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you got some clipping going on there, which is unfortunate cuz otherwise this would be an excellent track. try going back in, turn everything down, and bring it back up with a limiter on the master channel. really intense clipping at about 1:00. also just eqing some of the stuff, tweaking things will help get rid of the clipping.

sounds good so far. maybe work on the drop before the beat kicks in? i dunno what else you could add. maybe i high lead? that might make it sound like clownstep though.

i love the beat. good job. i dont really have much to criticize on this cuz the job sounds pretty pro. good job keep it up

i love the beat. i wouldnt listen to this song at the beach though, its kind of a club track. it'll have people dancing =D

i like how its coming along. i dont want to give any criticisms until i hear the final product, ill just say that i agree the bassline is a little too basic, at least for my taste, and the intro could use a little more to hook you in. i hear little pieces of an amen break in there. and an amen snare. and theres another sample in there i know ive heard before. anyway i cant wait to hear the finished version

listening to this track while reading your story was for lack of a better word, awesome. the story seems to portray the imagery of your story perfectly. i love the choice of instruments. perfect for this story about life and the understanding of death. i think you did a great job, such an epic tune with so much feeling. my only complaint is it ends so suddenly, without warning, but i suppose that could've been intentional as that's the way life is =]

keep up the awesome work.

this is a great track. you know who it reminds me of? dave matthews band. great composition. the drums are simple and dont overpower anything. i lot of feeling went into this i can tell. if only everyone put their heart and soul into their music as you seem to in this tune. i dont really have anything negative or constructive to say as you seem to have this down. keep it up! =]

at first i was like ehhh... then the beat picked up and i was like YES. this has potential. needs more to it though. some keys maybe? i dunno surprise me. but finish it! its good so far

i like it. sounds like a great mix, the piano gives it lots of depth and emotion. my only criticism is the kind of flute sound at the beginning. my ears just dont agree with that for some reason. i think maybe because its taking away from some of the piano frequencies. other than that this is an awesome mix and i cant wait for the lyrics =]

oooo this is pretty cool. i like it. the beat is well done. =D keep it up

it has a happy reggae feel to it! you're right though the melody is a bit chinesey, but it sounds neat and goes with the mood.

yeah i dont necessarily agree with the mario sample at the beginning but other than that this is an awesome track. especially that scratch at about 1:03. =D keep it up

not trying to offend, just some constructive criticism: if you're serious about your music, you definitely want to spend more time then 10 minutes on it.

i definitely recognize the use of fl studio haha. sytrus makes that bass sound and i remember the vocal thing "This is a dangerous gro... uh groups that we're dealing with." i think your beat needs some compression. it will add definition. and maybe define a more constant hit pattern. im not knocking innovation, if thats what your going for, im just saying the beat definitely doesn't fit too well with the dnb genre. other than that try not to do all the mastering on the master channel in fl, it can cause that tracks to bleed together which is what joker666 is talking about (everything sounds like it is coming from a single source). again im not trying to insult, just trying to give some constructive criticism. hope i helped =]

yes that was so awesome. i friggin loved it. love the mc. theres a synth sound i really like that comes in later in the song. i need to go work on some dnb tracks now haha

i like it. although theres some things in it i guess i could say are not really my taste. like what sounds to me like some reversed and panned cymbal sounds. and the drums could use a little more punch. but the synths and pads are excellent. they sound amazing. makes me want to get an R3 =P

good work keep it up

this is pretty friggin awesome. great mix. what do you use for the drums?

nice the guitar sounds cool with the beat. but i would work on mixing / mastering. try turning everything down quite a bit to fix what to me sounds like a bit of clipping in the low mid frequency range. maybe pan the hat, and that synth-ish piano sound. and throw a limiter on the master channel to bring everything back up again. also its a bit repetitive, i'd spend some time working on fills and drops. other than that really great for your first beat man. keep it up.

i like it. i like the choice of drum hits. everything flows pretty well together especially enjoyed the beat. anyway nice work. keep it up

this one is great. i love all the loops you used. theres a nice feel to it and then the detuned distorted sounds that come in about midway through the track gave it a nice change. definitely a great track. good work =D

this was nice and chill. i like it. i do think the beat could use some work, but thats a matter of taste. overall really cool track. you gunna get an mc on it?

this song is awesome man. it sounds perfect for road trips no sh*t. so mellow and happy and damn good audio engineering at that. i would like some details on it though:
Did you record this in a bedroom studio or pay for studio time?
Is this your band? If so, what instrument(s) did you play or did you sing?
If not, what is your relationship with the band? (IE, manager, producer, etc)

just like to know what im hearing. get back to me =]

hey i just got cubase 5 as well! im loving it so far was able to make some sick dnb and trip hop beats with the new tools. anyway this song is sweet! im really diggin it.

i dont know much about how the different electronic genres are categorized but this tune is just cool in its own right. maybe you could help me to learn some of the genres and how they work (any part of the electronic genre doesn't exactly thrive in south texas, mostly its hip hop, rock and metal here)

dnb is mah favorite electronic genre. i love the nasty basses and the fast pace action. that said, this tune is pretty solid for something you put together really quickly. i cant say i have any criticisms except for maybe that the hat loop seems to stand out a bit too much. (especially when the beat picks up, it can be distracting) other than that i like it alot. awesome tune =]

this is really chill. love it. a little bland without an mc but other than that its awesome