this is a nice track too man you are a hit i like the way the hook is dubbed too
"Its dolawhite not no fu(kin john mayer" lol
come on cuz you killin my buzz !!!!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT
Dude this track is so tight I like the way you rap ,lmao at this like I said before dub your voice and it will sound a LOT better its already really tight all im telling you is dub it and it will sound a HELL OF A LOT BETTER (not that it sounds bad at all now!!) dude you are a hit I'd like to collab with you on some music I make tracks,play guitar,write and produce ( I also rap) but I'd rather be behind the scenes I have a whole lot more things that are not posted, songs I recorded for other people and 10 tracks on myspace www.myspace.com/openmindentertainment80 or seach myspace music for: SMP80 ..............keep in touch man
cool raps,nice punch-lines, I'm diggin it
I think you should do 4 dubs of your voice:2 tracks of the whole rap,1 track of "in and outs" (every other word typically rhyming words) and the 4th track ad libs which I did hear in there and they sounded good.Also I think the music track should be turned up a little or maybe the mids especially the snare/clap.....I have been recording people and producing for 10 years and thats basically how its done....if you do that to this track it will sound a lot more professional ...e-mail me the results (mp3) at: Shane71880@yahoo.com keep doin ur thing man
this track is really nice it reminds me of something I could hear Akon on or maybe T-pain and T.I. that would be tight!! keep em coming this is one of THE BEST BEATS I HEARD ON THIS SITE
Woah.... thats a huge comment family..... Thanks alot... I didnt think it was one of the best. but whatever u say! lol. Stay safe and loving music. Peace
I like this track to me it sounds like something you would score a film with.I think that would be awesome to hear this set to an action scene or something.
Nice Work,
SMP 80
I like this track it has a lot of feeling in it ...when you have time feel free to check out/download the track I posted and record on it but if you do record on it PLEASE SEND IT BACK TO ME IN A MP3 format to Shane71880@yahoo.com
man you did a good job with this song I like the voice on the 1st verse to me its kinda like a cross betweeen 2Pac, Biggie and rick ross nice nice sound man I love it
yea the first one was my dude Keyway then me I'm the second one "Shirt out of spider slik, pants made out of red monkey, shoe's out of gator skin, expection dude to quailty"
NICE NICE TRACK I LOVE THE RNB FEEL AND THE PIANo WORK IS SWEET....Check out the track I uploaded let me know what you think about it..
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"Its dolawhite not no fu(kin john mayer" lol
come on cuz you killin my buzz !!!!!!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT
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I think you should do 4 dubs of your voice:2 tracks of the whole rap,1 track of "in and outs" (every other word typically rhyming words) and the 4th track ad libs which I did hear in there and they sounded good.Also I think the music track should be turned up a little or maybe the mids especially the snare/clap.....I have been recording people and producing for 10 years and thats basically how its done....if you do that to this track it will sound a lot more professional ...e-mail me the results (mp3) at: Shane71880@yahoo.com keep doin ur thing man
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