This is 100% hip hop. You have a solid beat, and some bars, only thing different is your flow. It's unique, different. We need more unique stuff like this.
Ik we ain't exactly buddies but, I can't knock that THIS is extremely unique and different. Your flow seems slightly off beat but its not too much of an issue, it kinda fits the really odd rhythm. I can't even begin to say how dope this beat is, so I give you props man. Can't wait to hear the album.
Ahhh I see you are learning to read the description first so you can give relevant feedback lol. No hard feelings and yes, this time I did put work in on this track although it still is a "rough draft." The offbeat cadence was what I was going for on this one as I feel it's what the track called for in the spirit of originality and quirkiness. Thanks for stopping by and listening. Keep creating.
Can use some bass in some parts, not an 808 but a deep supersaw type bass with a LP filter and some movement. That would sound sick. Great work otherwise!
I'm simply giving my opinion about the track, the mixing and mastering is great with no doubt, but I'm giving my musical opinion. Don't be butthurt lmao.
Now im butthurt lol. You on my with the foolery lmfao! Stay focused bro. I make good music, you on my page spilling your emotions... wow. Please be done.
Kinda a stale flow, can be much more catchy. The writing is bland. But the beat, that shit is pretty heat fam. Although the one note does get a little over used, try adding more variation there.
Dang reading is fundamental. This is something I "threw together...to test my mixing skills." You criticizing the flow like I put in work on it or tried to get you to "cop it"or something smh.
mixing/mastering can use work, but besides that this is amazing in every way. Got a unqiue composition compared to a lot of other EDM tracks which is nice. Very upbeat music theory and in your face festival sound selection. I hope you finish and perfect this track, truly!
Thanks man, as embarrassing as it is I make my music in GarageBand so mastering isn't really good. soon I'm getting an upgrade now that I'm taking my music a bit more seriously so I hope my tracks sound clearer in the future.
I think your lead synth and drum selection could have been better, BUT the idea is really fucking amazing and could easily go viral if you changed some instruments out.
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