Lvino

A work of art my man! You definitely are one of better artists i've come across here on looperman for quite a while. Love it!

You look a bit pale in your picture, but you sure know how to produce dancemusic :-)

Nice composition and good variation in there. Yep, I'm gonna listen to it again now!

You have skills my man. Probably the best instrumental electronic track I've heard so far here on looperman. Love the guitars ;-)

This is crazy man, you definitely killed it with this one. It's fresh, smooth and you've got great flow. Can't wait to get my hands on some of your acapellas ;-)

Again great job man, keep it up!

Alicia who? This is simply amazing. Very well done, i'm a fan ;-)

You hit the spot with this one my man. Great job!!

I have only one comment..

The track is too short, I'm enjoying it alot and then it runs out.. Well I'll just have to play it again i guess :-)

Great job by your son!!

Now this is something different. I like the guitar looped and overall feel of the track. You should check out some acapella's her on looperman and try adding some vocals yourself. If you came so far, why not try and finish this track yourself?

Again great job man!

Nice one bro, love the strings!!

Simply perfect, nothing to say just enjoyed it. Great job man!!

Hey man, very strong arrangement!! I do think philosofist's vocals don't really fit in right now. I know his vocals to have great flow and in this track that doesn't come out.

I don't know what DAW you're using, but with Ableton you have a great feature called warping. You could make them fit more nicely with it.

Gr.

L

Hey bro, you definitely know what you're doing. You got some mad skills. Really like your stuff!

whoah, this is really something! You got some great ideas put into this track. The only thing it needs is some serious vocals and it's good to go. Like it!

Brilliant layed back track man! I must say this is not what I expected with your artistname, but great job :-)

Hey man, I just also finished a track with this pella from Farisha. I must say I like what you did to it. I can tell you really "felt" her vocals. Good job!

Gr.

L

Actually kinda brilliant track, only thing is that it needs some serious mastering. For example If you'd tone done those hihats and bring them beautiful strings to the front it would make the track a lot more attractive. Would check the vocals as well, a little reverb does wonders. Beside the levels, very well done!!

Haha, great fun. Actually well put together also when you take a closer listen past the fabulous chorus :-)

Well done!

L

Nice one bro, really like the way you manipulated the vocals. I actually just used a small part from this Farisha acapella on a new track. Check it out when you get the chance.

Well done this one!

L

Great track! Very nice style and interesting building of the track. The only remark I have is that you could check the vocals in the chorus. They seems a little too present. Try playing with the eq, compression or levels. Other then that, good job man!

L

Nice arrangement, but I would turn that autotune down a notch. Most times it does more harm then good. At least I think so. I can feel that you put your hart in it though :-) Great lyrics, but maybe you can spice up your vocals another more original way. Hope she liked it anyways :-)

Keep it up!

Gr.

Lvino

I hope you paint as well as you make music, cause this is very well done. Too bad the track on here is so short, I love it anyway.

Cheers!

Gr.

Lvino

Hi man,

If this is your first attempt at this genre I would definitely advise you to (please) keep make more of it. Great arrangement, stunning synth work and well mixed down. I'm a fan :-)

Whoah, respect for bringing this story to the loopermantable.
Musicwise I like the simple but yet effective arrangement. Vocals and story told definitely impress, bit of a dutch accent of course, but that's ok. Quality often comes from those lowlands I tell you :-)

Keep it up, i'll check out more of your tracks.

Cheers,

L

Very well produced and your vocals are right on Stephanie i must say. This ones a fave for me. I'll also check out the rest of your stuff.

I would definitely like to take a crack at some of your vocals. Could you upload some versions without the added fx?

Anyways again well done :-)

Gr.

L

Hey man,

First of all I must say I really like the arrangement. I think it's a shame your vocals don't come out very clearly making it sounding kinda foggy or something. You should play around with a couple of techniques to mix down vocals in a track. I think there are a couple of loopermen/women on here that explain this in the forums. Just play around with them (the techniques i mean :-) ) and you will be amazed how cool you can make your vocals sound.

Other then that, great job!

Gr.

Lvino