I still like it, but personally, I would leave the higher pitched voice on the intro out from 5 seconds to 12 seconds. That's just my opinion though. I do like the spoken word that you have after the intro, I think its great. You have such good vocals. Very nice job. Would you care to either post or e-mail your lyrics. I am having a little trouble understanding them. Not your fault, my ears sometimes can't pick vocals/lyrics out of songs. I just think it's a great track and once I read the vocals I'll beable to hear them. You've got a really really nice track here and I like it alot. Very nice job on everything. Take Care, Gord
Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
I really like this track. I think your vocals are super. Nice beat to this track, Did something happen to your upload that it ends at 1:25? Hope there's more because this track has a great feel to it. Take it easy.
Gord
LOL No .. Nothing happened to the track.. I downloaded it this evening by Sumper01 and made the lyrics and sang to it this evening.. Before continuing tomorrow (today it is now here in DK) I just wanted Your opinions, before I used time and so on til fulfill and You know what? You made me so happy with Your so kind words to my vocals.. Thank You so much for that.. Now I will find my pillow and get some hours sleep .. Have a nice night ..
Hi Gord, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree, it is short, but I am without time to take this track, I'm finishing another. I intend to post a full version, but it will take some time. Thanks for listening and reviewed. .... VlaRB.
I find this to be a very emotional track. I picture a funeral procession of person who was a respected hero of sorts. War hero ? I also see a panning vision over a battle field after the battle and the devestation. Not a pretty picture in my mind. However very nice job of being able to put those images in my head. Take Care.
Gord
Man is that ever layed back. Love the horns. Guitar sounds great too.You've done a really crystal clear job with this. Maybe a little blues in there at times too eh? Very nice work.
Gord
Well, I think it's more then a bit of a rough start. I think if you keep heading the direction your going it'll turn out great cause it's already good. It's unique and that's what makes you wanna listen to it. Nice job.
Gord
Ya, I'm very suprised there aren't a pile of reviews on this track. You have very good vocals and lyrics again. Sounds very professional. I really like the percussion you've used. Flute fits beautiful. Geez man this really is a great track. Keep them coming, I'm liking what I'm hearing. This is the first track I think I've ever Fav'd.
Gord
Hey man, I've never been to your site before, I'm glad I dropped by. This is a very nice track with great lyrics and vocals. Nice job. Love the piano at the begining.
Gord
Very nice guys. Lots of emotion in this one. You guys work great together. Love the way it builds. Piano sounds great as well as the guitar. Beautiful mix. Another GREAT TRACK. Keep em coming.
Gord
Very nice track Vicen. I like it lots. You always have a very unique sound to your music (meant in a good way). This is a a real toe tapper. Nice job my friend.
Gord
You have great vocals and lyrics. The tech. stuff in your mixdown is very minor as was stated above. You have alot of talent in you and I enjoyed the listen. Keep on with your writing, singing and music your good at it.
Gord
Like the quick start. Caught my ear straight away. This is a very nice track with great guitar and percussion. You've do an excellent job in creating images in a persons head. I like that man. Keep up the great work. Again, love the percussion...
Gord
Thanks, man! I've been working on a couple of yours. Like the direction you give. Most guys just say "Here, do something with it". When I come up with something worth a listen, I'll let you know. Thanks again.
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Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
Is it okay with the lyrics now written to the song?, or is it too messy... Tried to make lines (enter...), but stands like that now ...
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Cool man, let me know which ones your working on??/?/
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