the beat is great, you have great "space" in the synth pads, I could almost visualize it with a military group going to action through like a desert canyon or something. especially around 2;56-3;10. and then the transition was quite unexpected (I'm no expert in garage) and then the funk at the end was sweet.
so I can see that you are a adventurous. my only constructive criticism would be that there was a common theme riff melody that all these elements came back to, especially the dubby and funky tail end. great work!
I don't know if If I know a whole lot about the garage sound but I think you got the texture right and it was very moody. I personally would have liked something to stand out a little more, in and then out again -- like the kick drum.
I like the FX-y growl on the upper registers very much. the whole thing is "glued/gelled" very well! Some of the lead is pushed too far back in the mix, bring them forward, and they won't compete with the FX growl ( I don't know what else to call it). Overall, really noice.
I like EDM and I understand the time and place for repetitive riffs. I like the core melody that's going on here, and I like the way you staged the risers and releases (in the song structure itself, I mean), I really do.
I just needed something a little more risky, that still keeps the upbeat/euphoric mood going. but overall, solid production.
the opening sets the mood really well, the transitions are smooth yet very different -- gives the track a real nice sense of progress -- when you're trekking up the range, you want to feel like you're not stuck in one place. around 2:30-3:00 the "weight" drops off a bit, almost took me out of the feel, but you brought it back nicely around 3;15 and onwards...Bravo. Peaks and valleys, huh? This would be great for accompanying a nature video/documentary!
Yes...peaks and valleys...haha...you got it right!:) I'm very gratefull for this comprehensive feedback and glad that you found some value in this work! Thanks alot !!
on Cold War 2 by srichard
so I can see that you are a adventurous. my only constructive criticism would be that there was a common theme riff melody that all these elements came back to, especially the dubby and funky tail end. great work!
on Shoegaze Demo 2 by T0ASTYY
I like the FX-y growl on the upper registers very much. the whole thing is "glued/gelled" very well! Some of the lead is pushed too far back in the mix, bring them forward, and they won't compete with the FX growl ( I don't know what else to call it). Overall, really noice.
on Insight by AviatOfficial
I just needed something a little more risky, that still keeps the upbeat/euphoric mood going. but overall, solid production.
Glad you liked it.
Well I got what you said by more risky. I will try to add more energy after the first section/drop.
Once again thanks for listening :)
on In The Grip Of Himalaya by Orlando51
With appreciation______Orlando