It sounds like it's all centered around the guitar work to me (please correct me if I'm wrong so I don't live in some illusion lol). I love it, sounds like it envelopes into itself and then minimally variates into it's best sound. I love this entire track -- it feels ethereal, delicate, and bold all at once. With my taste nowadays I can imagine some more impact from the drums, heavy 808s, modern hi-hat rhythms, which will drop the main chunk of your beat closer to EDM territory. Another thing I want to say is that the end of the track feels nearly unfinished, by that time I was brought on a journey and was waiting for more but got the end of the nearest bar. I think that this track explores the many different directions you would ambiently take it which is a tease to me.
Thanks for your work! True music to my ears tonight
I agree that the ending is a bit of a departure from the rest of the track and, admittedly, hasn't received the attention of the other sections. However, I was worried about the amount of time needed to gently resolve the song. The track is five minutes long and for a lot of listeners it starts to be taxing. That being said, it's likely I will occasionally revisit this track to add polish. Another minute wouldn't be too bad. I'm unsure about what you meant by your last sentence, but I find repetition frustrating and I have received criticism on other tracks for quickly shifting ideas. I don't hear many songs that do it and I like the uniquity. As far as 808s and heavy drums go (I avoided 808s on this track because I wanted my bass playing to stand out), you might like my other track 'From Away'. It's an EDM song made in similar form to this one. I greatly appreciate your feedback. Thank you.
Getting me back to classic RnB/Soul grooves with this one. Instrumental is excellent. Your singing is very good I can imagine some harmony being added possibly?
i love this. sounds very intimate, your singing tone is powerful and clear. The delay/echo going on with your voice sounds enchanting but at times I feel theres 2-3 too many delays. really incredible work
I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better
:25 second mark i can hear a melody thats getting washed away from the distorted bass going on, some eq to balance things and some more drum sculpting to get rid of rigidity and it would be sick
Thanks for the feedback. The sample I used is the harp one and the acapella is also crom looperman, I only do production work. I just felt the acapella worked well with this track.
Okok I hear the potential in this. Liking that gritty bass you have coming but bring it out a little more it's getting washed away by the synth sound you got going on.
Commented on l3monade by Diamond Star by diamondmariac
serious drip i'm bumping this! hits so hard and nice
Commented on Pagan by HeathAlexander
It sounds like it's all centered around the guitar work to me (please correct me if I'm wrong so I don't live in some illusion lol). I love it, sounds like it envelopes into itself and then minimally variates into it's best sound. I love this entire track -- it feels ethereal, delicate, and bold all at once. With my taste nowadays I can imagine some more impact from the drums, heavy 808s, modern hi-hat rhythms, which will drop the main chunk of your beat closer to EDM territory. Another thing I want to say is that the end of the track feels nearly unfinished, by that time I was brought on a journey and was waiting for more but got the end of the nearest bar. I think that this track explores the many different directions you would ambiently take it which is a tease to me.
Thanks for your work! True music to my ears tonight
Commented on Memories Prod By Legendary by IAmLegendary
Oh yeah this has got me mean muggin'.
R.I.P Juice Wrld
Commented on HatTrick by Grido
good work. this is ill
Commented on HMBMAA Muzic by nln1 by PatriciaEdwards
Love it PatriciaEdwards! Thanks for using my track, this sounds so good. Well well well done!
Commented on Vibing by Jeffierenee
I hear "shadow" in the tag in the beginning of the track, might be the name of the prod on here.
you've done a wonderful collaboration! this sounds 100%
Commented on Music Breaks Us Free - Kiestyle Productions - Funk by KiestyleProductions
Lets disco baby!!
Commented on Mahal by prizewell
damn! the quality is on point. I love beats like this. I'll Keeping an eye out for your album bro.
Commented on The Hunger by Magiq1
Getting me back to classic RnB/Soul grooves with this one. Instrumental is excellent. Your singing is very good I can imagine some harmony being added possibly?
Commented on Not Of This World by royalnation
Holy crap. You're a mad scientest aren't you? This is so rhythmically chaotic, it's so compelling and face melting. Liking the glitchy sections.
Commented on Peripheral by Neomorpheus
I'm getting amazing feelings listening to this. The layers are so beautiful...
Commented on Green Gossamer by TheNyctopian
this is a sweet aural journey. wicked production mate
Commented on Time And Time by mildperil
i love this. sounds very intimate, your singing tone is powerful and clear. The delay/echo going on with your voice sounds enchanting but at times I feel theres 2-3 too many delays. really incredible work
Commented on Mazes by royalnation
great dubstep, nice long track to dance to
Commented on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better
Commented on Strange Jazz by Indieground
interesting fusion going on. i love the bassline youve got going on. good arrangement
Commented on You Were Alien by Neomorpheus
guitar tone is awesome and the vocal effects you have going on are a dope callback to some 80s style electronic music. awesome creativity my friend
Commented on coffeTable by jobantwisp
:25 second mark i can hear a melody thats getting washed away from the distorted bass going on, some eq to balance things and some more drum sculpting to get rid of rigidity and it would be sick
love the violins that came in
keep it up
Commented on SoulFul by GoTyBeaTs
So funky man! Can listen to this on its own or along with some vocals.
good work!
Commented on No One Type Of Beat-Jungle Trap by NaejMusic
strong groove bro. will definitely check out the rest of your stuff
Commented on Old Lady Italy by Orlando51
Peaceful, can see this in a lobby or bg in a restaurant
Commented on Complete by KeroSann
spacey and groovy.. not forgetting to mention your dope soloing going on (not sure which part is the sample).
Production is strong in this track!
Commented on Something new by Sharlo03
Okok I hear the potential in this. Liking that gritty bass you have coming but bring it out a little more it's getting washed away by the synth sound you got going on.
Commented on Hymn of the Pleiades by Dennel
holy crap. this hits hard in the mellowest way possible
i feel like i'm walking down a city sidewalk on a hot day and the sun is casting long shadows from the buildings. lets go! good job
Commented on Dj Arloph-Conquest by NaejMusic
love the atmosphere you set - animal fx and the conga drums/bongos then bringing us to a sweet groove.
excellent work!