Hey, it's cool if you wanna switch back and forth and all, just .... don't kill my head-boppin groove with dropped beats. I should, as a listener be led from one genre to another - and for this piece your only link is beat.
You have many very cool and original sounds, but it feels like I'm listening to a radio bed demo for all the dropped beats. Give each one more time, and guide the listener to each genre. We are not all as free-flowing as you.
Again, kudos on so many distinct sounds. Develop this! I wanna hear!
i really appreciate the constructive criticism, thanks a lot :) so what i'm getting from this is...i need to make the song longer, by way of extending and combining beats with other sounds before i switch over rather than just transitioning quickly off into the softer music by itself. sound about right?
I think this tracks touches on what is wrong with us today. I think the 'germs' bit is repeated to much...though I catch what I thought you were saying about us being completely neurotic germs...you needn't repeat germs over and over, but also bring in, if possible, some of the other things he listed (subtle is a good thing). It's really amazing how rhythmic his original sound bit was, and it makes for a great track.
Made me feel like I was chillin' with you in a beautiful park. Wanted some lyrics to sing along :D (Well, probably just some oooh's and aaaah's to harmonize and not take away from the guit.)
Thank u.It's always so inportant to me to get the vocal and instruments in snyc.I'm really glad that comes across and I thank u for taking the time to listen and to comment.Thanks to Mr.I.Spy for an awesome instrumental to work with.I only hope my vocal does it justice!I spent many nights recording and re-recording this to try and get the feelings across.
Amazing -- I really appreciate how tight the arrangement is. It's no small thing to manage 24 tracks, keep it tight and coherent. This all blends very well. It's a lot of fun!
I'd love to hear this on the radio. Your vocals are excellent, and I'm a sucker for acoustic. I also love when a song changes - the rocking part is hot. The vocal effect you use at times (a low fidelity type) really drives it home.
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You have many very cool and original sounds, but it feels like I'm listening to a radio bed demo for all the dropped beats. Give each one more time, and guide the listener to each genre. We are not all as free-flowing as you.
Again, kudos on so many distinct sounds. Develop this! I wanna hear!
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That's just imho! I really enjoyed this one!
on Acoustic Tap by ChrisHall
Made me feel like I was chillin' with you in a beautiful park. Wanted some lyrics to sing along :D (Well, probably just some oooh's and aaaah's to harmonize and not take away from the guit.)
Come join me in the park the weather is beautiful!
Thanks for the review and listeing..il check your tracks out too :)
Chris
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on Untitled As Yet by teejay
Will be a while as I need to write lyrics, but I have a tune that sounds neat.
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Way to go!
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Well Done!
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I just wanted to sit back on a beach lounger and sip pretty drinks with mini-umbrellas while watching the sunset.
Very nice!
I'm relatively new to this, as far as music goes anyway...what's your setup? I like the sound and feel of your drums. Whatcha use?