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Brilliant track! I love all the glitchiness of this track! All of the variation throughout this track is great as well. My favorite parts are probably around 45 seconds and 1:10. It sounds like there's some sort of reversed percussion, maybe a kick drum that fits perfectly into the rhythm. Also the sound that comes in at 1:10 is just amazing!

I think this is cool! Definitely some weird sounds here but it's sound great to me!

Dang man! This is intense!

Ya I would love to have the project files if you don't mind. You can send them to gabrielpotter618@gmail.com
Thanks so much!

This is golden man! Lyrics are tight, flow is on point, and beat is perfect. Can't wait for a great hook and third verse!

Interesting fact! Never would have known that otherwise. The track is great as well. I love the intricacies of the beat as well as the panned noises. It all blends together very well with the nice chill vibe. Well done!

First off, welcome to the community! This is quite a brilliant track! I can't wait to begin making this kind of music once I get fl studio soon. I just hope I can make stuff this good because this is so amazing! Keep it up and I hope to hear more from you soon!

Oh my goodness this is great! Please don't give up on this, it's way too dope!

Dope song! Great lyrics man! Love the raw, vulnerable feeling to this. Beat is minimal but fits well with your rap. Love the piano. When I heard the piano in the beginning it sounded just like a song by my favorite rapper NF called real. Keep up the great work!

I'm no professional at mixing but I'll give you a few tips to try out. First off, mixing takes time and you may struggle for a while trying to figure out what sounds need to be louder or quieter. It's especially hard when you have a loud, full track like this. What I like to do is start with one sound that is a primary component of the song, such as the main melody, and solo that track in the mix. Get the melody to an appropriate volume. Then, add one more component into the mix, maybe the main chord progression. Mess around with the volume of the chord progression until you find a volume level that seems to compliment your main melody. Continue like this, one slow step at a time, until you get through all of the components of the track.
Also, try panning certain elements to the right or left of your headset. Panning is a great way to emphasize certain elements without turning up the volume.
Finally, like thrilledburst mentioned, you can always look up mixing tutorials on youtube. I'm sure it'll be worth trying. Hope this helps!

Dang man! Love the passion you put into the lyrics! Try to work on your flow and make it a little more consistent and maybe you could go somewhere with this!

Nice track! The intro is pretty cool but the highlight of the track for me was definitely the intricate percussion. That was nuts! Well done! I could listen to this all day it's so addictive.

Pretty sick beat man! I would suggest changing some of the mix a little bit, mainly raise the volume of the 808's and maybe the orchestral hits or whatever that it is in the background. Overall nice beat tho!

Nice melodies you have here! There are some mixing problems though, primarily I would really lower the volume of the drums.

Great track! This has a nice big room feel to it which I love! The melodies are all great as well. Yes there's definitely some mixing work that needs to be done as you mentioned. Mainly the effects need to quieted and the main melody could be a little stronger, maybe some layering as well. Gonna be a great track though!

Straight fire! I really enjoyed all of the energy and variation in this. Those are some of my weaknesses but you did a fantastic job with this beat!

This is pretty dope! One thing I would do is cut out everything right before the drop. I noticed that the melody kept going and the rise effects didn't stop until basically right before the drop. I would either cut out everything before the drop or just leave the piano melody sort of how the original is. Otherwise, how you have it now there's not a real difference between the build and drop and it makes the drop sound weaker because there's not much more energy than during the build. I would suggest maybe leaving the piano melody how it is but for the last two notes cut out everything else.

This so cool! It's like a blend of so many genres all at one time and yet it sounds good. Well done!

Sounds dope! Can't wait for the full, finished version!

This is brilliant! Beat is so dope and the drop is crazy good! Kamoflage's rapping is on point as always! Who's the rapper towards the end of the track, cuz that was some fire as well!

Wow I can't even explain how amazing this is! My favorite song I've heard on this site by far! This is unbelievable! Keep it up man!

This definitely has some potential. However, I would suggestion adding some sort of melody, even if it was just a simple chord pattern.

Wow, wow so beautiful! What an amazing voice you have! Keep it up man!

Amazing song! Vocal chops are pretty cool and something I'm still tryin' to get the hang of but you used them well for sure. The horn-ish instrument that comes in during the breakdown and build is beautiful! This could be a huge hit if you find a great singer!(not that it isn't great already ;)

Nice chill vibes! I enjoyed the listen! Guitar sounded great. I also liked the change at 1:20.