It sounds like it's all centered around the guitar work to me (please correct me if I'm wrong so I don't live in some illusion lol). I love it, sounds like it envelopes into itself and then minimally variates into it's best sound. I love this entire track -- it feels ethereal, delicate, and bold all at once. With my taste nowadays I can imagine some more impact from the drums, heavy 808s, modern hi-hat rhythms, which will drop the main chunk of your beat closer to EDM territory. Another thing I want to say is that the end of the track feels nearly unfinished, by that time I was brought on a journey and was waiting for more but got the end of the nearest bar. I think that this track explores the many different directions you would ambiently take it which is a tease to me.
Thanks for your work! True music to my ears tonight
I agree that the ending is a bit of a departure from the rest of the track and, admittedly, hasn't received the attention of the other sections. However, I was worried about the amount of time needed to gently resolve the song. The track is five minutes long and for a lot of listeners it starts to be taxing. That being said, it's likely I will occasionally revisit this track to add polish. Another minute wouldn't be too bad. I'm unsure about what you meant by your last sentence, but I find repetition frustrating and I have received criticism on other tracks for quickly shifting ideas. I don't hear many songs that do it and I like the uniquity. As far as 808s and heavy drums go (I avoided 808s on this track because I wanted my bass playing to stand out), you might like my other track 'From Away'. It's an EDM song made in similar form to this one. I greatly appreciate your feedback. Thank you.
Getting me back to classic RnB/Soul grooves with this one. Instrumental is excellent. Your singing is very good I can imagine some harmony being added possibly?
i love this. sounds very intimate, your singing tone is powerful and clear. The delay/echo going on with your voice sounds enchanting but at times I feel theres 2-3 too many delays. really incredible work
I think you should make your voice stand out more. I like the droning going on from the synth but I feel sometimes it washes itself out a little. Overall this is already epic and can only get better
:25 second mark i can hear a melody thats getting washed away from the distorted bass going on, some eq to balance things and some more drum sculpting to get rid of rigidity and it would be sick
Thanks for the feedback. The sample I used is the harp one and the acapella is also crom looperman, I only do production work. I just felt the acapella worked well with this track.
Okok I hear the potential in this. Liking that gritty bass you have coming but bring it out a little more it's getting washed away by the synth sound you got going on.
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I think you're right about the delays though. I might go and trim it back a little and redo it.
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the bass synth is a little overpowering and might need to be mixed in a bit more imo.
some more tightening up and its dope!