I loved the track. Wish there was an intro though. Its hard to critique a track sometimes when u have no idea how it was produced. was this a mix or a production?
Nice n catchy man. Sounds like an innovative experiment that i would try. I'm really curious with your other tracks. I'm heading over there now. Excellent job. Love ur pic by the way. Hey i would love to do a remix of this. Do u have the vocals tracked out so i can layer and chop em up. I think thats what this track needs is some restructuring of the vocals and some chop shop tactics with the beats. I'll deliver it straight 2 u if u would like. If u like it then load it up. I think ud be surprized with my remix skills. Metal sharpens metal
U wernt very safe on this track, lol, i guess thats an inside joke 4 just u and I. very outside the box though WOW. I'm proud of u. amazing structure. Not that i'm anyone but u have come a long way. I could learn a lot from u.
i aint anyone really myself when it comes to production been on a self learning course for about 2 years, but have loads of friends in the industry which is where i get my inspiration and eagorness to spend the doe and try!!
but anything u want to know just ask and il try help with the limited knowledge i know!!
thanks for commenting, even though it was probably about a year ago u left this message lol
soz for late reply!!
tc
Your really good at layering. I like peeling away more than anything though. I've kinda made and art form of it. I love the volume fades and attacks. I'm not sure if u did it or if the sample was recorded like that but good job none the less. I really loved it, did i say i Loved It. yeah i loved it. LOL
The mix is realy interesting and catchy with a real fat break down type of beat. I just think u could do way more with it. I thik u should remix the remix. Maybae call it X-FILES remix squarred, only cuz i don't have a little tiny raised 2.I hope ur not offended it seems like a rough draft.
i know i left a silly comment b 4 but u did a good fuckn job bro. Just knowing that u made all that shit, and im not discrediting sample and loop based producers by any means,cuz im one of them, but the facts make the overall production a little more desirable. Im gonna call u the sleeping giant cuz im waiting 4 amazing things 2 happen. yeah im weird but the who the fuck isn't........
im laughn just cuz its entertaining and a lot of the liks are true and by liks I mean lyriks. It sounds like your making love to your pure strain whatever ur smokn or lickn or stikn, i cant tell i cant tell if ur fuckn or smokn but im laughn outloud in fact, LLLLLOOOOOOOLLLLLLL!!!!!!Very passionate individual i must say. I hope u get my personality and aren't pissed off im just being rediculous and no im not drinking out of a brandy sifter and smoking a cubin cigar. Im just havn fun with your cutt!!! Good Job Partna.....
another classic example of typing while im nodding, freestyle flowing while the beat is rockn the high hat tic toc-n the bass line groovn and im findn it shockn u need more reviews cuz this jam just aint stopn excellent arrangement and they all should be flockn
It seems as though u have a lot of constructive criticism from other members...I just want to tell u that i dont think anyone who is human,considering they actually took the time to listen, could ever b the same. The sequence of sounds that u created enabled all of us participants to travel with u 4 a moment and enter a world that we might have never known if we chose not to. Thank You for that lasting impression.................!
Love the crisp clean sounds in the begining, sometning wierd happens though and the beats end up off. Love the vocals; very nice recordoring of those. Curious to hear the finished product.
oh yes! lol, off for sure
but thanks for the vox comment. i'm more of a singer than a beat maker :)
i don't think this song will be given any further consideration unless i find a great producer who's willing to give it a shot ;) ciao!
Love the peacfull ambient rhythms that lead the track till the beat drops. Great beat selection,Kinda slow step jazz. U can tell that something was going on in ur life when u put this 2gether.I hope im not degrading your track but, I actually watch a lot of CSI and "The Mentalist"rocks. This cutt reminds me of an emotional scene where they would have used a song like this.Honestly it sounds just great on my "Rokit" KRK 5's....
Wow, thanks dude, really really appreciate it and you know what, I never looked at it that way but I definitely agree with you. The Mentalist is phenominal and yes, I was going through something in my life but Im sure you know what that may have been seeing what we have spoken about through email. By the way, your not degrading my track at all, you've actually given me a proper review. Thanks again Beanut, your the f-ing man !
I liked it after the intro. The hats that changed pitch were creative too.I realy didn't care for the main sounds that carried the whole track through though. The sequencing and the beats were propper. It was creative and u definitely were thinking outside the box.
I'm so irritated with the truth; people lie when its more convienient and i understand that;;;;;;but i wont! It is obvious that the u used a less than perfect beat with off timing that killed your production. It was ok, coulda been amazing but u settled 4 less. This is the same type of review i just gave to an unfortuante producer who setteled 4 a half asss outcome...Dont get all excited cuzz i do the same thing,,,,we all do. Its in our nature to settle 4 a less than adequate self portrait!!!!Just learn to not make a habbit of it....K..
