
Lubasskoo replied 5th Sep 2021 - 5 years ago
thank you very much :)
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