Ummm... dude, I hate to break it to you but I am not going to freak out on you. If that's what you want it's not what you'll get. Guess what? This is like the 6th song I've done without help from anyone AND it was experimental. When you experiment with tracks it tends to make them less than perfect... and to be honest "perfect" is different by each person's standards. I am happy with this, simply because it worked for me at the time. The beat was a sample, and I wanted the glitch that was in it in the song. If you don't like it, fine. That's your opinion. This was simply an experiment and another step in learning to use a program, so please get your bloody panties out of a bunch? You were more upset by this review than I was lol.
I realy am impressed with your talent and aggrevated with listeners who neglect being active with responses, reguardless of positive or negative. They must b sleeping cuz i couldn't wait 2 leave a review. I love the build up and drumm roll. Very catchy and inovative. It could have been longer but no need 2 beat around the bush...It is what it is..."Incomplete" I'll b waiting 4 the final cutt!!
U should have many mooore reviews and props..Like Goldie from the 3... shes got the key 2 the locks. I'm not Jewish but graphed in 2 the family that ROCKS!!!The CHOSEN speak up when the boat begins 2 sway and he stops...the destruction of the winds and u know that it topps...The parting of the sea when the Pharoh was lost...swallowed swept away and he gambled and lost... Israel will prevail always hard and not soft... fed by the "Mana" in the desert they crossed.crossed.crossed...!
Beanut, crazy shit man ... thanks, you turned your review into a verse and man, let me tell you, record that shit with another verse or 2 and I'll make a special beat just for it, Seriously. That email you sent man, I'll reply to that a little later and yeah, I've got a banger waitin to be uploaded because of that new upload rule of 5 a week, well for some reason it said I was 8 over 5, huh ? okay ... so I figured I have to wait 4 days. Oh well. J DOT ~ 2006
Love the intro and how things come 2gether but thats all they do. Sounds like a meal prepared in layers like lazanya. How in the hell do u spell "&*^%$#" anyway. Thats what u should seriously consider calling this track. "LAZANYA"
Thanks man. I feel like I haven't really finished yet. When the next version is done, I might just call it that, haha. LAZANYA (The Full Course Track).
Not 2 b a half naked man but the only thing that it said 2 me was editing samples is much more important than the device we use 2 lewer the suckers in on. AKA a "Half Naked Woman" yeah I'm a dick sometimes, but only cuz I can b. Just b careful about introducing an untangible item through a tangible item which ='s sight introduced by sound. The cover vs content.The body Vs the mind. Long story short the track needs some work...If the picture is u though,,,,hit me up. "beanut@mail.com"...I have a bunk bed at my apt. I'm actually a realy nice guy who calls it like i see it...............!I hitch-hiked and traveled 4, 10 yrs but i conformed!i always have a couple of rooms open and i love to cook 4 my guests. If u want 2, u csn help and know what ur doing
Not bad not my forte. It def made me horny and want to EAT some @&$$+ and #@&% some hott chick. I just finished a track with a different style of hip hop, check it if ya want. Metal sharpens metal ladies. It's called DEATH STARR. I'll stay tuned for ur next cutt.
Man what is that a six head? cuz it sho aint a 4 head. just fuckn with ya. U gotta xpect that makn dnb. Very trancy and not what i like. It was ok though, keep working on it brotha.
Finally a real HIP Hop track that i managed to listen to for more than 20 sec. Your vocals rocked, u have a the sound of a performer thats for sure. Look forward for more stuff. later...
I downloaded this to let my peeps check it.
Thanks dude. I'm starting to get comfortable finally on what direction I wanna go. I've been experimenting for a year or so now and was kind of lost on what the hell I was musically. I may of found my niche finally. Dunno tho, we'll see. I'll hit u up with the Fixtape when it's done tho.
Hey it's been a minute since we chatted. I realy like how your to the point and tell us how it is. It sounds like u were having lots of fun. Did u use Ableton to bring the layers in. I love dancing to this kind of minimal jazzy house, lots of little bits of toe tapping footwork. I just sat back and responded to the progression, yeah i was groovn.... all by myself. I think your plan worked perfectly. LOl.
Hi Beanut
Its great to here from you again every time i see that avatar it brings a smile to my face.
yes I was using Ableton just fired some loops into the session view and started playing them with my mouse I also had 4 scenes i was just clicking on and off not the right way to go about it I suppose but its good just for a jam and a bit of fun.
Thanks for your review and positive comments we obviously have some similiar tastes in music.
Regards
Krook
I'm amazed, intimitdated, inspired, and challenged! Loved so many things about the production, it would be rediculous to list them all. U just reset the bar.
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but anything u want to know just ask and il try help with the limited knowledge i know!!
thanks for commenting, even though it was probably about a year ago u left this message lol
soz for late reply!!
tc
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i don't think this song will be given any further consideration unless i find a great producer who's willing to give it a shot ;) ciao!
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Its great to here from you again every time i see that avatar it brings a smile to my face.
yes I was using Ableton just fired some loops into the session view and started playing them with my mouse I also had 4 scenes i was just clicking on and off not the right way to go about it I suppose but its good just for a jam and a bit of fun.
Thanks for your review and positive comments we obviously have some similiar tastes in music.
Regards
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